Talk:Get Together (Madonna song)/GA2

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:05, 3 October 2022 (UTC)

I will start this today! --K. Peake 08:05, 3 October 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * "that "Get Together" was the" → "that the song was the"
 * "It was also" → "The song was also"
 * ""Get Together" is a" → "It is a"
 * "techno and dance song which" → "techno, and dance song, which"
 * "was received with generally positive reviews by" → "received generally positive reviews from"
 * "while others found it not good enough. It reached the top ten" → "while others were underwhelmed. The song reached the top 10" per MOS:NUM
 * "the UK and Italy," → "the United Kingdom, and Italy,"
 * "the track failed to" → "the song failed to"
 * Remove the nonetheless part since that is not notable here
 * Wikilink music videos
 * "but it was animated" → "but they were animated"
 * Shouldn't you mention the one with graphical images was the first video?
 * "around their head." → "around their heads."
 * Pipe Best Dance Recording to Grammy Award for Best Dance/Electronic Recording

Background and composition

 * "Its digital sales" → "The song's digital sales"
 * "on May 30, 2006 in the United States" → "on May 30, 2006, in the United States"
 * "was particularly fond" → "was particularly fond of"
 * "disco-funk number."" → "disco-funk number"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * Wikilink live album and add the release year
 * Audio sample looks good!
 * "techno[15] and dance[16]" → "techno,[15] and dance[16]"
 * Pipe synths to Synthesizer
 * Remove pipe on beats per minute
 * Wikilink chord progression
 * [2][17][18][20][21] is too many refs at once per WP:OVERCITE; move [17] to the end of the sentence since that mentions both songs
 * I left three refs, is that OK? Alex reach me! 23:34, 9 October 2022 (UTC)
 * "he was surprised he" → "he was surprised him"
 * "she does not care, since "all is just an illusion";" → "she does not care: "It's an illusion."" per this being the line mentioned and the appropriate place to end the sentence
 * Where is it sourced that it is suggested as being between the singer and listener?
 * Lowercase the S.O.S. Band per MOS:THEMUSIC

Critical response

 * On the quote box, pipe Stardust to Stardust (band), wikilink "Music Sounds Better With You", Stuart Price and "Into the Groove"
 * "received generally positive responses" → "was met with generally positive responses"
 * "it was fluid in nature and called Madonna as a" → "it is fluid in nature and called Madonna a"
 * "Sal Cinquemani of Slant Magazine commented that the song" → "Cinquemani commented that the song"
 * The "love at first sight" comment is not directly mentioned by the source
 * "writing those lyrics would" → "writing those lyrics will"
 * "called the song's chorus" → "labeled the song's chorus"
 * "Jason Shawhan from About.com also complimented the song" → "Shawhan also complimented the song"
 * "and wonderful number."" → "and wonderful number"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "described it as" → "described the song as"
 * "in for good measure."" → "in for good measure"."
 * "was "preposterously anthemic, charging away" → "is "preposterously anthemic, charging away"
 * "Connor Morris of Cokemachineglow website wrote that the track was" → "Connor Morris of Cokemachineglow wrote that it was"
 * "According to Herald Sun," → "According to the staff of the Herald Sun,"
 * "describing it as a "huge" → "noting a "huge" to avoid overusage of "it"
 * Pipe Salon to Salon.com
 * "tacky, penny-arcade embellishments."" → "tacky, penny-arcade embellishments"."
 * "of "Get Together" sounded like" → "of "Get Together" sound like"
 * "in the background"." → "in the background."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences
 * Why is flat surrounded by single speech marks when it isn't in the source?
 * Remove or replace The Chicago Maroon per WP:RSSM
 * "at the 49th Annual Grammy Awards but" → "at the 49th Annual Grammy Awards, but"

Commercial performance

 * The Michael Paoletta sentence needs the ref invoked at the end per the usage of a quote
 * The Canadian peak is not sourced
 * "debuted at seven in" → "debuted at seven on the UK Singles Chart in" with the wikilink
 * "for shipment of 10,000 copies of the single." → "for shipments of 10,000 copies."

Music videos

 * Img looks good!
 * Wikilink music videos
 * [65] should only be invoked after the second comma
 * "into a more of a performance" → "into more of a performance"
 * The performance tour part is not sourced
 * "Kevin Shapiro and booked" → "Kevin Shapiro, and booked"
 * "After Effects and RealFlow were" → "After Effects, and RealFlow were"
 * "the color, environment and cinematography → "the color, environment, and cinematography"
 * "and revisited the shots and eliminated" → "and revisited the shots, and eliminated"
 * "The video directed by Logan Studios premiered through VH1" → "The video, directed by Logan Studios, premiered through VH1's"
 * "dinosaurs and tidal waves flashing by" does this refer to both flashing by or them being displayed separately? If the latter, then add a comma after dinosaurs.
 * "It continues in this fluid motion" → "This fluid motion continues"

Live performances

 * Img looks good!
 * "Star Academy, as well as during the Children in Need 2005" → "Star Academy, and the Children in Need 2005" with the pipe
 * Remove wikilink on Confessions Tour, however the song being part of it is not sourced
 * Pipe Steven Klein to Steven Klein (artist)
 * Where is the horse reins dancers part sourced?
 * "As she continued singing the music" → "As she continued singing, the music"
 * Wales Online → WalesOnline per the actual stylization
 * "around their heads."" → "around their heads"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "in Madonna's sixth live album," → "in Madonna's sixth live album" with the wikilink

Track listings and formats

 * Pipe Jacques Lu Cont to Stuart Price
 * Remove pipe on Thin White Duke

Credits and personnel

 * Pipe Mark "Spike" Spent to Spike Spent
 * Pipe Brian "Big Bass" Gardiner to Brian Gardner
 * Pipe mastering to Mastering (audio)

Weekly charts

 * Pipe Hot Singles Sales to List of best-selling singles

Year-end charts

 * Good

Certifications and sales

 * Good

Release history

 * Shouldn't you write Digital EP rather than Digital Download?

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; this took exactly the time I thought. --K. Peake 10:44, 4 October 2022 (UTC)
 * @11JORN are you going to address the comments? — IB [ Poke ] 12:01, 5 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review. I'm going to try to address these issues tomorrow. Alex reach me! 03:54, 6 October 2022 (UTC)
 * all ✅. Thanks once again for the review! Alex reach me! 23:33, 9 October 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, I did some brief copy editing but good job! --K. Peake 07:51, 10 October 2022 (UTC)