Talk:Gian Gastone de' Medici/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 04:18, 18 January 2010 (UTC)

This is a nice article overall, though I do have a couple concerns:
 * "Gian Gastone de' Medici (24 May 1671 – 9 July 1737) was the seventh and ultimate Medicean Grand Duke of Tuscany." 'ultimate' sounds kinda odd. Maybe final? Unless that was an actual part of the title, best to reword.
 * WP:PERSONDATA should be added.
 * "The Governor reigned supreme over Tuscan society, and Gian Gastone delegated most of his public duties to her, electing to remove to his bed." I'm a bit confused as to what the last part means. Reword if you can; I think I get what you're trying to say.

I'll put the article on hold and passed when the issues are fixed. Good work so far. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:18, 18 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Why not use last instead of ultimate?--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 18:40, 19 January 2010 (UTC)


 * While User:Jack1755 has retired, and somebody else did agree to pick up his articles at WT:GAN, I've made changes relevant to the above listed items. If there are additional MOS/format/prose issues, I can probably address them; I don't have the sources, so I am unable to deal with factual problems in any sort of timely way.  Magic ♪piano 20:47, 19 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks good now. There were no other issues, so the article passes. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 05:43, 20 January 2010 (UTC)