Talk:Get Carter/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:52, 30 May 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:52, 30 May 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead
(template rules).
 * The "short description" goes above everything (MOS:ORDER).
 * Add alt text for the film poster (WP:ALTTEXT).
 * Use plainlists instead of
 * Is the reference after Ian Hendry necessary?
 * Same question for the one at the end of the 1st paragraph.
 * See MOS:'S for when to use 's instead of s'.
 * "home town" "hometown"
 * Shouldn't "north-east England" be written as North East England?
 * There are now 2 short descriptions.

Plot and cast

 * Plot is exactly 700 words so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
 * Add a comma after "At the funeral".
 * "under water" "underwater"
 * "for audition" "for auditions"

Production

 * "which explored this freedom" "that explored this freedom"
 * "MGM agreed a reasonable" "MGM agreed to a reasonable"
 * Is there a word missing between "agreeing the deal"?
 * Is the comma after "early 2008" necessary?
 * Can we change all uses of "..." to "[...]" for consistency?
 * Again, should "north east" be capitalized?
 * "by the producer" "from the producer"
 * #Post-production feels kinda small. Can it be merged with another section?
 * Other than that, everything else looks good.

Releases

 * This section is normally titled "Release".
 * "tag-line" "tagline"
 * "pump action shotgun" "pump-action shotgun"
 * Add a comma after "in the finished film".
 * "Warner Brothers, copyrighted 2001" sounds weird. Reword?

Reception

 * Try paraphrasing per WP:RECEPTION.
 * That's about everything in this section.

Remakes and legacy

 * "which are directly borrowed" "that are directly borrowed"
 * The last sentence in the first paragraph in #Legacy needs a source.