Talk:German nationalism in Austria/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MrWooHoo (talk · contribs) 19:15, 29 December 2014 (UTC)

Will be starting review ASAP! Brandon (MrWooHoo) • Talk to Brandon!  19:15, 29 December 2014 (UTC)

Pre-Review Notes
I review GA's with a "main review" then a prose+source review following it. This article is a good example.

Prose Review
Note: If you have changed the sentence that needed to be corrected, press Enter and start off the line with, then use ✅ or ✅ If the change was only partially done use, and or ❌ if the change could not occur. (If you would explain why, I would be greatly appreciated :P) To see code, go to edit source and copy the code.

"several political parties and groups have express pan-German nationalist sentiment."
 * Lead
 * Change express to expressed.

"and anti-clerical policies, in an attempt entrench the German ethnic identity."
 * During the imperial period
 * Add to after attempt.
 * Are we going to use the serial comma or not? I see one example of it not being used: "This manifesto was signed by the radical German nationalist Georg von Schönerer, Vienna's populist, pro-Catholic and royalist mayor Karl :Lueger" and then I see it being used: "His radical racist German nationalism was especially popular amongst the well-educated intelligentsia: professors, grammar school teachers', and students."
 * I always use the Oxford comma, myself, so I've converted that sentence. RGloucester  — ☎ 19:55, 29 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I always use the Oxford comma, myself, so I've converted that sentence. RGloucester  — ☎ 19:55, 29 December 2014 (UTC)

"He demanded the annexation of all German-speaking territories of Austria-Hungary to the Prussian-led German Empire, and rejected any form of Austrian pan-ethnic identity."
 * "comma and" is used only when the 2nd sentence is a full sentence, not a clause. Remove the comma before and.


 * Dissolution of Austria-Hungary (1918–1919)
 * No issues.


 * During the First Republic and Austrofascist period (1919–1938)
 * No grammar/prose issues.


 * During the Second Republic (since 1945)
 * No grammar/prose issues.

Source Review

 * Checklinks wasn't working, so I hand checked them and there are no dead links! Great job maintaining sources!

Comments
I've tagged the images with the appropriate public domain tags. RGloucester — ☎ 20:02, 29 December 2014 (UTC)