Talk:German submarine U-47 (1938)/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.'' A few comments:
 * All or none in the lede.
 * I added a few more citations in the lead if that's what you mean. If not, can you be a bit more specific?-- White Shadows you're breaking up 01:14, 4 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Yes, that is what I meant. Sorry I was unclear.
 * You might try rearranging the two pictures that are next to one another in the first few patrol sections. If you can't find better placement, it's not a big deal.
 * I've spread the images around in the article.-- White Shadows you're breaking up 01:14, 4 April 2010 (UTC)
 * It looks much better now.
 * A reference and some explanation on the solitary note would be nice.
 * I've removed the ship from the list of ships hit by U-47. There is no evidence that the two vessles even met each other.-- White Shadows you're breaking up 01:14, 4 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Alright.
 * "...all of whom are presumed dead." "Were" presumed dead might make a bit more sense in this context.
 * Done.-- White Shadows you're breaking up 01:14, 4 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Okay.
 * Can you add anything more to the infobox?
 * I;ve expanded the infobox a bit. If there still needs to be more changes to it, just ask.-- White Shadows you're breaking up 01:14, 4 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Another GA.

Those are all see from a my first read through. Reviewer: Lәo(βǃʘʘɱ) 20:06, 3 April 2010 (UTC)