Talk:Get Rich or Die Tryin'/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Retrohead (talk · contribs) 08:33, 11 July 2014 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * Features then-newcomers Young Buck, Lloyd Banks and Tony Yayo→they were coming from where?
 * Can we move the references to the article's body? (the sales and certifications cites)
 * Can we move "at the 46th Grammy Awards" right after "for a Grammy Award for Best Rap Album"?
 * Do we have a more accurate date for the album's recording? It certainly wasn't recorded the entire 2002, was it?
 * The "gangsta rap" genre is sourced with what?
 * Overall, the prose in the lead is exceptionally well written.


 * Background
 * Can we expand the section with information about the reason he was shot?
 * Is the mixtape Guess Who's Back? the one that should have been released with Columbia Records?
 * A recording can not be an album and a mixtape at the same time (third sentence).
 * You mention information about singles in this section, which shouldn't be the case according to the section's title.


 * Singles
 * Apart from the chart success, can you elaborate on the other aspects of the songs, such as videos or lyrical themes?


 * Commercial performance
 * Generally speaking, the section is not well researched compared to the album's commercial success. Can we find second week and worldwide sales?
 * I see we got information about the US sales as of July 2014, but the lead has an older number as of December 2013. Please update the number.


 * Critical reception
 * A page number is required for the claim that the record was "the most hyped rap debut".
 * Can you incorporate the Metacritic score in the table?
 * The accolades paragraph is not well researched either. You haven't mention the Grammy nomination nor the Rolling Stone rating. There are other accolades on this album for sure.


 * Non-prose sections
 * Please add a reference about the track listing (you can use the booklet if you have a copy).
 * You can use the certification table entry for the certifications.
 * Please be consistent with the reference formatting. References 2, 14, 15, 37, are not placed in a citation template. Ref number 17 and the second external link are not accessible. Also provide page numbers of the books you are citing in the bibliography.

I might start copy editing the article. I'll come back with additional notes once these are done.--Retrohead (talk) 09:15, 11 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks for this! I'll be a little busy this weekend, but I should be able to dig-in Monday. Harmelodix (talk) 21:26, 11 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Closing the review as failed due to the nominator's inactivity.--Retrohead (talk) 13:16, 16 July 2014 (UTC)