Talk:Gerald Goodfellow

Suggest rewrite of first paragraph to correct implication that Gen. Goodfellow is a pilot. The 4th and 5th sentences use the phrase "has flown" and the word "flew" in a way that imply he was at the controls.

Suggest the 4th sentence be rewritten to read: "Goodfellow has flown as a crew member aboard a wide variety of military aircraft, but primarily the B-1 Bomber."

Suggest the 5th sentence be rewritten to read: "In 1995, Goodfellow served as [Offensive Systems Officer?] on a non-stop flight around the world that set two world records."2601:603:4A80:760F:527E:82A9:B61F:8405 (talk) 00:01, 3 March 2018 (UTC)