Talk:Gibson G-101/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Unexpectedlydian (talk · contribs) 18:35, 25 June 2022 (UTC)

Hi there, I'm happy to start reviewing this article. I'll use the table below. Comments will appear soon!  Unexpected lydian ♯4 talk‽  18:35, 25 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi @Ritchie333, I'm putting this article on hold so you can work through my comments. To be honest, the only thing I'm concerned about is the copyright tag on the Manzarek image, mainly because I'm not too familiar with how US and other countries' copyrights interact. Hoping you may be able to help out here. Other than that, the article looks good and I hope my suggestions are pretty self-explanatory! If you have any questions just give me a shout.  Unexpected lydian ♯4 talk‽  11:00, 26 June 2022 (UTC)

Replies

 * "Wikilink "foldback"" Neither term listed in foldback (disambiguation) is appropriate here; this is a very specific term limited to a few musical instruments
 * "Maybe wikilink "rocker switches" to "rocker switch"? (Redirects to "switch")" I don't this that's appropriate
 * "Wikilink "TRS jack" Changed to "jack plug", TRS is a technical term
 * "The expression pedal is important" Changed to "required"
 * Reverb units - I've reworded this to more closely align with what the source says
 * "Should the reference here be for pp.197-199?" - yes that's a typo
 * "Can't see from the source specifically that the G-101 can be used to simulate the performance?" - as it's going off-topic, it doesn't really matter (after all, I can probably simulate the sound on a Nord Stage or Logic Pro X as well)
 * Combo Organ Heaven - see Reliable sources/Noticeboard/Archive 371 "Is it a respected source in the world of combo organs?" - yes, see Lenhoff / Robertson p. 166
 * "There doesn't seem to be any mention of the G-202 in the source cited?" - because it's a typo of G-201
 * "Putting the word "photo-cell" in quotes implies that it is a direct quote from the source but I can't see it anywhere." - replaced with photodetector
 * Manzarek image - I have no idea, I just cropped it from an existing image uploaded by in 2010. Off topic, I'm also interested to know why it's being used in List of Polish people
 * Thanks, benefit of the doubt - let's leave it.

All other issues I've addressed by directly copyediting the article so the problem no longer exists, or I have simply agreed with the assessment and made the recommended changes. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont)  20:38, 28 June 2022 (UTC)


 * Hi @Ritchie333, thank you for addressing my comments! Only a couple remain, I've crossed out everything that's been completed. Hopefully it's all self-explanatory. Feel free to strike anything through that's completed. Many thanks!  Unexpected lydian ♯4 talk‽  19:05, 30 June 2022 (UTC)


 * "I'm not sure that "trumpet" should be linked to the article about trumpet the musical instrument." It's not, it's only a mnemonic for organ players to make them know roughly what sound to expect
 * "Not sure if linking to blogs is common practice." If the blog contains useful information, alongside information backed up in sources, it can be a useful bit of extra reading. Most sites like this don't mean to make any mistakes, they might just do accidentally, but as they are external links and not references, discretion is left to the reader.
 * Unfortunately I don't have any free samples of a G-101 anywhere

I think those are all the points addressed now. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont)  09:24, 2 July 2022 (UTC)