Talk:Giganotosaurus/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dunkleosteus77 (talk · contribs) 19:49, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

Comments by Dunkleosteus77

 * I think you use the word "subsequently" incorrectly in the last sentence of the first paragraph of the lead. Subsequently is sort of a transitional word, relating the preceding text to the proceeding text; in this case, the preceding text is about assigning teeth and tracks before its discovery and the proceeding text is about maximum theropod dinosaur size
 * Changed wording. FunkMonk (talk) 21:08, 30 August 2016 (UTC)


 * I suggest converting metric tons (MT or t) to short tons (ST) instead of metric tons to pounds
 * Thanks for reviewing! Note that I still need to add conversions to the last three paragraphs under history. As for short tons instead of pounds, is there a particular reason for this? Not really a unit-guy... FunkMonk (talk) 20:00, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Short tons, or U.S. tons, are equivalent to 2,000 lbs. Basically it's the imperial unit equivalent of tonnes, as the pound is the imperial equivalent of grams  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 03:28, 31 August 2016 (UTC)
 * I changed it in the intro and under description as a test, does it look ok? If so, I'll change the rest. FunkMonk (talk) 16:21, 31 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Looks good. I'll continue the review a bit later  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 22:41, 31 August 2016 (UTC)


 * halfway down the History of discovery section you stop using converting from metric to imperial
 * Yep, was waiting for your approval of the conversion above, will fix now. FunkMonk (talk) 15:08, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Conversions done, phew... FunkMonk (talk) 16:13, 1 September 2016 (UTC)


 * "shared between these genera include a the lacrimal"
 * Fixed. FunkMonk (talk) 15:08, 1 September 2016 (UTC)


 * "gigantism in theropods in could have"
 * Fixed. FunkMonk (talk) 15:08, 1 September 2016 (UTC)


 * "found that the presence of charcarodontosaurids" you also do this in the Feeding section
 * Whoops, fixed. FunkMonk (talk) 15:08, 1 September 2016 (UTC)


 * What mammalian carnivore weighs more than a ton?
 * I think it is just a hypothetical animal, to show that mammals have faster metabolism. But the source doesn't specify. FunkMonk (talk) 14:43, 1 September 2016 (UTC)


 * Is "newton" supposed to be capitalized? It's not capitalized in the corresponding article either
 * Decapitalised. FunkMonk (talk) 15:08, 1 September 2016 (UTC)


 * what is tortsional stress?
 * Removed t. FunkMonk (talk) 15:08, 1 September 2016 (UTC)


 * change "...suggested that though this could be the due to a long term..." to "...suggested that though this could be due to a long term..." or "...suggested that though this could be due to the long term..."
 * Removed stray "the". FunkMonk (talk) 15:08, 1 September 2016 (UTC)