Talk:German destroyer Z51/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 00:45, 8 November 2017 (UTC)

Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 00:45, 8 November 2017 (UTC)


 * I am confused with the article title. Is this article about a ship or a class. The first line of the lead speaks as if it is about a class, where as the later part says this is about a ship. Again, infobox is about class of ship. And the body is also confusing in that way. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 10:26, 15 November 2017 (UTC)
 * It is a class that only possessed one ship; so the name of the article is the name of the ship, as per WP norm (unless they are part of a class which was supposed to have dozens of ships, but only had one laid down, and the rest cancelled, or some other extreme.) I'll make that more clear. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  14:44, 15 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Lead and infobox;
 * Italics on "Kriegsmarine"
 * 1943–?
 * Link units and armaments in infobox
 * Section 1;
 * Italics on "Kriegsmarine"
 * Link "two-stroke", "diesel engine"
 * was modified heavily; from which? the original design? Did it have complications that would delay the construction?
 * From the original design; if I recall correctly it was hinted that the engines would take too long to build, since almost all naval resources were focused on U-boats at this time. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  15:50, 21 November 2017 (UTC)
 * "the only ship of the class to be laid down"; this has already been mentioned in the para 1
 * RM? It is never defined before, if it is the currency define it in braces on the first mention
 * Her breaking up was finished on "in" February 1949
 * Section 2;
 * Link "motor pinnace", "torpedo cutter", "anti-aircraft gun"
 * Be consistent on using the conversion template; 108 metres, 12.7-centimetre; check usage of hyphen
 * Also abbreviate the units from second mention
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 04:02, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
 * I believe I have done all you have asked.
 * Do you have any more concerns? -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  23:32, 25 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Section 2;
 * Link "motor pinnace", "torpedo cutter", "anti-aircraft gun"
 * Be consistent on using the conversion template; 108 metres, 12.7-centimetre; check usage of hyphen
 * Also abbreviate the units from second mention
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 04:02, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
 * I believe I have done all you have asked.
 * Do you have any more concerns? -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  23:32, 25 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 04:02, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
 * I believe I have done all you have asked.
 * Do you have any more concerns? -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  23:32, 25 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Do you have any more concerns? -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  23:32, 25 November 2017 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 01:45, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 01:45, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 01:45, 26 November 2017 (UTC)