Talk:Get the Girl/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 22:22, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

Issues:


 * Infobox: Link The Office to The Office (U.S. TV series)
 * Lede: First sentence - after The Office add comma
 * Lede: Andy Bernard (Ed Helms) drives across the country to get Erin Hannon (Ellie Kemper), who has taken up caring for an elderly woman. → In the episode, Andy Bernard (Ed Helms) drives across the country to get Erin Hannon (Ellie Kemper), who has taken up caring for an elderly woman.
 * Lede: Who was it written by!?
 * Lede: According to Nielsen Media Research → According to Nielsen ratings
 * Lede: received differently by many critics → received mixed reviews by television critics
 * Plot: Both Jim and Dwight (Rainn Wilson) refuse to have her review - This sentence is rather confusing, more cleanup is also needed for section
 * References: Ref. 7, 8, 9 - NBC.com → NBC.com, and more linking in it
 * External links: Add The Office Wiki Link, it is located here

On hold. TBrandley  &bull;&#32;  talk   &bull;&#32;contributions 22:22, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Thank you for this review. You were right; the prose section was a mess! I believe I've addressed all the concerns now.--Gen. Quon (talk) 02:02, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Agreed. I have promoted now. TBrandley 03:35, 16 June 2012 (UTC)