Talk:German submarine U-111 (1940)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ucucha 16:43, 3 July 2010 (UTC)


 * I don't like the idea of having a picture of a different ship as the lead image. I think it would be better to put it further down in the article. Also, the image has two different captions.
 * Moved.-- White Shadows There goes another day 18:40, 3 July 2010 (UTC)


 * Did she really get in ten days from Brazil to Northern Ireland?
 * Yes she did. Take a look at her patrol page on Uboat.net for a day by day position of her in the Atlantic if you'd like.-- White Shadows There goes another day 18:40, 3 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Actually, that one shows the second ship to have been sunk somewhere off Brazil, not near Belfast. Ucucha 18:55, 3 July 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry, I misinterpreted your question. I've fixed that to say Brazil instead of Belfast.-- White Shadows There goes another day 19:20, 3 July 2010 (UTC)

Overall, good work; I made some copyedits to improve the prose and remove repetition. Ucucha 16:43, 3 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Ref. 9 needs to be properly formatted.
 * Done.-- White Shadows There goes another day 19:17, 3 July 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the fixes, I'm passing the article now. Ucucha 19:23, 3 July 2010 (UTC)