Talk:Ghost (Sky Ferreira EP)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Prism (talk · contribs) 12:11, 9 February 2014 (UTC)

General overview

 * Disambiguation links
 * According to Dablinks, there are none in this page.


 * Checklinks lists one 'indeterminate'-class link (uncategorized redirect) for FN18.

Original research and reliable sources

 * FN1 doesn't seem to be reliable... at all. Here's a link from Idolator that says it as well.

Lead section

 * I don't see how the record was criticized for its production. A suitable option here would be its "overall cohesiveness" or reworded, as the criticism went to the musical diversity.

Background and composition

 * "which was made available on March 22" → "which was made available on March 22 of that year"


 * While I'll accept the Facebook reference, please use this as a substitute source for the cover art. If the information (holding her hair, etc) isn't on the link, you'll have to remove it.
 * ✅, although since the picture the article provides shows the "holding her hair" bits, is it necessary to completely remove it?


 * Consequence of Sound should be wikilinked.


 * Why is there such a prominent use of Consequence of Sound for the Composition part of the section? Maybe try to include some more information based on other sources.
 * ✅; it looks like I screwed up some of the citations when I originally wrote the article. I've fixed those and added information from a few others.


 * The C.O.S. reference says that the surname is Hardy, but the surname used in the section is Marvilli?
 * ✅, I swapped names by accident.

Singles

 * Nothing to address.

Critical

 * Please change the name of this sub-section to "Critical response".


 * Wikilink Consequence of Sound.

Commercial

 * Please change the name of this sub-section to "Commercial performance".

Outcome

 * Passing! Congratulations, WikiRedactor :) prism   △  17:41, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much! I'll keep my eyes peeled for the next time you have a nomination ready! WikiRedactor (talk) 17:56, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you, I'll definitely let you know next time but we should work on Night Time, My Time. It's nearly done, as I've worked on it in November if I'm not wrong. prism   △  18:19, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Definitely! I listen to that album every day! WikiRedactor (talk) 19:25, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
 * I've tried to but I only get into half of it. I've already started rewriting the Composition section. prism   △  19:28, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Great! I'll get into the other sections shortly. WikiRedactor (talk) 19:30, 9 February 2014 (UTC)