Talk:Ghosttown (Madonna song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 20:55, 26 August 2015 (UTC)

Hi. I'm Calvin999 and I am reviewing this nomination. — Calvin999 20:58, 26 August 2015 (UTC)


 * One dead link
 * on March 13, 2015 as → Comma after 2015
 * released onto → release on
 * as well as compared it → as well as comparing it
 * In the Background and release section, the picture is making the block quote look like a normal paragraph. Try using the coding on the block quote of "Man Down" so that it forces the block quote to still be indented from the image.
 * single, "Talk Dirty", → I don't think you need a comma after single?
 * "Ghosttown"'s → "Ghosttowns (So that the punctuation doesn't blur)
 * chorus comes it around → typo
 * According to Musicnotes.com, → I don't think you need this
 * who transformed the → Reads slightly fan-like
 * According to Idolator, → Should be linked here and unlinked in Critical reception
 * In France the → Comm after France
 * In Italy "Ghosttown" → Comma after Italy
 * on the tally, → you don't have entries on a tally, you tally on a chart.
 * from her → since her
 * She pulled ahead of runners-ups → She's always been ahead of them, so 'further ahead' perhaps?
 * who have 22 number-one songs each. → Rihanna has 23 now, so this needs to be changed to something along the lines of "at the time"
 * Along with the Dance Club Songs record, "Ghosttown" debuted at number 38 on the Adult Pop Songs chart, becoming the singer's 19th entry on the list. → Is 19 entries also a record?
 * Ref 2: Billboard needs linking
 * Ref 12: Link Slant Magazine, and unlink 40 and 94
 * Ref 24: Link Idolator
 * Some sources are in a foreign language? Like 38? Still need a language parameter to inform which language it's in.
 * 12, 62 and 92 have double quotation marks in their title because you need to use ' instead of " in the formatting.

On hold for 7 days. — Calvin999 15:34, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Outcome
 * Done and many thanks. — Indian: BIO   [ ChitChat  ] 10:30, 28 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Passing. — Calvin999  10:39, 28 August 2015 (UTC)