Talk:Gerald Tailfeathers

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 6 January 2020 and 13 March 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Zachdotlee. Peer reviewers: Lasonchang.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 21:46, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

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Hey sorry i didn't realize it was due today at noon, gimme a bit after class and i'll get it done, sorry again.

Alright so one first scroll of your article, it has a lot of content, which I think is really good. I'm gonna assume you got a pretty high score on the rough draft so I don't think there's much I can say there. I know with my artist there's hardly any information but you seem to have enough to create a good article. I can't really make much comment on your content because you have enough but I can suggest some formatting things I prefer. For starters I think you can either rename the heading thats titled "Gerald Tailfeathers" or simply remove it and have it act as like an intro sentence to your article. I also think you can combine the "artworks" and "art style" headings under one large heading and change those two to sub-headings. I think for each work of art too you should also add a subheading so its easier for readers to distinguish among his works, especially because we aren't allowed to have pictures to help with the distinction. Finally, I think you can combine the "exhibits" and "post-humous exhibitions" headings into one large heading and just create a subheading for "posthumous exhibitions". Besides that, I like the article. There's a good amount of content and although formatting is personal and subjective, I gave some suggestions. The only other thing I can comment on is that you don't have many exhibitions or collections listed but I'm assuming because you can't find anymore so I think it's fine. Lasonchang (talk) 20:48, 25 February 2020 (UTC)

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thanks! I enjoyed reading Tailfeather's biography. I made some changes to the citations. I was unable to find a source for the Honorary degree at Lethbridge, but just found it at https://www.uleth.ca/sites/default/files/2019/10/uofl_honorary_degree_recipients_oct_2019.pdf I'll add that back in..

Vexations (talk) 17:51, 20 March 2020 (UTC)