Talk:Get Sexy/GA1

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Reviewer: 1111tomica (talk · contribs) I will review the article:) 20:17, 17 January 2012 (UTC)


 * No dead links or disambiguation pages. That's good ! — Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * "Get Sexy" is a song by English girl group Sugababes, taken from the group's seventh studio album, ---> "Get Sexy" is a song by English girl group Sugababes, taken from their seventh studio album... (because there is repeating of the word group in the sentence)— Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
 * ✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)


 * It was written by Phillip Lawrence, Ari Levine, Bruno Mars, Fred Fairbrass, Richard Fairbrass and Rob ManzoliIt and produced by The Smeezingtons. ---> It was written by Fred Fairbrass, Richard Fairbrass, Rob Manzolilt, Phillip Lawrence, Ari Levine, Bruno Mars and produced by the latter three under their stage name The Smeezingtons.— Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
 * ✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)


 * The song was released on 31 August 2009 ---> The song was released on August 31, 2009.— Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
 * . Britain uses dd/mm/yy format. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Emil Nava and features the group's members in a house of mirrors, a bird cage and on a couch ... on a couch? I mean I don't find it necessary here. — Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
 * ✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Background and composition (merge the both sections since the composition one is too small to standing like that)
 * I have expanded the composition section, hopefully it is long enough now. Till I Go Home (talk) 01:04, 20 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Its okay. We can treat them like separate sections. — Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Its okay. We can treat them like separate sections. — Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)


 * In late-April ... remove the hyphen — Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
 * ✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)


 * "Get Sexy", which was selected as the album's lead single, was written by The Smeezingtons, Fred Fairbrass, Richard Fairbrass and Rob Manzoli.[3] It was produced by The Smeezingtons ... use the sentence from the lead.— Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
 * ✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)


 * No 6 July, 2009... July 6, 2009— Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
 * . Britain uses dd//mm//yy. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:23, 20 January 2012 (UTC)


 * again August 31, 2009— Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
 * . Britain uses dd//mm//yy. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:23, 20 January 2012 (UTC)


 * The song has been described as a "slamming dance anthem" ... Who described it? — Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
 * ✅. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Composition


 * Musicnotes.com is published by Sony/ATV Music Publishing. Change it in the text and the reference.— Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Maybe you can also reduce the repeating of the song in the section.— Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Critical reception
 * unlink Boom Boom Pow per OVERLINK— Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
 * David Balls of Digital Spy awarded ---> David Balls of Digital Spy gave— Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Commercial performance
 * Looks good


 * Music video
 * Some other primary information about the video? Which other music videos did Emil Nava direct? He has collaborate with the Babes before? Where was shot? Something? — Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
 * The video screenshot fails WP:NFCC. Remove it. — Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)


 * References

Mmm they are pretty bad condition. Here are the tasks: — Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)


 * 1. publisher=Hachette Filipacchi Médias
 * 2. The same as 1
 * 4. Same as 1 and 2
 * 5. Same as 1, 2 and 4
 * 6. Same us 1, 2, 4 and 5
 * 7 Un-italicize iTunes. publisher= Apple
 * 8 Un-italicize Discogs
 * 9. work=Daily Mail|publisher=Associated Newspapers Ltd
 * 10. Same as 1, 2, 4, 5 and 6
 * 11. You have the task in the composition review
 * 12. Same as 1, 2, 4, 5, 6 and 10
 * 13. work=Guardian|publisher=Guardian Media Group
 * 14. Same as 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 10 and 12
 * 15. Un-italicize Popjustice
 * 18. Same as the previous
 * 19. publisher=UK Singles Chart. The Official Charts Company
 * 20. Same as 19
 * 21. Same as 19 and 20
 * 22. publisher= MTV UK. Viacom
 * 28. Same as 9
 * 29. Same as before
 * 30. Link Capital FM
 * 31. Un-italicize Sugababes.de
 * 33. Needs accessdate
 * 34-43. All need accessdate


 * Will post more comments tomorrow. — Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  00:31, 20 January 2012 (UTC)


 * All in all


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * I addressed all the issues above except the music video screenshot, where I changed the caption. Is it relevant now? Till I Go Home (talk) 01:38, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Why is Digital Spy in the name of the reference. Both Digital Spy and Hachette Filipachi Media should be in the publisher. For the image is good now. — Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  08:54, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Because that's the title of the page. Till I Go Home 08:56, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Nevermind. You remove it from there and adding it in the publisher. After you finish formatting the references well. I will pass the article. — Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  08:57, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
 * So will it be "|publisher=Digital Spy. Hachette Filipachi Media" ? Till I Go Home (talk) 08:59, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes.:) The same with the others. — Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  09:01, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
 * I put in Digital spy in the publisher now. :) Till I Go Home (talk) 09:05, 23 January 2012 (UTC)