Talk:German torpedo boat T30/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gog the Mild (talk · contribs) 09:09, 14 June 2019 (UTC)


 * "(or 60 if the weather was good)" Very enigmatic, and cries out for an explanation. (Personally I wouldn't put it in brackets, but your call.)
 * See how it reads now.
 * "and various FumB radar detectors were installed late in the war" Was this fitted to this particular ship?
 * Uncertain, the records of the electronic and light AA suites for these ships seem only to have survived piecemeal.
 * "when T30 struck a pair of mines about 00:25" Optional: 'at about 00:25'.

That's all I've got. Nice. Gog the Mild (talk) 19:34, 15 June 2019 (UTC)
 * All done. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:24, 16 June 2019 (UTC)