Talk:Ghost Town (Kanye West song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 18:16, 6 July 2020 (UTC)

Hey Kyle Peake, I'll begin my review now. It's a larger article so it might take me a little longer. LOVI 33  18:17, 6 July 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Not sure if psychedelic should be labelled as a genre since is refers to specifically the guitar and "sounds." LOVI  33  20:12, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

Background and development

 * First paragraph is really long, maybe split it into a few.
 * ✅ how's that look? --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

Composition and lyrics

 * "The track includes" → ""Ghost Town" includes"
 * "Guitar is included" → "A guitar is included" OR "Guitars are included"
 * ✅ for the above --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

Release and recording

 * [sic] → [sic] using Template:Sic
 * ✅ --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * Looks good.

Accolades

 * This could maybe be a subsection under 'Critical Reception' due it still having reviewers comments
 * ❌ since that is two paragraphs and a table, so is enough for its own section and the comments are from the lists only --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

Commercial performance

 * "Freeee (Ghost Town, Pt. 2" → "Freeee (Ghost Town, Pt. 2)"
 * ✅ don't know how I made that typo --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

Live performances

 * Looks good.

Appearances in media

 * Looks good.

Sequel

 * Looks good.

Credits and personnel

 * Change 'Credits' subsection to 'Personnel'
 * ✅ but should I keep the credits adapted bit though? --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

Charts

 * Looks good.

Certifications

 * Looks good.

Final comments and verdict

 * for now. This article is extremely well written, great job! The comments above I'm sure wont take too long. It's great reviewing your articles! LOVI  33  20:12, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Have responded above, thanks a lot for the comments and I hope this becomes a GA soon. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:23, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Great! Thats a ✅! LOVI  33  12:39, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks a lot! --Kyle Peake (talk) 14:48, 7 July 2020 (UTC)