Talk:German destroyer Z13 Erich Koellner

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Hi, this looks pretty good. I have a couple of observations/suggestions as part of my B class review:
 * in the infobox it says "Ordered: 9 January 1935", but in the prose it says "ordered on 10 November 1934";
 * in the Design and description section, you might consider adding a sentence on the size of the complement, given that it is mentioned in the infobox;
 * the final paragraph doesn't seem to state whether or not the ship sunk, but the infobox states that the ship did;
 * "Groener" in the Notes "Gröner" in the References;
 * "Lieutenant Commander (Fregattenkapitän) Schulze-Hinrichs had decided" (this doesn't seem to indicate who Schulza-Hinrichs is or was - I assume he was the ship's captain? If so, it should probably be stated with a small clause, e.g. "Lieutenant Commander (Fregattenkapitän) Schulze-Hinrichs, the ship's captain, had decided"). AustralianRupert (talk) 04:49, 18 May 2011 (UTC)