Talk:Gibraltar at the 2011 Commonwealth Youth Games/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vibhijain (talk · contribs) 16:08, 8 November 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

A good article, and should be a GA with some tweaking
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * MoS suggests not to have bold wikilinks.
 * Done
 * Done


 * competed at the >> competed in the
 * What's wrong with this? It's grammatically correct.


 * "which is responsible for the Commonwealth Games and Commonwealth Youth Games in Gibraltar." - This can be rather moved to the background section.
 * It's already there. Lead is supposed to be a summary of whole article.


 * "The Association selected ... different sports." Needs copy-editing. I would prefer "The Association selected a delegation of five male competitors, who participated in eleven events of three different sports."
 * Done


 * "semifinal of 200 m" - 200 m what???
 * Done


 * where he >> in which he
 * Done


 * athletics competitor - competitors should be plural
 * Done


 * Tell that Frank Warwick is a cyclist
 * Done


 * It seems that Sanderson participated in five events, and not six
 * Done


 * Link British Columbia
 * Done


 * 23.25 seconds, 23.25 minutes, 23.25 hours, or 23.25 days? :P
 * Done


 * Link the sports to Athletics at the 2011 Commonwealth Youth Games, Cycling at the 2011 Commonwealth Youth Games and Swimming at the 2011 Commonwealth Youth Games
 * That will be overlinking as there are already corresponding "See also" in each section.


 * The pictograms in the section headings should come first before the sport name
 * Done


 * Add the key for Q
 * Done


 * Link the athletes at least once.
 * Athletes are non-notable as per Wikipedia standards of notability. No point of linking their names with a red-link.


 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * "The country has ... since then." is unsourced
 * Done
 * Done


 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Good luck!!! ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛  Talk Email 16:35, 8 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks Vibhi. undefined — Bill william compton  Talk   17:09, 8 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Article passed. Congrats! :) ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛  Talk Email 09:09, 9 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Good luck!!! ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛  Talk Email 16:35, 8 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks Vibhi. undefined — Bill william compton  Talk   17:09, 8 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Article passed. Congrats! :) ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛  Talk Email 09:09, 9 November 2012 (UTC)