Talk:Gethsemane (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 04:02, 28 April 2012 (UTC)

On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 21:49, 28 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Picture: Maybe expand the rationale on the image page a bit, just to be safe
 * As I was working on the rationale, I realised the image isn't really that important; it doesn't really show anything that's discussed properly. I've removed it from the infobox and added a free image to the article to illustrate it instead. GRAPPLE   X  00:20, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Production: Maybe cite the "Believe the Lie" change, either if its in the Meisler book or use the episode
 * Fixed, I'd put the citation a sentence too early. GRAPPLE   X  03:26, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Production: Not a big deal, but is there any more info on the "existence of God", as that seems like that's a big deal and could be expanded. If not, no biggie
 * I re-read some of the reviews and production material, but aside from Carter no one mentions it; the ending seems to have been the main talking point for critics. GRAPPLE   X  03:26, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Reception: "An article in the Wall Street Journal discusses fan theories…" 'discusses' should be 'discussed'
 * Done. GRAPPLE   X  00:20, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Reception: "…while a cartoon ran in The New Yorker a few weeks later surrounding Mulder's 'death'." This entire sentence needs a citation (or two)
 * I've added one, but it's just a repeat of the citation used already; all of those sentences preceding that ref were supported by it. GRAPPLE   X  00:20, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Reception: "Series creator Chris Carter noted that "the whole plot line of "Gethsemane" revolved around a hoax…" Change the "-" around Gethsemane to '-'
 * Done. GRAPPLE   X  00:20, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Reception: I know the Den of Geek named Michael Kristchgau as one of the "Top 10 X-Files Baddies" for his appearance, and the article explicitly mentions "Gethsemane" (although it spells it wrong)
 * Added this information, thanks for finding that. GRAPPLE   X  01:16, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Have addressed some of these points; will work on finding more info about the religious themes and adding that Den of Geek mention. GRAPPLE   X  00:20, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Have commented on everything and addressed all that could be addressed. Thanks for taking a look at this one for me. GRAPPLE   X  03:26, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Awesome! Looks good. I pass.--Gen. Quon (talk) 03:39, 30 April 2012 (UTC)