Talk:Gilad Atzmon/Archive 2

"Known anti-Semite"
In the section just added, the final sentence is "SCAA chairman Jesper Svartvik said Atzmon was a "known anti-Semite" and urged the party to distance itself from the decision.[31]" While the title of the referenced article contains the phrase "known Anti-Semite", Svartvik is not directly quoted in the article as saying that. I would have removed it, but the article is protected. Note also, from the article: "Ulf Carmesund, international secretary of the Christian Social Democrats, rejects the allegations made by SCAA. "Gilad Atzmon is himself a Jew, and when the Swedish Committee Against Anti-Semitism starts calling Jews anti-Semites there is a risk that they undermine the term anti-Semite and do the fight against anti-Semitism a disservice," said Carmesund." Seems that should have been included for balance. Dynamite Dan (talk) 03:44, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
 * The column's headline reads 'Social Democrats invited known anti-Semite to seminar'. It includes the quotation marks, so it appears that they are quoting someone. There's also this document on their website, but my Swedish is rusty. Jayjg (talk) 03:49, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Well, perhaps someone said it, but I don't think that's enough evidence to lay it at the feet of Svartvik without better attribution. Dynamite Dan (talk) 03:56, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks for noting what rest of paragraph says which I'll include. Meanwhile the article is an absurd attack piece. Getting rid of that one foreign language quote may have been enough. But frankly I think the whole issue of excessive claims of antisemitism vs. BLP needs to go to arbitration. Though I won't start there. CarolMooreDC (talk) 13:40, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

Atzmon's continued controversial writings
Obviously Atzmon will continue to come out with ever new expressions and variations of basically the same opinions. (Not to mention every fight he has with every minor pro-Israel commentator.) Obviously brand new opinions relevant. However, just putting in out of context statements like two below is not the way to deal with it - i.e. WP:quotefarm. Otherwise, I guess studying the relation of both relevant quotes and context of the new article to other existing points in wiki article and seeing if those or other quotes in the article somehow fills them out is one way. Or just sticking in a full ref to a relevant article in a "for example" type sentence. CarolMooreDC (talk) 14:07, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
 * On March 10, 2009, Atzmon wrote"Without justifying any violent act whatsoever, the reasoning behind resentment towards Israel and Jews is rational."REF:
 * On January 23, 2009, Atzmon wrote,""They try to call me an anti-Semite, I'm not an anti-Semite. I've got nothing against the Semite people, I don't have anything against people - I'm anti-Jewish, not anti-Jews." and added "I think Jewish ideology is driving our planet into a catastrophe and we must stop."REF:

The quotes were in context, your attempts at censorship to cover for this Antisemite are disgusting and pathetic. Drsmoo (talk) 06:23, 18 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I agree with Carol here, and I think your personal attacks are unfounded and unhelpful.
 * The quotes are certainly accurate, and revealing. But it is not enough to simply add "Atzmon said this, Atzmon said that". I could list dozens of similar or even more egregious remarks. If you want them in the article, you have to show how they add to our understanding. Just adding them does not put them "in context"; that has to be established. It shouldn't be too difficult. RolandR (talk) 08:24, 18 March 2009 (UTC)


 * On the other hand there is WP:Coatrack: Wikipedia article that ostensibly discusses the nominal subject, but in reality is a cover for a tangentially related bias subject. The nominal subject is used as an empty coatrack, which ends up being mostly obscured by the "coats". Which means in this case, for example, no using an article about Atzmon to show critics of Israel that they can be viciously attacked on wikipedia. If there's a brand new subject, the quote may be relevant. If it's a subject already covered but provides more info, then it might be relevant - but it probably would replace other comments. And context remains important for WP:BLP reasons. CarolMooreDC (talk) 00:04, 19 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I have absolutely no intention of "show(ing) critics of Israel that they can be viciously attacked on wikipedia"; quite the reverse. My only purpose in editing this article is to present the views of Atzmon and his critics. As Carol knows, I have several times removed "vicious attacks" from this article, and I do not accept that my edits can be so characterised. RolandR (talk) 00:52, 19 March 2009 (UTC)

Atzmon does not "deny" he is an anti-semite, quite the opposite, he says anti-Semitism does not exist. " "Because Anti-Semite is an empty signifier, no one actually can be an Anti-Semite and this includes me of course. " Which is of course moronic. It is plainly clear that Atzmon is an anti-semite more than he is an anti-zionist. He hates Israel because he believes they follow "Jewish ideology." I think the attempts to whitewash his blatant racism by calling them "attempts to silence him" as you have done in your edit Carol, is not only blatantly dishonest and morally repulsive, it is massively POV.Drsmoo (talk) 06:13, 20 March 2009 (UTC)

And why on earth do you have this icon on your website http://www.carolmoore.net/nuclearwar/nuclearstar.gif Drsmoo (talk) 06:35, 20 March 2009 (UTC)


 * First, my comment above was not about Mr. Rance's edits but DrSmoo's obvious WP:Coatrack of his personal opinion. All I did was reflect what the article says - including how he answers his detractors - not cheery pick quotes that out of context make your point. Doing so is a serious violation of WP:BLP policy which you should read. Also, trolling around to find people's websites etc so you can criticize them is against Harass.
 * Anyway, I think the whole article is pretty much redundant to points made, whether you use and NPOV summary or the one DrSmoo wants to use to prove his personal opinion. So I deleted it.
 * However, I added the interview as an external link. CarolMooreDC (talk) 12:34, 20 March 2009 (UTC)

This is not coat-racking, Atzmon is more famous for his "controversial" views than he is for music. And these recent statements are his most controversial and undeniably anti-semitic. One can see by the quotes posted in this article that every year what he says becomes more and more extreme. Either he has gotten more extreme, or he's increasingly realized what he can get away with saying. Secondly in no way are these quotes out of context, when Atzmon says ""I think Jewish ideology is driving our planet into a catastrophe" that is blatant anti-Semitism of the Nazi variety and there is no possible context that will make it anything else. You reedited the paragraph to make it seem that it was an attack on Israel, it wasn't. It was an attack on judaism and by extension Israel and anything else that is Jewish. Those are Atzmon's beliefs. You took an interest in his writings because of the Anti-Zionist aspect, but that is only one side of his larger vitriol against Judaism. He is Anti-Zionist because he hates Judaism, not the other way around, and calling him an Anti-Semite, which he doesn't even deny, is not "an attempt to silence him" it is a blatant fact. Once again sis criticism is primarily directed against Judaism, not Israel. Drsmoo (talk) 12:44, 20 March 2009 (UTC)


 * These are all your personal opinions. Wikipedia is not here to allow you to vent your personal opinions. CarolMooreDC (talk) 13:12, 20 March 2009 (UTC)

The only issue of relevance is whether it is pertinent that these quotes be included in the article. I feel they should be, and in fact, I believe a subject's recent statements are more relevant than his/her statements from years past. In any case, there were no personal opinions of mine in the paragraph, and if there were I removed anything that may be construed as such. There are only Atzmon's sayings. Drsmoo (talk) 13:37, 20 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Statements used out of the larger context to prove a point - one you freely admit you want to make - are inherently POV. If it is his latest statements a) we should delete earlier similar ones and b) they should reflect what he has to say not what you admit you want the world to think he says. This is a serious BLP violation. CarolMooreDC (talk) 13:45, 20 March 2009 (UTC)

The statements were used in their proper context, and furthermore I am not making a point, Atzmon is making a point, and I am posting the point he is making on this Wikipedia article. You seem intent to hide that point from others for whatever reason. That is POV. Posting his words verbatim is not. Drsmoo (talk) 14:06, 20 March 2009 (UTC)

Two edits compared

 * While I'm not saying my summary is perfect, it obviously presents his views in a more NPOV light that your highly partisan rendering:


 * Drsmoo edit: On January 23, 2009, in an interview with the Gisborn Herald, Atzmon referred to himself as a "proud self-hating Jew" and wrote,"'Im anti-Jewish, not anti-Jews." In the same article, he stated "Jewish ideology and Nazi ideology were very similar." In reference to Jews, he stated "these were the people who were meant to be the guards of humanity? No. They definitely maintained evil." Atzmon said he considers the concept of Judeo-Christian values "A joke. It's obviously a political campaign to try to unite the power of America to fight the Jewish enemies" He also maintained that "I think Jewish ideology is driving our planet into a catastrophe and we must stop."And that "Bush behaved Jewishly (ideologically) - he is a supremacist, he was a tribalist, but he is not a Jew as far as I'm aware."


 * My edit (necessarily longer to include most of Drsmoo's quotes): In early 2009 Atzmon explained that during his time in the Israeli military he saw the "scale of the atrocities that are committed on my behalf by the Israelis in the name of the Israeli state, with the support of the Jewish people around the world." He criticized Israel "threatening the entire region with their idiotic nuclear bombs" and said "I think Jewish ideology is driving our planet into a catastrophe." Regarding attempts to silence him he said through charges of being antisemtic or a self-hating Jew he replied: "I've got nothing against the Semite people, I don't have anything against people - I'm anti-Jewish, not anti-Jews." He also called himself a "proud self-hating Jew", comparing himself with Spinoza, Marx and Jesus: "Why? Because of growing up in this kind of racist, nationalist, tribalist, chauvinist, supremacist society - and this is exactly what they stood up against." He quotes Jewish philosopher one philosopher, Emmanuel Levinas as saying: 'Now we must be at the forefront of the fight against racism. We must make sure this never happens again." He held that because of Israel's "crimes" since it's creation, as well as the "murderous extravaganza of the past weeks" (2008–2009 Israel–Gaza conflict), the state of Israel "should be dismantled immediately before they turn our planet into a fireball." He states the evilness of the Nazis "doesn't mean the Jewish ideology is correct, because in fact Jewish ideology and Nazi ideology were very similar." He criticizes the phrase "Judeo-Christian" as an artificial construct, saying: "What is the difference between Jews and Christians theoretically? Christians are basically Jews who love their neighbour, so they are committed to the universal concept of humanity, whereas Judaism is tribalism." He believes the phrase is "a political campaign to try to unite the power of America to fight the Jewish enemies."[36] CarolMooreDC (talk) 14:26, 20 March 2009 (UTC)

Your post is NPOV for several reasons. One you phrase his statements as belonging to an overall criticism of Israel, into which his antisemitism lies. This is the opposite, the title of the article is "No choice but to speak out - Israeli musician ‘a proud self-hating Jew" Also you stated that calling Atzmon an antisemite is an "attempt to silence him" and you stated it as if it was a fact, not his or your opinion. Similar to how you link to the Gaza conflict after his calling it a murderous extravaganza, that is also blatantly NPOV. Calling him an antisemite is not "an attempt to silence him" it is a fact. Someone who criticizes Bush because he believes he behaved "Jewishly" and that this is a bad thing, is an antisemite. You removed that in favor of more of his Israel criticism. Both my edit and yours include his antisemitic statements, yours includes less. However the context you place his quotes in is not in line with the tone of what he has to say. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Drsmoo (talk • contribs)


 * Article titles don't necessarily reflect all content accurately
 * Fixing "attempt to silence him" as from proper source is easily fixed
 * Since many people won't know he was talking about gaza, it's educational to stick in that link to Gaza, or better to see if he brings it up earlier and make it clear to reader that way
 * Just because a few people quoted in article call him an antisemite doesn't make it a fact. YOu write: "Someone who criticizes Bush because he believes he behaved "Jewishly" and that this is a bad thing, is an antisemite." That is still your opinion and that doesn't belong in the article.
 * "However the context you place his quotes in is not in line with the tone of what he has to say." He two or three time says his main motivation is Israel bringing the world to catastrophe, including through its nukes. You left that out. Not to mention his comparing himself to other well known Jews who he says had similar opinions.
 * I think the whole paragraph should be left out til consensus can be reached here on how to word it. CarolMooreDC (talk) 16:16, 20 March 2009 (UTC)

The quotes I included from Atzmon don't call him an anti-Semite. They just use his own words. And no, he says " "I think Jewish ideology is driving our planet into a catastrophe and we must stop." Not Israel, not Zionism, but Judaism. Drsmoo (talk) 16:45, 20 March 2009 (UTC)

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Outside comment. The solution to this sort of issue is to rely on secondary sources that have discussed Atzmon's quotes; then we can be assured that the quotes are notable, rather than quote-mined to support one position or the other. Anything else is potentially original research, and given the controversial nature of the subject and the BLP issues, and given the apparent wealth of secondary sources discussing Atzmon's views, there is no need to rely on the primary sources. I further note that Atzmon's antisemitism is sufficiently notable that the current article violates WP:LEAD by failing to mention the controversy in the lead paragraphs. THF (talk) 15:15, 20 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Thanks for your comments. Secondary source on this interview is a good idea. Or else the whole paragraph should be left out til consensus can be reached here on how to word it. Allegations of antisemitism can be mentioned, but I don't know if wikipedia itself labels people thusly, outside of a very big consensus of a lot of notable WP:RS. CarolMooreDC (talk) 16:20, 20 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Also I note Drsmoo and I are both at our 3rr limits; however, deleting questionable BLP material allows one to go against the rule - 3rr. Dare I just delete the whole thing per the above?? I've already reported it to WP:BLPN. Maybe will just do it 3x a day starting in 24 hours - Unless Drsmoo wants to delete it and start a new section on coming up with a compromise? :-) Trying to be cooperative... CarolMooreDC (talk) 16:49, 20 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Smoo, can you identify secondary sources on the subject? I can craft something neutral.  This doesn't merit edit-warring by either of you. THF (talk) 13:38, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

Some sources:. It is quite clear that this fellow is an anti-Semite, and that should not be sanitized from the article. If Smoo can provide some other sources, we can begin the rewrite. THF (talk) 13:45, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * First, since people keep making insinuations about me, IMHO, Atzmon should be more careful about what he says since some valid points he may have get lost in obviously angry, loose language that hurts other obviously valid points he makes. (Can you have Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome 27 years after being in a war like Lebanon 1982??) So for me he hasn't quite crossed that fine line into obvious antisemites whose articles I wouldn't bother to edit, at least from what I've read so far. Obviously various WP:RS agree or they would not keep reviewing his music or interviewing him as a credible or at least interesting source.
 * That said, three blog opinion articles do not make a fact, especially in WP:BLP - in fact such sources are regularly deleted in some articles. "Some allegations" is a correct phrase "often been accused" would need a WP:RS. As does phrase "opponent of all secular forms of Jewish identity" - who says so? Just because editors think it is true, and highly partisan organizations and commentators think it is true, does not mean that everyone does.
 * And yes, please rewrite the contentious NZ review. I'll wait a few more hours before reverting as BLP violation both lead and that paragraph. CarolMooreDC (talk) 14:45, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * "All secular forms of Jewish identity" was deleted as unsourced. But there is no legitimate claim that he is not an antisemite: endorsing the Protocols pretty much clinches it.  I don't know what you mean by "NZ review."  That he keeps being quoted hardly demonstrates anything; there are lots of anti-Semitic publications that take glee in quoting anti-Semitic Jews. THF (talk) 15:01, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Just my 2/100 observation THF. The lead section overrides totally his artistic work. Where is the balance? Could you work with other editors reach a certain balance? The lead section should reflect and summarize the content of the article. Am I right? --  FayssalF   - Wiki me up® 15:20, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

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 * Atzmon is most notable for his anti-Semitism--every music article mentions his political views, but only some of the political articles mention his music. The lead section does reflect and summarize the content of the article; if you wish to add another sentence about his music, I have no objection. THF (talk) 15:28, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Indeed, even in the music section in this article, which I have not touched, a number of the favorable quotes about Atzmon mention his political views, rather than his music. THF (talk) 15:44, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the prompt and convincing answer. I'll probably try later as I just wanted to note my observation. --  FayssalF   - Wiki me up® 15:32, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * THF has merely made an assertion, which should hardly be "convincing." His music belongs in the lead. More importantly highly partisan allegations based on statements taken out of context have to be carefully labeled. Moreover, his response that that charge "Anti-Semite is an empty signifier" and that he is an artist drawing all this out of himself also has to be put in the lead. Obviously Atzmon is an artistic and not very subtle provocateur trying to goad his fellow Jews and others into rejecting certain orthodoxies. In fact, re-reading all those sources probably will come up with a WP:RS that says so or him saying so.  Cherry picking with no context remains big problem with this article. Thus BLP dispute tag must remain. Will do a version soon. CarolMooreDC (talk) 15:35, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Carol, at this point it is you who is cherry-picking. There is no basis for the BLP tag, because you have not identified a single BLP violation. I've left in the PRIMARY quotes where Atzmon defends himself, but if you want that material in the lead, you need to find secondary sources.  All of the anti-Semitic quotes of Atzmon (and there are dozens) are now sourced to reliable secondary sources. THF (talk) 15:39, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Well, Carol and you may be both cherry-picking but sincerely THF, 3 lead paragraphs discussing his political views with a total absence of his artistic work is a sign of bias. Neutral editors would gently and voluntarily try to enhance the project and produce balanced articles. I know that you have suggested to me to add something but is it possible that you do it since you are taking the initiative in enhancing the article? --   FayssalF   - Wiki me up® 15:49, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * You seem not to have read the LEAD that you have linked to. If you can point me to something notable that I have omitted, I'd happily address it. Quite frankly, the reliable sources condemn Atzmon, and we have to stretch to blogs and primary sources and unreliable sources to find defenders. THF (talk) 15:57, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * What about the many sources used at Gilad_Atzmon, Novels, etc...? --  FayssalF   - Wiki me up® 16:36, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * I've beefed up the lead before you made this comment. Not sure what you think is omitted. The LEAD is to explain what makes the person notable, and to summarize the major controversies. The LEAD currently does that. Even the music articles about Atzmon acknowledge that he is more notable as an activist than as a musician. THF (talk) 16:41, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

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A reliable source for why the political activism is more notable than the music: "It is Atzmon's blunt anti-Zionism rather than his music that has given him an international profile" -- the sympathetic John Lewis, in http://www.guardian.co.uk/music/2009/mar/06/gilad-atzmon-israel-jazz-interview. THF (talk) 16:22, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * But Lewis said that after Erdogan felt that it was advantageous to quote a well known musician who commented on attack on Gaza - which suddenly made him world famous and not just famous in london and jerusalem circles. (Which might even be said in the article, but I'll have to check.) Just because you have thrown in a bunch of stuff doesn't mean other editors can't go through source by source and make sure the statements accurately reflect the source and are not just out of context POV WP:Coatrack. CarolMooreDC (talk) 16:51, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

Roland Rance' two quotes should be identified as his
In just rechecking these sources I realized that it probably would be necessary to point out that Roland Rance is the author of both quotes against Atzmon - even if he was NOT an editor working on that paragraph and this article. Obviously, this goes beyond mere POV to a pretty obvious WP:COI - so hopefully Mr. Rance will be on his best behavior "-) CarolMooreDC (talk) 01:05, 19 March 2009 (UTC)

Problematic translation of controversial/libelous material
This poor Google translation of this article in German needs better translation of the following in bold for both BLP and WP:V reasons or the whole thing should be cut. (Note wiki editors are not supposed to do the translation themselves, per V.) If these ideas are central to his views, I'm sure clear and accurate English sources can be found.


 * Statt aus seinem neuen Roman zu "My one and only Love" (Meine eine und einzige Liebe) zu lesen, wollte Atzmon lieber über das Buch und dessen Entstehungshintergründe erzählen. Instead, from his new novel to "My one and only Love" (My one and only love) to read Atzmon would prefer the book and its origins back to tell. "In Israel", so der seit 1994 im Londoner Exil lebende Atzmon, "wird man eingesperrt, wenn man nicht mit der offiziellen Meinung übereinstimmt". "In Israel," said the since 1994 in London exile Atzmon, "will be jailed if you do not believe the official match." Dies gelte insbesondere im Hinblick auf die Vergangenheit. This was particularly true in view of the past. In seinen Büchern versuche er, diese Vergangenheit neu zu arrangieren. In his books he tried to re-arrange past.
 * What is correct translation of what becomes "official match" since he obviously wants to talk about what gets you jailed in Israel. And not clear what rearranging past refers to; might be relevant to something or could be misconstrued as his fabricating facts.


 * Was folgte, war eine hitzige Debatte zwischen dem Literaten und dem Publikum, in deren Verlauf mehrere Zuschauer unter Protest den Saal verließen. Atzmon bezeichnete die uns bekannte Geschichtsschreibung über den Zweiten Weltkrieg und den Holocaust als eine komplette, von Amerikanern und Zionisten initiierte Fälschung. What followed was a heated debate between the writers and the audience, during which several spectators in protest left the hall. Atzmon described the known history of the Second World War and the Holocaust as a whole, by Americans and Zionists initiated counterfeiting. Der wahre Feind sei nicht Hitler, sondern Stalin gewesen. The real enemy was not Hitler, but Stalin was. Die Deutschen sollten dies endlich erkennen und sich nicht länger schuldig und auch nicht verantwortlich fühlen. The Germans should finally recognize this and are no longer guilty and do not feel responsible. "Ihr seid die Opfer", meinte Atzmon . "You are the victims," said Atzmon.
 * These bolds all need better translation since these are hot topics.


 * Besonders heftig entbrannte die Diskussion, als Atzmon die Zahl der während des Holocausts umgekommenen Juden in Frage stellte und argumentierte, es gäbe "keinerlei forensischen Beweis" dafür, dass diese wirklich 6000000 betragen habe. Particularly fierce debate erupted as Atzmon, the number of perished during the Holocaust Jews questioned and argued there was "no forensic evidence" that this really amounted to 6000000. Eine These, die ihm massive Kritik seitens des Publikums einbrachte. A thesis to him massive criticism from the public revenue.
 * Precise wording here obviously necessary for WP:V and WP:BLP purposes. CarolMooreDC (talk) 02:26, 19 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Not quite. The policy mentioned by Carol states: "Where editors translate any direct quote, they should quote the relevant portion of the original, non-English text in a footnote or in the article. Translations published by reliable sources are preferred over translations made by Wikipedia editors." RolandR (talk) 08:02, 19 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Please don't insert comments in the middle of other's comments, even when people mis-understand a policy. Anyway, I'll throw in most of the german translation; but I'll also go to WP:BLPN with the specific issues. Is there no record of his saying anything relevant in English? CarolMooreDC (talk) 15:04, 19 March 2009 (UTC)
 * My response was to one particular point you made, not to the whole passage. It was clearly indented to distinguish it from your original text, and I think it made more sense where I inserted it. But there's no point in edit-warring over this!
 * On your substantive question, I don't know of any similar statement in English, which is why this German source has been quoted by in various places. The problem here surely is the translation into English of this paper's translation into German of Atzmon's otherwise unrecorded comments (in English). I assume that you accept that the Ruhr Nachrichten is a reliable source, and that there is no question that he said something controversial on the occasion in question. Unfortunately, we do not yet have a reliable translation of what he is reported to have said. A German speaker has told me that the comment as reported refers to the historiography of the holocaust, rather than its history -- ie, not to what happened, but to how this has been described and analysed. It's an important distinction, and shows why we need an agreed and accurate translation.
 * The importance of article in question is that it was quoted in a German court by Sylvia Stolz, the lawyer for Ernst Zundel, as confirmation of her view that the holocaust is "the biggest lie in world history". So this is certainly notable, even if Stolz misquoted Atzmon, or the Ruhr Nachrichten mistranslated him. RolandR (talk) 16:10, 19 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Obviously the publication would be more credible if more of the translation made sense! They might have sent a cubb reporter who totally flubbed it in addition, but who can tell. I agree that he probably was talking about "historiography" and that's one more thing that gets lost in translation; as well as what gets you jailed in Israel. And certainly the fact that a woman was jailed for five years in part for quoting him is a story, and it probably was related to that event, but obviously it is WP:OR to state that so without a WP:RS saying it is. Bottom line is as long as there is a crappy translation it really is a violation of BLP which has bothered me for a while but I was too busy to parse it out.  So people should hurry up and find a decent translation if they want to use it. CarolMooreDC (talk) 16:30, 19 March 2009 (UTC)
 * I put in the Yahoo Babel Fish translation which clarifies or confirms a few points which I changed where relevant. However, I still think it's a dicey translation. Also, considering that it is ILLEGAL in Germany to say some of what he said at that event, and that the reporter might have gotten in trouble if he had made a report that made the ideas sound too rational or popular, I think there are real WP:RS problems with the report in general. CarolMooreDC (talk) 16:39, 20 March 2009 (UTC)

<--Backdent ''By the way, I thought this had come up previously in talk, but one reason I've been so careful is some indymedia site or someplace once mentioned Atzmon was suing someone for charging antisemitism and when you have a litigious subject, editors must be careful because I believe editors are as or more liable to be sued for libel than wikipedia. See WP:libel for details.'' CarolMooreDC (talk) 15:59, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

Update from a German speaker: original article is from a reliable source (a respectable local paper).
 * Key parts: "Atzmon bezeichnete die uns bekannte Geschichtsschreibung über den Zweiten Weltkrieg und den Holocaust als eine komplette, von Amerikanern und Zionisten initiierte Fälschung. Der wahre Feind sei nicht Hitler, sondern Stalin gewesen. Die Deutschen sollten dies endlich erkennen und sich nicht länger schuldig und auch nicht verantwortlich fühlen. "Ihr seid die Opfer", meinte Atzmon. ... Die Bombenangriffe auf deutsche Städte hätten stattgefunden, weil die Amerikaner diese Bomben besaßen und einsetzen wollten." (less relevant bit left out - comparing to present day Iraq etc...) "...Atzmon die Zahl der während des Holocausts umgekommenen Juden in Frage stellte und argumentierte, es gäbe "keinerlei forensischen Beweis" dafür, dass diese wirklich 6000000 betragen habe." means
 * "Atzmon described the received historiography on the Second World War and the Holocaust as a complete forgery, initiated by Americans and Zionists. The true enemy was not Hitler, but Stalin. The Germans should recognise this at last and no longer feel guilty or responsible. 'You are the victims,' said Atzmon. The bomb attacks on German cities took place, because the Americans had these bombs and wanted to use them." ... "Atzmon questioned the number of Jews killed in the Holocaust and argued that there was "no forensic evidence" for the claim that the number was actually 6,000,000." Any more questions or clarifications needed, let me know. PS Atzmon's own commentary on the issue: PPS See also Holocaust. Rd232 talk 01:24, 22 March 2009 (UTC)

All lead and other quotes need direct refs/context explained
User:THF's new lead entries are pretty absurd. 1) They don't show which articles make which allegations and 2) they only should refer to allegations made below in the article which are then presented in total context with any replies from Atzmon included. Otherwise this is total WP:Coatrack and using wikipedia for character assassination. Plus comments above on his responses should be in lead. Frankly, I'm on the verge of making a complaint to arbitration enforcement re: editing on Palestine-Israel articles. But I'll give User: THC a chance to mend his ways :-) CarolMooreDC (talk) 16:13, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

BLP tag dispute/vandalism problems ongoing
Moved from my talk page ...

Gilad Atzmon
I am a firm enforcer of BLP. The BLPdispute tag only applies if there is poorly referenced material. I have responded to every single one of your demands, and deleted everything you colorably claimed was poorly referenced. Please let me know specific problems before readding the tag. THF (talk) 17:03, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * First, you haven't given me a chance to even look at all your new sources, not to mention issues of neutrality (ie NOT WP:coatrack character assassination) and encylopedic-ism which also are in the tag. Plus there is ongoing dipute on the New Zealand interview. But most importantly the article is constantly vandalized with comments about Atzmon and/or one of the editors so readers dropping by need some alert that what they read may not be kosher. CarolMooreDC (talk) 17:10, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * In other words, you have no basis for adding the tag other than your failure to assume good faith with my edits. You haven't explained what's wrong with the RS NZ interview.  Possible future vandalism is an argument for page-protection, not for adding an inaccurate tag.  The blp tag on the talk page is all that is required for anything else.  Please self-revert. Because of your legal threats, I have raised this at ANI. THF (talk) 17:17, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * This is still operative and will remain so since this page is constantly vandalized by a variety of people. How many times a week do I need to repeat that? Thanks. CarolMooreDC (talk) 18:05, 22 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I agree that the tag should remain, since there is clearly a dispute over the neutrality of the page and the acceptability of certain edits. But I don't agree with Carol's reason above and elsewhere, that the tag is necessary because of the constant vandalism and the attacks on me. That is not a BLP issue, but a vandalism matter; and this is just one of scores of pages vandalised in this way. There does not seem to be an appropriate template for this. RolandR (talk) 18:31, 22 March 2009 (UTC)

attack page
this page is a disgrace. lets compare to another "well-known antisemite", this is the lead to the david duke article:


 * ''David Ernest Duke (born July 1, 1950) is an American white nationalist, former Grand Wizard of the Knights of the Ku Klux Klan,[2][3][4][5][6][7] former Republican Louisiana State Representative, and a perennial candidate in presidential primaries.


 * Duke claims he is a white nationalist. On his website, Duke denies being a racist and says he is a racial realist asserting "all people have a basic human right to preserve their own heritage."[8] He speaks in favor of voluntary racial segregation and white separatism.[9][10][11]


 * Duke has also unsuccessfully run for the Louisiana Senate, U.S. Senate, U.S. House of Representatives, Governor of Louisiana and twice for President of the United States.

and this is the lead to the atzmon article:


 * Gilad Atzmon (Hebrew: גלעד עצמון‎, born June 9, 1963, Israel) is a jazz musician and an anti-Zionist author who renounced his Judaism[1] and has often been accused of anti-Semitism, including by fellow anti-Zionists.[1][2][3][4][5][6][7]


 * Gilad Atzmon's Exile was BBC jazz album of the year in 2003,[8] and has been called one of London's finest saxophonists.[9] His albums often explore political themes and the music of the Middle East. He has also written two novels, which have been translated into over 20 languages.[10]


 * His anti-Zionist political activism, including the founding and editing of the Palestine Think Tank website, have received world attention, even being quoted by the prime minister of Turkey, Recep Tayyip Erdoğan.[9]


 * Atzmon calls himself a "proud self-hating Jew",[10] and his comments about Jews have included claiming that the Protocols of the Elders of Zion is accurate,[3][5] that Jews are trying to take over the world,[5] that the Jews killed Jesus,[11] that the burning of synagogues was "rational,"[4] and that "resentment towards... Jews is rational."[12] Atzmon has also written "To regard Hitler as the wickedest man and the Third Reich as the embodiment of evilness is to let Israel off the hook,"[11] and supported Paul Eisen,[7] leading to accusations of Holocaust denial.[5][7][11][13] Atzmon responds by saying "Because Anti-Semite is an empty signifier, no one actually can be an Anti-Semite and this includes me of course."[14]

duke's infobox refers to him as "Occupation:  Academic, Author, Political Activist" while atzmon's says, "Known for: Musician, political activism, antisemitism"

how can this remain on a BLP in light of WP:ATTACK ? untwirl (talk) 17:24, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * The problem is with the Duke page, not with this one. THF (talk) 17:26, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * so your suggestion would be to add "racist, antisemite" to duke's infobox? untwirl (talk) 17:29, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * If there was a "known for" entry in there, yes. Duke is most known for his racism, just as Atzmon is most known for his anti-Semitism. THF (talk) 17:34, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks to User:Untwirl for providing the larger context of the lead and the article being an attack article. As I wrote on WP:BLPN:
 * Per WP:BLP: Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a tabloid paper; it is not our job to be sensationalist, or to be the primary vehicle for the spread of titillating claims about people's lives. Frankly, WP:THF's edits today are quite sensationalistic and his personal comments that it is "quite clear that this fellow is an anti-Semite, and that should not be sanitized from the article" show that bias.
 * One reason we needed Request for arbitration on editing on Palestine-Israel articles was the lose labeling of biography subjects as antisemites based on partisan attacks in WP:RS for which there often were few defenses except the person themself--not to mention intimidation through accusations of antisemitism against editors who would try to make a balanced article, including full context for quotes by biography subjects.
 * So problem is not just that you need specific refs or one reply from Atzmon in the lead, or even that every accusation must be put in full context with a reply, the problem is the sheer amount of material. The limited original lead plus a couple paragraphs on the topic naming who accused him and linking to article and his replies should be enough. Let people do their own research rather than promoting any POV.
 * At very least, trim back accusations in lead to original lead and then user:THF can include new accusations in text and we can see what real context is and any response. Let readers decide the final shakeout. CarolMooreDC (talk) 17:42, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

ec - there are refutations and context provided by the subject later in the article to many of the cherry-picked quotes, but only the damning quotes are mentioned in the lead, in a list of 'evidence' against him. that is an attack page. david duke is identified as what he claims to be "white nationalist", not what we all know him to be: white supremacist, racist, antisemite. every accusation of these terms is properly attributed to the source, and not in the lead. is this not the proper format for a blp? untwirl (talk) 17:47, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

attack page allegation break 1
WP:LEAD requires mention of the most notable controversies. The most notable thing about Atzmon is that he is a Jewish antisemite. If not for his antisemitic remarks, he'd be an obscure local saxophonist who'd squeak into an article only by virtue of the low bar of WP:MUSIC. Everything in the article is well-sourced, and the quotes are no longer in the lead, so you have no complaint there. The WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS argument of the unbalanced David Duke is not relevant: the problem is with that article's sanitized nature, not with this one (which, as it is, is ludicrously sanitized in an attempt to compromise with CMDC). The only "cherry-picked" quotes are in defense of Atzmon; everything else are quotes that independent secondary reliable sources found notable. THF (talk) 17:53, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * The lead is better though it needs some tweaking, but not by me, today :-) I don't know what examples of cherry picking you are referring to, unless you mean his responses to attacks which other editors originally put in, which are allowed under Blp. I personally haven't seen all the accusations; plus I figured with the several editors who like to put them in were the best judge of which ones to include. CarolMooreDC (talk) 18:08, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Nothing in Blp permits the violation of WP:OR by picking and choosing which of Atzmon's writings merit quoting. That's a decision for secondary sources. THF (talk) 18:11, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * i am not talking about WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS. the example of dd was to say that this is the proper format for a blp.  only attributes with which the subject self-identifies are to be used without naming the source that uses it, and even then, the subject's refutation must be included.   untwirl (talk) 18:20, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * There is no basis to say that David Duke, a B-class article at best, is the model which we should be following. There is also no basis to say that only self-identification is valid: reliably sourced identification is, as well. THF (talk) 18:31, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * please see the relevant npov policy regarding: "Let the facts speak for themselves and Attributing and substantiating biased statements." this policy is even more important in a BLP.  untwirl (talk) 18:51, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * THF, your position is a lonely one. If you want to try and get more support (more likely get even lonelier in your corner), do an RFC (WP:RFC). Rd232 talk 23:04, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

Cherry-picking
The recent edits have cherry-picked primary sources of Atzmon's views to present him in the most favorable light, in violation of WP:OR. That's how we got into this dispute in the first place, because Drsmoo reasonably wanted to balance these quotes with other cherry-picked quotes that showed that Atzmon was not remotely reasonable. The only views of Atzmon that should be in the article are those that have been noted by reliable secondary sources. THF (talk) 18:35, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * You write: "cherry-picked primary sources of Atzmon's views to present him in the most favorable light" - frankly I didn't realize that's what I was doing. Thought it was just balancing all the bad stuff using primary sources which is allowed sometimes and I guess I thought this was one of those times.:-) But I'll reserve other comments til read your final version.
 * You write: "Drsmoo reasonably wanted to balance these quotes with other cherry-picked quotes that showed that Atzmon was not remotely reasonable." however this shows your Bias of thinking he is unreasonable.
 * I consider myself more neutral than you because I can see he says sensible things, confusing things, wacky things, and things he better explain ["on a variety of topics" later added for clarity] or he earn a bad reputation. Since I can count on some editors quoting all the bad stuff, I figure it's my job to provide balance for NPOV. CarolMooreDC (talk) 18:45, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * If press coverage of an antisemite is bad, that is because he is an antisemite. Wikipedia can only mirror the coverage that's out there. Your claim that Atzmon's antisemitism is "sensible" shows your own bias. Wanting to say nice things about someone that the press hasn't said nice things about doesn't excuse original research to try to rescue him from the hole he has dug himself into. The way we achieve neutrality is by neutrally reporting what secondary sources have said, not by trying to pick and choose from the wealth of material Atzmon has left us to derive our own interpretations. It doesn't matter whether you think Atzmon is sensible; it doesn't matter that I think his bigotry is unreasonable; what matters is what secondary sources have said. THF (talk) 18:52, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * First, don't put words in my mouth that I said antisemitism is sensible. Very bad faith editing. I was talking about his views on a number of things includng Israeli nukes and attacks in Gaza. And because there are so many throw away or badly/partisan sourced accusations otherwise, one doesn't even know what is true or what is false.  That's one reason I try to have the actual text - even if it is his - ref'd as well as the accusation. I don't know if you've done that since you keep editing. So all I can do is make suggestions and when you are done see if you've followed them and then counter edit tomorrow after a break. Also you have not given anyone a chance to find more secondary sources, so who knows what the sum total will be?? CarolMooreDC (talk) 18:57, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I'll add the primary sources that secondary sources require. I'll also remove the inappropriate cherry-picking of primary sources. THF (talk) 19:12, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

When I came from WP:BLP/N I saw the last paragraph in the lead and on looking at the sources, I thought it was cherrypicking verging on libellous. On dealing with that without merely deleting it, all subsequent edits followed, including the summarisation of excessive criticism detail which adds nothing to description of GA's views; merely reporting people's opinions of them in detail, which is unnecessary unless they are very significant. Hence my leaving more detail for the British Board of Deputies. Rd232 talk


 * It wasn't cherry-picking, much less libelous -- it was a summary of the major reason that Atzmon was notable as WP:LEAD requires. Enough people complained that I moved the paragraph out of the lead before your edit conflict did so, though I think the result unnecessarily sanitizes someone widely agreed to be a bigot. THF (talk) 19:12, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I'm a little confused as to what's going on, but I think every quote from him will have to be put in proper context, including from his own self-published sources (which is where most come from) to be WP:NPOV and not be an attack article totally against WP:BLP and Israel-Palestine arbitration. CarolMooreDC (talk) 19:24, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Hey User:THF - Now that I realize CMDC is me, please don't use me as an excuse in edit summaries for edits you do that I may not entirely agree with. Thanks :-) CarolMooreDC (talk) 19:33, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * When you make a request on the talk page, and I make an edit in response to that request, the edit summary is going to reflect that. THF (talk) 19:43, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * As long as you don't claim I can't make some edit later because I agreed with what you did on my related suggestion earlier. :-) CarolMooreDC (talk) 19:49, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

Out of context quotes = cherrypicking. Doing so to damage a living person is especially bad. Reporting the subject's views accurately is not cherrypicking. Rd232 talk 19:59, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Picking and choosing which primary-source quotes best "report a subject's views" equals cherry-picking. It's a violation of WP:OR. I can find many many primary-source quotes that demonstrate that Atzmon is a bigot, but I'm restricting myself to secondary-sources.  It violates NPOV to create false balance. THF (talk) 20:01, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * How about User:THF Cherry Picking Ms. Rizzo's comments per my comment below? CarolMooreDC (talk) 20:09, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I didn't cherry-pick anything. Where Rizzo stated facts, I cited her; where Rizzo stated opinions, I disregarded them as non-RS. THF (talk) 20:30, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * "I didn't cherrypick, I picked cherries." Either it's a reliable source or not, you can't have it both ways for the things you want in and the things you don't. Rd232 talk 23:09, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

I don't agree with the statement that any qutes which show Atzmon as an anti-semite are "out of context" there is no possible context in which a statement that "Judaism is leading the world to a catastrophe" is anything other than antisemitism. REGARDLESS my edit did not put the quotes into any context, it just displayed them. that his quotes upset you or made you angry is his own problem. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Drsmoo (talk • contribs) 15:04, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I bet there are a 200 quotes on wikipedia saying something like "Islam is leading to a world of catastrophe." Criticism of religious views and actions are not allowed only about one religion.
 * It is POV for editors in wikipedia to characterize a specific statement without a WP:RS doing so - and especially in BLP without context or reply by subject or others.
 * As I say below, the answer is to have a paragraph on each of his important/criticized views starting with a WP:RS and doing what I describe above. Then info can be sorted out paragraph by paragraph, as was done in the long worked on last verion. It wasn't perfect but not as much of an attack piece! CarolMooreDC (talk) 17:27, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * If someone were to say "Islam is leading the world to a catastrophe" or "Catholicism is leading the world to a catastrophe" they would most certainly be classified as Islamophobic or anti-Catholic. Regardless, the article is using Atzmon's words only. He defines himself as "a proud self-hating Jew" it is not the article defining him, it is Atzmon himself. It is also a fact that many organizations refuse to work with him citing antisemitism. It is also a fact that when condemning Zionism, he condemns Judaism as well, something Anti-Zionists typically do not do. The solution is to present Atzmon's words themselves, and not to explain them. For example, saying " regarding attempts to silence him" is injecting your own point of view on what you seem to feel is happening here, something you have repeated in this talk page "anyone who approaches the subject is trashed" That is not what's happening, we're simply trying to present Atzmon's own views in the same context in which he presents them. Drsmoo (talk) 18:52, 23 March 2009 (UTC)

"Holocaust Denial" in lead WP:undue/libelous?
Assuming you don't change this while I'm writing, the "Holocaust denial" in the lead section uses vague throw away accusation from secondary sources (including Mary Rizzo's defense of Atzmon!). At the very least WP:UNDUE. The new paragraph doesn't support such an accusation sufficiently to be in the lead - or to even exist at all?
 * Perhaps even more controversially, particular in anti-Zionist UK circles, was his distribution of a Holocaust revisionist/denialist paper by Paul Eisen,[7] leading to accusations of Holocaust denial.[5][7][8][9] Atzmon strongly rejects the accusation, noting, for example, the stigma attached to discussing any details of the Holocaust, not least the usual "6 million Jews killed" figure, even though the Holocaust museum Yad Vashem mentions several figures between 5 and 5.5m; in public debate the 6m figure has become an "abstract fetish", as if a somewhat smaller number could make the Holocaust harmless.[37]

The #37 source you use is a hodgepodge of an interpretation of the German translation, Atzmon's reply and someone else's interpretation of the Atzmon reply, and copied to Uruknet from a blog!! Not very WP:RS even if it is trying to defend him. Frankly I think the whole topic should be deleted as WP:libel unless better sourcing and accurate description of the real incidents/comments under discussion can be found. CarolMooreDC (talk) 19:19, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Promoting Eisen's Holocaust denial paper is a form of Holocaust denial, and the allegations are well-sourced. THF (talk) 19:42, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * That's your opinion. In the context of Atzmon's well-documented view that it is the fetishism especially of the numbers involved, it is simply wrong (if not actively malicious) to insist that his distribution of a paper (the exact contents of which we do not know) proves he is a denialist, even when he says otherwise. Rd232 talk


 * I just noticed that the Mary Rizzo article gives the fullest details, which I missed before, but in the context of why it is absurd. Surely should be mentioned? And another reference is the story about Mr. Greenstein getting Atzmon canceled, certainly something that probably belongs in the bio in its own right.  I'll have a lot of work to do fixing it up when get started in a day or two. :-) CarolMooreDC (talk) 19:19, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I find it really discomfiting when you use a smiley-face to describe glorifying a bigot. THF (talk) 19:50, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Maybe you need a WP:wikibreak: she's clearly describing the "lot of work". WP:AGF and also WP:SOAPBOX. Rd232 talk 19:55, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * User:THF interpreting and falsely characterizing my smiley face into a WP:attack does indicate you've lost editorial perspective on this bio. Perhaps you could delete that attack? CarolMooreDC (talk) 20:11, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry that I find it offensive. I'm merely noting that I do. THF (talk) 20:12, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Perhaps CarolMooreDC's wikilawering is verging on being disruptive. At minimum she needs to learn to distinguish between a criticism and an "attack". Malcolm Schosha (talk) 19:39, 22 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Wikilawyering? What? And THF was clearly accusing Carol of intending to "glorify a bigot". This is not criticism, it's an attack. Rd232 talk 22:47, 22 March 2009 (UTC)


 * That is nonsense. She, and apparently you also, are making a threat of sanctions against a user for a minor criticism by attempting to label it an "attack". Try to remember that at least some editors here do not find antisemitism and holocaust denial amusing. It is a difficult subject, and if you are going to edit this article you need to at least try to be sensitive to that. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 11:06, 23 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Repeating the attack does not lessen it. There was no talk of sanctions. Rd232 talk 12:21, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * There is always a threat of sanctions behind accusations of personal attacks. If you had said, instead of accusing of an attack, please review WP:NPA, it would have been much better....but there was no attack at all. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 13:07, 23 March 2009 (UTC)

<back dent Again people are allowing their personal POV's to interfere in this process but attacking and justifying attacks and then blaming the victim(s) of the attacks for considering at some points asking for these attacks to be looked at. Just keep to WP:RS and WP:NPOV and there won't be a problem. CarolMooreDC (talk) 17:31, 23 March 2009 (UTC)

WP:LEAD and unbalanced tag
The lead should establish context, explain why the subject is interesting or notable, and summarize the most important points—including any notable controversies that may exist. It is inappropriate to delete the major reason why Atzmon is notable -- the controversy over his antisemitism -- from the lead. THF (talk) 20:25, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * I agree. It should be "a short, independent summary of the important aspects of the article's topic". Not a charge sheet. How's the current short sumary for you? Rd232 talk 22:42, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I view it as a whitewash that gives far too much WP:WEIGHT to Atzmon's fringe opinion. Mainstream sources recognize Atzmon as an anti-Semite, and only the far left and other anti-Semites feel otherwise. The article as a whole suffers from too much weight given to quote-mining Atzmon for defenses of his inexcusable statements at the expense of what reliable secondary sources say about his anti-Semitism. THF (talk) 23:29, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * And what are your "proofs" that controversies over his antisemitism - as opposed to controversies over his various view points - make him notable? In fact google his name and you have to go down 70 odd entries to find one that calls him an antisemite. YOu can list list those WP:RS here explicitly stating that that's what makes him most notable. Please do so below. And others can look at some of those top 70 sources and see what they say is. Then we can compare and contrast. In the interim, it is WP:OR to stick it in there and vs. WP:BLP and certainly against what a couple editors think. CarolMooreDC (talk) 23:38, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I've already cited multiple sources that say that his music is overshadowed by his political views. Every lengthy profile of his music mentions his politics; most of the political articles about him restrict mentions of his music to two words. Atzmon himself says he "doesn't make jazz records" and that politics is more important. THF (talk) 23:42, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * WP:AGF creaks under the strain when you're asked to demonstrate anti-semitism and merely mention "politics". Perhaps you misunderstood, -read Carol's first sentence more carefully. Rd232 talk 00:56, 22 March 2009 (UTC)

There are two choices we can use for this article to keep it NPOV: Right now we do neither: secondary sources are limited on phony grounds of WP:WEIGHT to the point of minimizing the most notable issues regarding Atzmon, and primary sources are mined to find quotes rationalizing his anti-Semitic statements, while other anti-Semitic statements are left out. This is both an NPOV and a NOR problem: after all, why are we choosing to quote Atzmon on one issue, rather than, say, his strange views on Borat, where he condemns Sacha Baron Cohen for "giving a bad name to anti-Semitism"? I left that out because it isn't in a secondary source other than a blog, but if everyone else gets to add their favorite Atzmon quote from his websites and nowhere else, why shouldn't that be in the article? THF (talk) 23:42, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * We can restrict ourselves to what secondary sources say about Atzmon.
 * Everybody gets to pick their favorite primary-source Atzmon quotes and add them to the article.


 * You have quote one source saying his music is overshadowed and that's in the lead; you have quoted NO sources saying "the major reason why Atzmon is notable -- the controversy over his antisemitism." So what's your complaint?
 * Per your second comment, again, you show your bias that he's a total antisemite and therefore nothing he says should be given any credibility at all. Other biases have been complained about above repeatedly.
 * I've been editing in very contentious Israel-Palestine articles and bios for almost 2 years and this is the first time I've felt I could prove an editor was so biased and disruptive he should not be allowed to edit an article for some period of time. I will consider figuring out the process by which one accomplishes this. CarolMooreDC (talk) 00:02, 22 March 2009 (UTC)

Correct use of primary sources in views, etc.
One of the issues (apart fom the cherrypicking - cf latest with Borat) is that THF seems to have his own definition of a primary source. It would help if he made this definition explicit instead of merely wielding it rhetorically whenever it suits. (NB we've already read the policy so don't merely point to it - if necessary, quote.) Rd232 talk 00:54, 22 March 2009 (UTC)


 * The best way to structure the Political views is to have under "Views" section paragraphs describing each of his most important 6 - 9 frequently repeated views by topic (instead of merely chronologically as previously), combining WP:RS and quotes or at least references to relevant articles so people don't have to take our word for it. In the past editors thought just describing/quoting his statements would give readers certain opinions about his alleged bigotry and it was NPOV to just present them as they were. That was first screwed up by POV pushing descriptions; now those are introduced by recent primary source quotes on various topics with lots of  tags.  Neither works too well.
 * Then the "Criticism and Response" section should mention general and specific accusations of antisemitism (including the fact of the one actual and other threatened protests), and his and other responses. This would be place for accurately describing the more controversial and usually more offhand statements (Holocaust, Protocols), including his responses for BLP reasons.
 * At least User:THF came up with some more resources on the above and doing some searching today I found a lot more interesting info that I would not have found with out User:THF forcing me to. CarolMooreDC (talk) 04:25, 22 March 2009 (UTC)
 * don't you start about "primary sources" (or accept THF's framing, which I think is wrong). I'm hoping someone at WP:NORN can clarify the issue. Rd232 talk 04:44, 22 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Per below I've already said that both Or and Blp allow them - but should be used carefully.
 * Therefore if any WP:RS has raised what he has to say as an issue, it then is identified as a notable enough to be described in detail - and all his major issues have been mentioned, including as answers to questions. Filling in the blanks of missing info, or quoting him when he corrects wrong or distorted info, is proper.
 * However, per THF's comment about Atzmon's views being too fringy to detail, if a subject is notable for a bio, and his opinions are discussed or criticized by many WP:RS, they do have to be portrayed accurately, with the relevant details, even if it means using mostly primary sources. In fact, searching "section political views" I find that all sorts of fringy people have their political views detailed, and even have whole articles on them, with lots of primary sources, because they are so widely discussed. Another indication that THF is wrong. But bring the issue to the relevant noticeboard if that response is not good enough. CarolMooreDC (talk) 12:14, 22 March 2009 (UTC)
 * THF has already shopped the issue all over the place (not in a notably neutral way, I can't help remarking):
 * No original research/noticeboard
 * Neutral point of view/Noticeboard
 * Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Israel (but not the equally relevant Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Palestine...)
 * Including your post on Biographies of living persons/Noticeboard we're getting WP well covered. Perhaps an RFC and a watchlist notice as well ;) ?

Rd232 talk 13:33, 22 March 2009 (UTC)
 * What goes around comes around; guess I should have mentioned BLP listing here :-) Feel free to do what you feel is necessary. I'll always stick in my two cents. CarolMooreDC (talk) 13:53, 22 March 2009 (UTC)

3RR/Edit warring warning
Some of us have overdone it in the last 36 hours. I recommend people read WP:3rr cause from now on I'm going to be counting those that are not corrections of big BLP violations, like libel, etc. :-) Though we always should be on best behavior anyway. CarolMooreDC (talk) 20:44, 21 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Looks to me like at least three editors have hit their limits for today, FYI. CarolMooreDC (talk) 20:35, 23 March 2009 (UTC)

More problems with recent edits
Hopefully the editor involved will cool down over next few days and not gut the good faith attempts to make the article more fair that other editors may engage in. CarolMooreDC (talk) 22:40, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Slights Rizzo: The Gag Artists, Who's Afraid of Gilad Atzmon? or deletes Ben-Dor:The Silencing of Gilad Atzmon from this version third party opinions which deal with constant attacks on him, including attempts to shut down his events through threatened and actual protests - which new WP:RS sources document.
 * Deleting even a link to Atzmon's response to the Board of Deputies in Counterpunch.
 * False charges of misuse of primary sources when both Or and Blp allow them.
 * Failure to recognize that uncooperative whole sale rewrites ignoring other editors complaints may result in other editors doing the same.
 * Constant insults against both the subject of the article and other editors working for a nonlibelous and fair article. That alone should be basis of a block for a few weeks working on this article.


 * I removed the ben-dor para (maybe THF did as well) as it didn't seem to add much; a link somewhere would be OK but it is basically a general essay, not about Atzmon. The Pizza in the Park saga I wasn't aware till your post; it should be mentioned briefly. Agree that THF needs to (a) cool down and (b) read policy more carefully. In general, let's all make an extra effort to resolve the issues without escalation. Rd232 talk 22:52, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

original research?
why are there OR tags all over direct quotes published in a newspaper? the quotes seem to be pulled directly from the source. how does OR apply here? untwirl (talk) 15:19, 22 March 2009 (UTC)


 * It may be the wrong tag. WP:synthesis of primary sources is probably the actual problem. In any case it would have been better to tag the section instead of using so many inline tags. It might be better to remove the tags for now, and discuss the problem...if there actually is one. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 15:54, 22 March 2009 (UTC)


 * One tag and one ref sufficient. As I outlined above, having several paragraphs introduced by WP:RS to say he has a position on various issues and adding and descriptions/quotes from his material that details, corrects, etc. as necessary by consensus of editors is way to go. Currently his views on a bunch of issues are jumbled together, with some left out. It was meant to correct the POV paragraphs that immediately follow so is understandable.CarolMooreDC (talk) 17:31, 22 March 2009 (UTC)

Suggested Political Views subsections
Looking through the mostly longstanding WP:RS material that User:THF deleted on 3/22 because it didn't all prove his POV point, suggests some categories for the views section. Note that even articles about people like Noam_Chomsky and Israel_Shamir list their views so this is hardly a novel suggestion. They can be listed by either bullet points or subsection headings, the two different formats offered in those examples. Miss anything? Thoughts? CarolMooreDC (talk) 17:57, 22 March 2009 (UTC)
 * On music and politics
 * On Zionism
 * On Jewish Identity
 * On Israeli war crimes (Lebanon '82, West Ban '02, Lebanon '06, Gaza 08-09)
 * On The Holocaust
 * On Jewish Power and Protocols of Zion
 * Well here I actually agree with the removal. Some of it could maybe come back, especially the music-related stuff, but Atzmon isn't notable enough to expound all of his political views in detail. A summary of his views is enough. Also the German thing has genuine WP:RS and WP:OR issues (unlike THF's tag extravaganza); this may apply to the current content on the issue as well, but THF's blanket complaint has drowned that out a bit. Furthermore, I think even for someone of Chomsky's prominence, this kind of Views section is appallingly badly done. It may be the only way WP can do it, but I don't think it's something to aim for. Prose summary is much better than listing, especially in that awful WP recentist style of In Month Year X said Y, then Z said blabla... Rd232 talk 18:44, 22 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Summary rather than listing is ok with me. The question is should partisan WP:RS opinion piece detractors and those couple news articles that parrot them be given as much weight as they are? Atzmon is becoming increasingly notable with his latest album.


 * Also, Atzmon's article may attract people who want to trash him and help destroy his career and NPOV editors must guard against this. Reminder to all editors:


 * Editors must take particular care adding biographical material about a living person to any Wikipedia page. Such material requires a high degree of sensitivity, and must adhere strictly to all applicable laws in the United States and to all of our content policies, especially: Neutral point of view (NPOV) - Verifiability -  No original research
 * We must get the article right.[1] Be very firm about the use of high quality references. Unsourced or poorly sourced contentious material about living persons—whether the material is negative, positive, or just questionable—should be removed immediately and without waiting for discussion.[2]


 * Also, I finally figured out that http://www.uruknet.de/?p=40226 is both Atzmon and his quoting a letter to the editor by the organizer of the German event, who he doesn't name. I don't know if it was published, but the confusion makes it a questionable source. I will make a bunch of edits in next couple days to correct all the problems I have been complaining about this weekend, either generally or specifically. Meanwhile it's time to delete or tag the worst material. CarolMooreDC (talk) 19:27, 22 March 2009 (UTC)

RFC on 2 developing versions

 * Two versions of developed. Here is a diff between the two versions, and links to version A(focussing on describing the subject as anti-Zionist, describing anti-Zionist views, and the anti-semitism controversy); and version B (focussing on describing the subject as anti-semitic and anti-Jewish). Not entirely incidental to this discussion is a previous version from several days ago, before I joined the discussion following a WP:BLPN posting, which IMO verges on the libellous. NB be warned that this generates all the heat and emotion of an Israel-related topic you might expect (which is why I normally stay clear of these topics, but I've got involved because of the BLP issues and can't just walk away now). Rd232 talk 12:43, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * An RfC seems a little pointless since my edit was intended only as a stepping stone toward a more NPOV article, and consensus could make changes at any point. My edit made two changes:
 * 1) move almost all of the political criticism that was in the lead down to a section that discussed his political views, and
 * 2) changed a tag I regarded as too large and too wordy to another (smaller) BLP tag. I think that no harm, and with three tags on the article, justified. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 12:58, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Discouraging discussion - nice. Summarising these changes like that - nice. Rd232 talk 13:20, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Well, you made a reply without content. Just accusing me of "discouraging discussion." How do you figure my reply discourages discussion? I stated the way I see this dispute, and accused you of doing that. But, since you are accusing me, I will mention that you have violated 3RR with an excuse of BLP violation. What BLP violation? If you show me anything in the article that violates BLP, I will happily remove it myself. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 13:38, 23 March 2009 (UTC)
 * The content of my reply, if you want me to spell it out, was that describing an RFC as pointless (before any external inut, which the topic badly needs) is discouraging discussion; and your summary of your edits left out the key changes. And if you don't see how simplistically describing someone as an anti-semite (plus removal of more accurate description of the subject's views) is a WP:BLP issue, I can't help you. You may disagree as to what should go in the article, fine; but how you can fail to see the nature of the dispute is beyond me and stretches my ability to WP:AGF quite a lot. Rd232 talk


 * Also this RFC is not about you - the diff of your changes given above reflects similar changes being disputed with other editors (and not just by me). This clearly suggests an RFC is necessary "as a stepping stone toward a more NPOV article". Rd232 talk 14:21, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * There are very reliable sources to support his antisemitism. That content is based on good sources, such as The Guardian. Moreover, his replies to the accusations (and no one -- including Arzmon -- denies the accusations are common) are included. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 15:00, 23 March 2009 (UTC)
 * No, there aren't "very reliable sources to support his antisemitism" as a statement of fact. The "good sources" you mention reveal a position which it is misleading to characterise as anti-semitism. The accusations are discussed in my version too. I'm not saying it's perfect, it could have more detail on the Jewish identity issue, but when the starting point is labelling him an anti-semite in the lead, that is insupportable. My version is a far better basis for ongoing editing. Rd232 talk 16:39, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I don't see anything ambiguous in this discussion of Atzmon's antisemitism . It is discussed in a very matter-of-fact way, and presents it as something well known. Atzmon seems to have actually cultivated that as part of his public image. Antisemitism is as much a part of his public image as Groucho's mustache was part of his public image. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 16:58, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * One person's opinion, in a blog (albeit a newspaper blog). Atzmon responded at length in a response blog on the Guardian website (a link I did add to the article, I don't know if it's still there). Under what WP policy is David Hirsh's opinion taken as fact regarding Gilad Atzmon's views whilst Gilad Atzmon's own views are disregarded? Rd232 talk 18:01, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I haven't previously edited this page (other than a format fix today), but I am aware of the controversy around Atzmon's views on Zionism. The page seems to quite well reflect what I know of the subject, although there is some repetition in the accusations of anti-semitism (e.g. the "rational to burn down a synagogue" alleged quote is repeated). Re:Malcolm Schosha's comment above, we cannot and must not assert in the article that Atzmon is an anti-semite, only that he has (notably) been accused of anti-semitism. Atzmon has denied anti-semitism and certainly hasn't cultivated it as part of his image; you risk conflating anti-Zionism with anti-semitism.
 * Regarding the POV of the references, Carol Moore's note that David Hirsh is not a NPOV commentator is quite correct, he is well-known for making ready accusations of anti-semitism. Any mention of Holocaust denial in the lead would be wrong, as it would give this minority POV undue weight.
 * Is it worth noting that he opposes an academic boycott of Israel?
 * Would a clarification of his position to the effect that he does not consider himself a Jew, and doesn't believe that there is a "Jewish race" enlighten his unique position? (sorry if I've missed its inclusion). "I do not consider myself a Jew... I am sympathetic towards religious Jews as much as I am sympathetic towards religious groups or religious belief in general, and yet, I am far less sympathetic towards the secular Jewish identity. I argue that once you strip Jewishness of its spiritual content you are left with mere racism"... "Sephardic Jews... are associated with what is labelled as oriental origin (Middle East, Mediterranean, Balkan, Arabia, etc.). The term Ashkenazi refers largely to Jews of European descent. But it is slightly more complicated again, as many of us know, the Ashkenazi Jews are in fact Khazarians. Their ancestors converted to Judaism around the 9th century. That fact is pretty embarrassing for the Zionists because if this is the case, then for most Ashkenazi Jews “home” means the land of the old Khazar kingdom (somewhere between the Caspian Sea and the Black Sea). Their geographical origins have nothing to do with Palestine whatsoever".
 * Would including a voice siding with Atzmon's right to speak add some balance, so it is not just him and some lukewarm support from the SWP? e.g. "One can read Atzmon and not agree with him, dislike his ideas or style, and especially when he critiques the mindset of Zionism and Jewish Identification as well as the mechanisms that protect Israel from having to act decently as is expected of any other nation in the world,, but no one should be permitted to deny him the possibility to exercise his right of free speech. One might not like what he says, whether the critic be Zionist or anti-Zionist, but shutting him up seems to be very old school left, right out of Stalinism".Counterpunch Fences and windows (talk) 19:29, 23 March 2009 (UTC)

<--backdent Just a note that the author of the piece above is David Hirsh who stakes his reputation assailing antisemitism. Not an NPOV source, as are many of the others - and more mainstream sources that copy what they say. More importantly, there obviously is a double standard in the real world about exploring and criticizing the psycho-dynamics and politics of Islam/Catholicism/etc. and their adherents and doing so to Judaism/Zionism and its adherents. Even the calmest, most intellectually factual and precise professors who dare to approach the latter subject are trashed. The question is: Should this double standard be allowed to be propagated on wikipedia?? This is the larger issue those editing the Atzmon article have to deal with. It's certainly the reason I have put Israel Palestine Collaboration banner on this talk page since the article obviously is within the parameters of the WikiProject Israel Palestine Collaboration which came out of the 2008 Request for arbitration on editing on Palestine-Israel articles. I think it is time for Wikipedia to discuss this issue on the Meta-level. Ideas on how to do that? CarolMooreDC (talk) 17:55, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * The source is The Guardian, not exactly famous as a defender of Zionism. David Hirsh is notable exactly on the subject of antisemitism. What is the complaint? Malcolm Schosha (talk) 19:40, 23 March 2009 (UTC)
 * "The source is The Guardian" implies it was in the news section; but it wasn't even printed as an opinion piece. It was just a blog, same as Atzmon's response. Rd232 talk 20:12, 23 March 2009 (UTC)

Views and Allegations of antisemitism and responses
I think that the two subsections, Views and Allegations of antisemitism and responses could be removed. That would do a lot to remove balance problems, and a detailed discussion of his political ideas in those sections seems unnecessary. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 14:19, 23 March 2009 (UTC)

I don't think they should be removed at all. Atzmon is more well known for his criticisms of Judaism than for his music. I don't see how it's a balance problem to label a "proud self-hating Jew" as such. Only in the sense of marketing, not in the sense of honest.y In addition, someone who states that Judaism is destroying the world is not merely an "anti-zionist." unless it's wikipedia's assertion that anti-zionism contains antisemitism. His positions are against Judaism, not Zionism. The page should reflect what he has actually said, not what it's editors consider convenient to frame him as. Drsmoo (talk) 14:57, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Rd232 has requested page protection for this article, and your two most recent edits to the article make it more likely that will happen. The issue, at this point, is not antisemitism. The issue is getting the article right according to WP rules. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 15:42, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * The article certanily wasn't right when i said that Atzmon denied being an anti-semite. He doesn't, in no way shape or form. Nor is he an "anti-zionist" activist, as most anti-zionist organizations want nothing to do with him. He defines himself as a proud self-hating Jew. The issue with this article is that some editors believe it is NPOV to publish quotes froma well known person that appear anti Jewish. It is not out of context, it is perfectly in context, and it is accurate. Drsmoo (talk) 15:58, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * In Atzmon's own words: "Following the growing outrage of some Zionists as well as crypto Zionists at my critical writings, I find it important to mention that in none of my political texts or interviews have I ever used any kind of racially orientated arguments. My criticism of Zionism and Jewish identity is merely ideological and philosophical. ...For me racism is categorically wrong and it is that very realisation that made me into a devoted opponent of Israel and of Zionism." Rd232 talk 18:04, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * It is ok to use denials of Atzmon's antisemitism, as long as you use a reliable secondary source, and do not delete the other sources that say he is antisemitic. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 18:17, 23 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Self-published sources are permissible as appropriate (WP:SELFPUB part of WP:V), and WP:NPOV quoting of Atzmon's views from interviews and his Guardian blog makes his views perfectly clear anyway. I have not deleted any sources (not that criticised Atzmon anyway), only summarised them. Rd232 talk 18:39, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * re: original suggestion, are you saying nothing should be said about his political views in the whole article? Unclear. CarolMooreDC (talk) 17:34, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * False statements about other editors views: Drsmoo's comment "some editors believe it is NPOV to publish quotes froma well known person that appear anti Jewish." is absolutely false. The word 'context" is used more than three dozen times on this page because keeping his comments in context has been the main point of a couple of editors who have a problem with your promoting your POV that he IS an antisemite and everything he says must be in that light. You should retract your false, uncivil statement. CarolMooreDC (talk) 18:15, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Following Rd232's comments above, it is relevant to note that Atzmon's reference to "crypto Zionists" is a specific attack on me and other anti-Zionist Jews; see his essay 1001 Lies abour Gilad Atzmon "my latest book... is in fact all about Roland Rance and his crypto Zionist brothers". For Atzmon, to denounce Zionism as a Jew is in fact to endorse and embrace Zionism: "I do believe that Jews Against Zionism are genuine. They simply fight Zionism without realising that they themselves are Zionists" (The 3rd Category and the Palestinian Solidarity Movement), "‘anti-Zionist Jews’ are basically a bunch of ‘Just Peace UK’ (a left Zionist group). If this is the case we should never take JAZ seriously again. If this is the case, Jews Against Zionism are operating as undercover Zionist agents" (The Protocols of the Elders Of London). This is why many anti-Zionists atgue that Atzmon is an antisemite, not an anti-Zionist, since he explicitly denounces any expression of identity as a Jew.
 * I have just noticed that there is no mention in the article of Atzmon's attack on the Bund. In his charmingly named essay | Swindler's List, he writes "Bundists believe that instead of robbing Palestinians we should all get together and rob who is considered to be the rich, the wealthy and the strong in the name of working class revolution... The Jewish nationalist would rob Palestine in the name of the right of self-determination, the Jewish progressive is there to rob the ruling class and even international capital in the name of world working class revolution". Could there be a clearer exposition of the view that all Jews are involved in a conscious conspiracy to defraud and oppress non-Jews? For this reason, and in contrast to such people as Noam Chomsky and Norman Finkelstein, Atzmon is characterised both by Zionists and by anti-Zionists — who agree on little else — as an antisemite. This is much more than the regular name-calling and defamation thrown up at critics of Israel. In fact, the charge of antisemitism has been so  discredited by constant misuse, that many people are understandably sceptical when confronted by a genuine example. RolandR (talk) 19:16, 23 March 2009 (UTC)
 * At least you have an obvious conflict of interest. Still doesn't justify such selective quotation. Atzmon says "Robbery cannot be the way forwards. Whether it is Palestinians, Iraqis, world banking or even the Tsar himself. Robbing involves a categorical dismissal of the other. Hence, it must be premised on some inherent self-righteousness. Robbery and plunder doesn’t live in peace with a deep understanding of the notion of human equality. Sadly we have to admit that hate-ridden plunder of other people’s possessions made it into the Jewish political discourse both on the left and right. The Jewish nationalist would rob Palestine in the name of the right of self-determination, the Jewish progressive is there to rob the ruling class and even international capital in the name of world working class revolution. I better stay out of it." Rd232 talk 20:02, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Bullshit. Could you please remove your edit, which is a WP:SOAP violation? In addition, your attitude toward Jews indicates that you have a WP:COI problem of your own in editing this article. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 20:27, 23 March 2009 (UTC)
 * [redacted to avoid indefinite universe-wide block for violation of WP:CIVIL]. "my attitude towards Jews." splutter. Rd232 talk 20:52, 23 March 2009 (UTC)

It seems my previous edit was too subtle, and Rd232 did not get the point. When Rd232 wrote: Sadly we have to admit that hate-ridden plunder of other people’s possessions made it into the Jewish political discourse both on the left and right, that statement is antisemitic. Is that clear? It is an antisemitic statement. The reason is that there are crooks and cheaters in every religion, and anyone who says that the the problem is particularly Jewish, as Rd232 does say, has made an antisemitic statement. As a result, if Rd232 does not promise to stop editing this article, because of an obvious conflict of interest, this discussion is going to continue on AN/I. Have I been clear? The problem is that Rd232 has gone from discussing antisemitic statements to making an antisemitic statement. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 21:49, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * It seems that you have not read Rd232's edit carefully, and not read the sources at all. The phrase you object to was a quote from Atzmon, and Rd232 was criticising me for quoting it partially rather than in full. So Rd232 does not say what you accuse him of saying, and I think you should strike out that part of your remarks. RolandR (talk) 22:06, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Yes, sorry about the mistake. But there is nothing really to apologize for, or need to strike anything, because I criticized the quote, not Rd232 who I know nothing about as a person. As for knowing the sources, it seems that I can count on you to memorize Atzmon's essays and interviews. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 11:51, 24 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Yes, at least that second para from Malcolm clarifies the misunderstanding, and I can understand the reaction now. Though again, Malcolm's claim that that sentence is "anti-semitic" isn't one I can support. Example: I'm British. Is the following statement "anti-British"? Sadly we have to admit that hate-ridden plunder of other people’s possessions made it into the British political discourse both on the left and right. Only if you read into it a claim which isn't there, which is that all British support "plunder". In conclusion, you're expecting to find anti-semitism and this is clouding your judgement. Rd232 talk 23:01, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Yes, that would certainly be anti British. Perticularly if it wasn't true. Drsmoo (talk) 02:03, 24 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Well you're entitled to your opinion. But in respect of the above textual analysis it places a greater weight of interpretation on the English language than it may reasonably bear. Rd232 talk 03:19, 24 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Your example (would it be anti British?) omits the most bigoted part of the statement "The Jewish nationalist would rob Palestine in the name of the right of self-determination, the Jewish progressive is there to rob the ruling class and even international capital in the name of world working class revolution" The statement that Jews on either end of the spectrum from nationalist to progressive are intrinsically robbers is an antisemitic statement. Drsmoo (talk) 03:33, 24 March 2009 (UTC)
 * "intrinsically" is complete interpolation on your part. And he simply isn't saying that all Jewish nationalists believe X; he's saying that where nationalists are affected by the robbery discourse, this is the reasoning. And for progessives, the reasoning is Y. But X and Y are suffering from the same fallacy, which is "Robbery and plunder doesn’t live in peace with a deep understanding of the notion of human equality." The paragraph is actually anti-racist (!), it's talking at heart about equality. This is one of Atzmon's most misunderstood and misrepresented points: he argues Zionism is a form of Jewish racism, and we'd all be better off without racism, without exception, even if that has certain consequences for the Jewish state of Israel (getting rid of it qua Jewish state) and for Jewish identity. Rd232 talk 05:20, 24 March 2009 (UTC)
 * That might be a possible interpretation if he were writing about nationalists. But this is an essay about the Bund, an explicitly anti-Zionist, internationalist revolutionary socialist group. The fact that he has explicitly attacked anti-Zionist Jews as "undercover Zionists" and "ethno-tribalist activists", and sometimes in far more obscene terms, is surely evidence that his attack is not on Zionism and Zionists, but on anyone who has thhe temerity to identify as a Jew. RolandR (talk) 08:39, 24 March 2009 (UTC)
 * I hope people are finished trying to decide for themselves if a particular statement is antisemitic. Our job is to reflect WP:RS. CarolMooreDC (talk) 17:00, 24 March 2009 (UTC)

Choices: Links only or full explication

 * The problem with Atzmon of course is he isn't a professor trying to construct a coherent world view but an artist and provocateur who tries to make people think, so he may too often react or skiff or provoke in an ideologically inconsistent fashion. (For example, how can you be an ex-Jew and a "self-hating jew? And I'm sure somewhere he denies he's an anti semite, even as in other quotes he says he thinks the word is a misnomer.) Therefore there really are two options:
 * 1) Say something to that effect (which some WP:RS surely will generally support) and link to several of his pages of articles, interviews, and to the four or five most credible critiques of him (Perhapswhat User talk:Malcolm Schosha was suggesting?
 * 2) Introduce his views with that fact and then use WP:RS and his quotes to try to tease out what the heck he's saying. We were trying to do that (without such an intro) in earlier version which with various small changes stuck for almost a year until March 21 when User:THF effectively gutted it. Which allows Mr. Rance to introduce his issues as part of Atzmon's political conflicts (though perhaps that general topic needs to be another section! ;-)CarolMooreDC (talk) 20:33, 23 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I tried to do something in this direction (if I understand you correctly) and Drsmoo immediately reverted (see section below). He didn't even seem to notice that I removed some things he'd consider POV (because in those cases they actually were). So his reversion put those back... Rd232 talk 13:29, 24 March 2009 (UTC)


 * "Trying to make people think"? Or, perhaps, he has just discovered that the noterity his antisemitic remarks bring is good for his business? We do see this man very differently. It is beyond my understanding how anyone can excuse the kind of disgusting stuff he says, as 'thought provoking'. The only thinking he is provoking is skinhead thinking. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 17:12, 24 March 2009 (UTC)

Almost giving up
If nobody has any opinion on Drsmoo's reversion of my 2 hours' work NPOVing the article (diff, new version) then I wash my hands of this article, I'm not prepared to battle with POV warriors on my own; I've deliberately stayed awayed from such politically controversial topics because this sort of thing just pisses me off far too much. I came to this article because of the BLP issues (following the initial WP:BLPN posting), but if I'm not going to get enough support from the politically neutral (despite RFC and postings at BLP and elsewhere), then I give up. I've managed to remove the more libellous mischaracterisations but somehow I doubt that will last if I unwatch the article. Que sera sera. One more point, to those who insist on seeing him as a bigot: do not forget that (a) he is not a native speaker and (b) most of his remarks are oral ones and (c) that none of his remarks, taken in context by those seeking to understand his argument rather than see him as an "anti-semite", contradict Atzmon's repeated claim that he is not. He is against a Jewish ideology he sees as racist, which is not the same thing at all. Rd232 talk 13:29, 24 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Did anyone call Atzmon a "racist"? I know I did not, because there is no Jewish race. Judaism is a religion, having many diverse cultural aspects which serve to link Jews to Judaism, even when they have little (or no) interest in practicing the religion.


 * It is very difficult to edit articles like this, and I would not wish it on anyone. I am sorry about any occasion that I trampled on your feelings with my hobnail work boots. -- Malcolm Schosha (talk) 14:11, 24 March 2009 (UTC)


 * But Malcolm, there is no such thing as a black race either, but this does not mean that black people do not experience racism. In fact, I do not accept the whole concept of race (which I believe was invented by racists), but this does not mean that racism is non-existent. Jews can experience racism whether or not they are a race, whether or not "race" really exists. So, in my usage at least, to call Atzmon an antisemite is indeed to call him a racist. I appreciate that we may use terms differently, and talk pages can help to clarify this. If some editors here consider antisemitism to be equivalent to, or a sub-category of, racism, while others think that these are entirely separate categories, then we are unlikely to reach any agreement on use of the term in the article. RolandR (talk) 14:20, 24 March 2009 (UTC)


 * No. There is bigotry in abundance against Jews, but it can not logically be allowed as racism. In Israel I saw Jews from Poland who looked Polish, from Italy that looked Italian, from Ethiopia who looked Ethiopian, from India who looked Indian. Moreover, any person who wants can convert, and after conversion they are as Jewish as a Jew directly descended from David haMelech. It is not racism. (If you are inclined to argue the point, it might be better to move the discussion to my talk page.) Malcolm Schosha (talk) 14:29, 24 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Of course its racism. How can hostility/discrimination etc against members of a group of people (by virtue of membership of that group), when that group is self-defined largely by descent (albeit with confusing exceptions due to the Ashkenazi element) not be racist? You seem to imply that racism requires discriminating based on appearance; this may be the most common way to create the category of race (a completely artificial concept, as Roland notes), but it's not the only way. Antisemitism cannot be other than a category of racism. Rd232 talk 14:41, 24 March 2009 (UTC)


 * There is no Jewish race. How can there be racism without a race? Nazis thought there was a Jewish race. Why should Jews agree with Nazi mistakes? Malcolm Schosha (talk) 14:46, 24 March 2009 (UTC)
 * That is an extremely tendentious and unhelpful thing to say. And the view behind it does not appear to be common. WP article "Jew": "the Jewish people, an ethnoreligious group that traces its ancestry to the Israelites or Hebrews of the Ancient Near East." cf Who is a Jew?. Rd232 talk 16:12, 24 March 2009 (UTC)


 * rd232- pls dont give up. the biggest problem with this type of article is that editors like yourself without an ideological stake end up being chased away by zealous edit warriors.  maybe this needs to be taken to the next step in dispute resolution?   untwirl (talk) 14:50, 24 March 2009 (UTC)


 * It is amusing to hear an edit warrior, and single purpose account, accuse others of edit warring. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 14:57, 24 March 2009 (UTC)
 * recognize yourself in that comment, malcolm? count my reverts and compare to yours and then tell me who is the edit warrior. you might want to compare our block logs while youre at it . . .  untwirl (talk) 15:23, 24 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Someone who undoes major revisions without even the courtesy of an edit summary Malcolm diff should be rather careful about accusing others of edit warring.Rd232 talk 16:12, 24 March 2009 (UTC)


 * As I said, Untwirl a single purpose account, who is usually found trying to enforce anti-Zionist and antisemitic POVs in some of the most disputed articles in the Israel/Palestine disputes. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 15:34, 24 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Are you aware that you're accusing a fellow editor of being a sockpuppet? cf Single-purpose account. As to POV warriorness, you should look in the mirror: your block log v Untwirl's block log). And assuming that you meant Untwirl is very focussed on Israel as a topic, well your interest in pottery apart, your recent contributions are pretty similar, topic-wise Malcolm contribs and Untirl contribs. Show some respect to your fellow editors, even (or especially) if they disagree with you: per WP:ATTACK, remember WP:CIVIL and WP:AGF. Rd232 talk 16:12, 24 March 2009 (UTC)
 * lol - ec - i am not surprised by this attack, coming as it does from an editor as well known as yourself for disruptive editing (block log) and incivility (helpful comments like calling editors "schmucks, creeps, and liars" and block extended for saying an article was "gang raped").  untwirl (talk) 16:18, 24 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I said that Untwirl a single purpose account, which is true. I have no idea if he/she is a sock, and have given up worrying about that problem.


 * As for "respect", I have no respect for the editors here who are trying to white-wash the obvious antisemitism of a man who revels on the notoriety it brings him. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 16:27, 24 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I might add that yesterday you violated 3RR, using an unfounded claim of BLP as a lame excuse. I could have filed a 3RR complaint, but chose not to do so because I understood that you were frustrated and that you thought you were doing the right thing. Unfortunately, you are not willing to show much understanding or sympathy for those on the other side of the issue. The fact is that your whining about this article being difficult to edit is a little revolting, and I wish you would either suck it up, or find something else to edit. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 16:44, 24 March 2009 (UTC)


 * User:Malcolm Schosha writes: "I have no respect for the editors here who are trying to white-wash the obvious antisemitism of a man who revels on the notoriety it brings him." That's your opinion but is it really necessary to WP:soapbox and WP:attack with it? Isn't that a bit WP:uncivil? Some of us will continue to try to make the article NPOV by at least giving proper context to his statements that, in context, usually - not always - sound more innocuous than portrayed.
 * Since you force people to express their POV's with your accusations, let me say that it seems to me Atzmon is just a very aggressive ex-Israel (Sabra) who is letting his anger/disgust with fellow Israelis and their supporters hang out in England where most people, including fellow Jews, are more used to polite discourse. (Not having visited London/England, please tell me if I'm wrong.) Having lived in New York City during my twenties and mostly hung out with very assertive and even aggressive Jews (who helped shape my own adult personality), it seems to me he's more artistically/politically fusing meshugenah with chutzpah to express himself, sometimes getting in over his head. An even more "out there" Abbie Hoffman. But even if I changed my mind tomorrow and agreed with you, I still think we must carefully look at the WP:RS who accuse him and identify their prejudices - or their sources if it's Reuters quoting a prejudice source. CarolMooreDC (talk) 17:16, 24 March 2009 (UTC)


 * (ec) malcolm, your strong desire to inpugn the subject of this article make it appear that you should refrain from editing, especially considering the importance for the project of the blp policy. untwirl (talk) 17:21, 24 March 2009 (UTC)
 * He might consider taking a wikibreak from the topic, at least - it isn't going anywhere and editing those pottery articles is probably a whole lot better for his blood pressure! Seriously, there are a number of editors here whose commitment to WP:NPOV seems less than full, which they might consider thinking about (not to mention WP:BLP). And adding personal attacks on other editors isn't helping any. Rd232 talk 17:59, 24 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I spoke only of what he has said. For all I know the man himself is a saint. I think there is pretty wide agreement in the sources that what he says about Jews (and he says a lot on that subject) is, at best, deplorable. If you want to find someone who thinks that sort of talk is good, you will need to look at a source such as David Duke. What you, or I think about him is irrelevant. What counts is the sources. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 18:09, 24 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I have done very little editing of pottery articles, although I know the subject well. Perhaps you should edit pottery articles also. It is not possible that you know less about pottery than about antisemitism. Might calm your nerves. By the way, my blood pressure is always normal, never high. And I do not get excited. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 18:20, 24 March 2009 (UTC)

(outdent) i was about to congratulate you and agree with your admission that "What you, or I think about him is irrelevant" - and then you went and insulted rd again. for shame. untwirl (talk) 18:29, 24 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Where is the insult? He does not know anything about pottery, or antisemitism. Is there something insulting about not knowing? Malcolm Schosha (talk) 18:34, 24 March 2009 (UTC)
 * *sigh* untwirl (talk) 18:58, 24 March 2009 (UTC)

Removal of confusing, POV, attack material till properly written/contexted
I removed one whole paragraph and a couple parts of paragraphs that were out of context and/or confusing (including in time order) and/or polemical rants obviously meant to support the view point of a couple people here that Atzmon is an antisemite and everything he says must be put in that light.

I am NOT opposed to all those topics and even most of those quotes being in the article, so please do not accuse me of sanitizing it. It just has to be done in a way that does not violate WP:BLP and WP:NPOV.

Again, I think the best thing is to have several paragraphs that deal with his core beliefs, especially most up-to-date ones, and criticisms thereof. Each paragraph should be dominated by WP:RS but quoting Atzmon where he or others reply to any accusations or where it is necessary to be NPOV - If you truly believe he is an antisemite doing so should prove that to any reader. But cherry picking quotes from different eras to build a case in a dramatic polemical fashion - as material I deleted did - is just POV. CarolMooreDC (talk) 01:37, 25 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Major changes need to be discussed before, not after, the changes are made. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 11:28, 25 March 2009 (UTC)
 * I'm forced to agree; the result (re political views) is a bit of a mess, structurally. And I've already demonstrated that a major rewrite is just going to be stonewalled (and AFAIR I merely moved things about and made them fit better and expanded some quotes). Given the controversy, it would be a lot more constructive to discuss separate issues, starting maybe with changing one paragraph. Your work last night can be useful input for this, it needn't be wasted, but you've got to expect to defend each substantial change. Rd232 talk 12:50, 25 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I agree political views was a mess and was dealing with poorly sourced and POV problems, including cherry picked polemics to make him look bad. Again, we need to divide into different paragraphs on different topics he addresses, with criticism of those specific view at end. That's the most NPOV way to do it. If we are going to revert, let's go back to  before USer:THF who admitted he was out to prove Atzmon an antisemite made his changes, despite many point by point protestations. Considering many paragraphs repeat material in others, slanting it, in a confusing jumble that is only NPOV thing to do. We can't just criticize ONE paragraph without dealing with same material in other paragraphs. But I'll have to deal with later today. CarolMooreDC (talk) 12:59, 25 March 2009 (UTC)
 * One can criticise one issue at a time. And for instance in my version I've got 3 paras under Views: Israel, Jewish Lobby / anti-semitism, and Judaism/Jewish ideology. Could be improved of course but a start to organise the views. Then the criticism section doesn't repeat the issues, it merely describes who's criticised him, plus one para on Atzmon's general response. This seems to me well-organised and a good starting point for further editing, but it's been stonewalled without explanation. Rd232 talk 13:16, 25 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Too much to absorb. Have to do it point by point per below, first eliminating the worst stuff. CarolMooreDC (talk) 14:01, 25 March 2009 (UTC)

Biggest Source/POV problems fixed last night
These are the initial small changes I made to fix sourcing and obvious POV problems, some of which related to not showing context. Please explain whatever reason you have for NOT allowing them in. Please ignore any edits I made not in this list since they will be topics for another time. PS: If no one protests these changes I will make them soon.

Deleting his view that Zionism is racism
Since this in one of his major points, even if some editors would prefer his emphasis on it be left out as context:

diff POV to delete added information which gives actual context to what he says, ie my addition of bold:
 * is known as an author and activist who is critical of both Zionism and Judaism for "supremacist, racist" tendencies.”
 * i don't think this quote belongs in the lead. untwirl (talk) 00:23, 26 March 2009 (UTC)

diff Putting back views of Editors of PTT in bold:
 * He is a co-founder of and contributor to the web site Palestine Think Tank, established in May 2008 by individuals who believe "Zionism is racism." Its goal is "to educate those who don't know what Zionism is so that they are able to see how damaging it is and how it is a just cause to stop it".REF:About PalestineThinkTank.com page

Redundant statement
diff: Please let's delete this as Redundant to statement a couple paragraphs back
 * Atzmon's harsh criticisms of Jewish identity have led to allegations that he is antisemitic.

POV "jews killed jesus" description
diff for more accurate NPOV statement in bold since BOTH sources use the longer quote and it's POV to shorten it to a defacto slur phrase].
 * Changing “Atzmon has also been criticized for saying that the Jews killed Jesus” to (corrected later) Atzmon has been criticized for saying that the Jews of 2000 years ago "were responsible for the killing of Jesus"REF: "paul1112" and "onanti"

Context of why Lewis said what he said
diff NPOV, accuracy expansion of Lewis comment - new in bold:
 * John Lewis, writing about an interview with Atzmon in The Guardian in March 2009 soon after the prime minister of Turkey, Recep Tayyip Erdoğan, cited Atzmon during a debate with Israeli president Shimon Peres, said Atzmon's attacks on Israel, philosophical texts on Jewish identity, comic novels have overshadowed his music. "It is Atzmon's blunt anti-Zionism rather than his music that has given him an international profile, particularly in the Arab world, where his essays are widely read."REF:Lewis

Historical context of statement
Diff in bold shows historical context of statement and all statements should have that where relevant:
 * Atzmon also has been criticized for arguing during the 2006 Israeli bombing of Lebanon that Israel is more evil than Adolph Hitler's Germany because Hitler sought "rational objectives" (conquering other countries for Lebensraum), while Atzmon alleges that Israel seeks to destroy its neighbors.

That's a start. CarolMooreDC (talk) 14:01, 25 March 2009 (UTC)

Rewriting possibly libelous Holocaust denial paragraph
This is so poorly written it needs to be rewritten asap, which I'll do later. Last night first I dealt with one poor source then deleted it noting it needed rewrite per BLP:

Diff for inaccurate sourcing: It is not clear in source that the unnamed organizer of the event describes Atzmon’s view, NOT Atzmon; you have to go back to german version for him to say that.
 * Atzmon strongly rejects the accusation, noting that he only disputes the "6 million Jews killed" figure.REF:Atzmon in Uruknet

Diff CarolMooreDC (talk) 14:01, 25 March 2009 (UTC)
 * United Kingdom anti-Zionists were upset by his distribution of a Holocaust revisionist/denialist paper by Paul Eisen, leading to accusations of Holocaust denial.  Atzmon strongly rejects the accusation, noting that he only disputes the "6 million Jews killed" figure.


 * rewrote the POV and quasi-libelous paragraph so that it is about the facts, correctly sourced, with appropriate replies from Atzmon. I hope we don't have to hear any more of this business about trying to "sanitize" his views when people are just trying to be accurate, balanced and not allow the article to descend into a WP:attack page. Other paragraphs on his views also suffer from these kinds of problems and will be fixed as I establish WP:RS that actually describe his views as opposed to Opinion pieces in WP:RS that trash them. I hope we've give up this POV expressed above that everything must prove the point that he IS an antisemite and again will let the reader judge for themselves and looking at what WP:RS have to say.  ;-)


 * PS. I think i finally figured out right way to use German article and Uruknet, neither of which is perfect. Rather than issue my four paragraph analysis, I just put it in. But we can conduct a separate debate on that if you like. Thank you. CarolMooreDC (talk) 14:25, 27 March 2009 (UTC)

Why was the new improved version reverted
Assuming you have not bothered to carefully read the sources, etc. let me make clear what is wrong with the version Malcolm reverted to:
 * It alleges that Ms. Rizzo also calls the paper a Holocaust revisionist/denialist paper when she goes out of her way NOT to characterize it thusly.  Instead Rizzo names Jews Against Zionism as saying so, and that should be mentioned to NOT misrepresent her. Similarly Aaronovitch should be identified. The other two sources merely cite other's allegations and clearly are POV piling on and actually should be deleted.


 * You deleted Atzmon's specific responses on the Eisen paper, including from a secondary source, which is incredibly NPOV. And you don't explain why you delete both sources to his statement on 6 million. It's POV to put in a General statement that makes him look bad, and delete a more specific and explanative one.

Your actions suggest you are still pursuing making this article conform to your POV opinions expressed above including: "I don't see anything ambiguous in this discussion of Atzmon's antisemitism" and "The only thinking he is provoking is skinhead thinking." and "your attitude toward Jews indicates that you have a WP:COI problem of your own in editing this article." and "I have no respect for the editors here who are trying to white-wash the obvious antisemitism of a man who revels on the notoriety it brings him."

These are a serious BLP violation which must be addressed, here or elsewhere. Feel free to explain yourself or to revert back to my version asap. CarolMooreDC (talk) 15:21, 27 March 2009 (UTC)


 * There seems to be no BLP violation. There is no doubt that the event occurred, Atzmon himself admits as much in his letter. The only issue in doubt is Atzmon's intent, and his own explanation of his intent is included. The article just reports that there are accusations that he is a holocaust denier (there can be no doubt that those accusations do exist), and reports his reply to those accusations. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 15:31, 27 March 2009 (UTC)


 * By the way, Carol, if you would support my suggestion, that entire disputed section would be removed from the article. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 15:35, 27 March 2009 (UTC)


 * You misrepresent Rizzo, you pile on other accusations, you do not allow him reply re: Eisen and you delete relevant sources. These are serious. It's illogical to say there is "no doubt" accusations exist in a wiki article unless properly sourced NPOV accusations are presented.
 * Frankly, as I have referred to several times, and as the banner on top of page clearly states, your POV opinions on Atzmon and other editors and your related revert habits may be a clear violation of Requests_for_arbitration/Palestine-Israel_articles which would be addressed at Administrators' noticeboard/Arbitration enforcement with possible sanctions like 1rr a day, etc. So please reconsider your actions and questionable defenses of them.
 * Also, I don't understand if you want to remove the "allegations" section title or all accusations of antisemitism, though it seems in either case Drsmoo and User:THC and others who might drop by would have a reason to complain about "sanitizing" the article. CarolMooreDC (talk) 15:57, 27 March 2009 (UTC)


 * When there is an editing dispute, which this is, a certain amount of compromise is necessary. I offered to resolve the dispute by removing two sub-sections, which contains some content that both sides in the dispute would rather keep. Most of the dispute is over the content of those two sections. Those sections do virtually nothing to improve the article, but do relate to the POVs of both sides. If there is no willingness to compromise, we will just have to argue on. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 17:07, 27 March 2009 (UTC)


 * When there are two editors who have strongly called such moves sanitizing and neither has replied, I don't think we can proceed. (Plus the history of this article was just new addition of accusation upon new addition by various editors.)
 * More importantly, where's you offer of compromise on your revert an accurately sourced, more NPOV version of the "Holocaust denial" issue to your inaccurately sourced, POV version? CarolMooreDC (talk) 18:07, 27 March 2009 (UTC)


 * The change I reverted was to restore sourced material, the facts of which are not in question. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 18:53, 27 March 2009 (UTC)


 * But the POV of the statements, of it's being placed in views when it belongs in allegations with other Jews v Zionism/Aaronovitch accusations, and the POV behavior of the person who is reverting are in question. Do you even realize that everything in "views" used to be in Allegations of antisemitism? See original version.  CarolMooreDC (talk) 19:02, 27 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Why should I care about how the article used to be? I have been trying to make the article more balanced, not more the way it used to be (which was very POV). I wish you would stop complaining about me. If you think I have done something wrong, I am sorry, and I am doing my best. But if you really think I am doing something wrong, you can try complaining on AN/I. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 20:12, 27 March 2009 (UTC)


 * First, the issue is WP:RS opinion pieces previously used only for allegations now being used as sources of fact. I'm working on a listing of NON-opinion WP:RS usable for the views/politics section. At least you replied to this issue, even though you have ignored several specific issues with your repeated revert above, which, combined with your POV vs Atzmon/et al are problematic behaviors per Requests_for_arbitration/Palestine-Israel_articles. CarolMooreDC (talk) 14:51, 28 March 2009 (UTC)

Both versions in/Both Related to Jews V Zionism/Aaronovich
I just noticed that both versions are now in the article. More importantly, the Holocaust Denial accusations arose out of same mid-2005 Jews V Zionism/Aaronovich accusations and they should be linked in same paragraph, in the allegations section. This is where commonsense and good BLP/RS meet ;-) CarolMooreDC (talk) 18:32, 27 March 2009 (UTC)

Rewrite, another approach
What I suggest is that Malcolm Schosha (talk) 15:32, 25 March 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) The Section now called Politics be kept pretty much as is. I think it is fairly well balanced and sums up Atzmon's views and what the controversies about those views are.
 * 2) The sections called Views and Allegations of antisemitism and responses should be removed from the article because trying to get them to the point where editors agree could take weeks, months, or forever; and those views are just are not that important. For instance, I do not see why anyone needs to know that Atzmon can cite Emmanuel Levinas in a way that totally misrepresents Levinas (who was an enthusiastic Zionist). There should be a link to Atzmon's site, but his views are not important enough to have attracted much serious attention from scholarly sources.


 * The views section is written as a jumbled polemic to make him look bad. Removing some mention/link to accusations of antisemitism would be challenged by lots of people as sanitizing. I don't necessarily defend everything in there, since the article has never been approached in a systematic fashion. Therefore I do not like your suggestions. CarolMooreDC (talk) 19:29, 25 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I do not understand your point. Are you saying it is ok to remove the "Views" subsection? Whatever the case, I want it to be clear that I oppose the changes you have suggested. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 19:39, 25 March 2009 (UTC)


 * The Levinas thing is another example of WP editors mangling Atzmon's words. As ever, in the context of the interview Atzmon isn't implying Levinas agrees with him: "It is perplexing - you would expect that after what the Jewish people had gone through, after it was very clear to them that the European nations, not just the Germans, but the French, the Ukrainians the Romanians and the Poles spat them out, you would expect they would start a new page where they would be very reflective and very, very careful. (new para) Some Jewish philosophers were completely sure this was what was going to happen; one philosopher, Emanuel Levinas, said: 'Now we must be at the forefront of the fight against racism. We must make sure this never happens again'. (new para) Not only was this not the case, but three years after the liberation of Auschwitz they were ethnically cleansing the population from Palestine and their brutality is now far more obvious, manifested, celebrated." Rd232 talk 20:21, 25 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Is that supposed to be better? It still misrepresents Levinas. But my point had nothing to do Atzmon's reading comprehension problems. The point is that there is nothing notable about what he thinks about Levinas. I suppose if he had knitting as a hobby we should include some examples of that in the article too.


 * What I see going on here is some editors who seem to like Atzmon's personal POV about Zionism and Jews, and want to stuff as much of it into the article as possible, even if there is no reason to go on at length about what a jazz musician thinks about anything but jazz.


 * So far I have gotten no reply to my suggestion (above) from you or CarolMooreDC. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 21:18, 25 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Well, OK, I'd support your proposal if I thought it would stick. But it seems almost inevitable that the Politics section will then be expanded and the situation will be much the same. However I'd be willing to give it a go. At root it does remain true that his views are not all that notable (aside from talks he hasn't really done anything political, and it hasn't generated all that much WP:RS interest), and are given undue weight in the article at present. Rd232 talk 23:21, 25 March 2009 (UTC)
 * views section should be removed completely, but some of allegations and responses seems notable and should be retained. politics section needs fixing, too. esp - twice saying "accused of antisemitism."   untwirl (talk) 00:30, 26 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Views should not be removed if there are WP:RS saying they are notable. CarolMooreDC (talk) 02:52, 26 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Rd232, thanks for your willingness to give it a try. But, without enough support from other editors, things will have to be worked out differently. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 11:41, 26 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Carol, the WP:RS don't actually say his views are notable; it's important to be clear about that, we're judging notability from a handful of WP:RS mentioning his views, not WP:RS saying those views are notable. And notability of his views isn't particularly high by number of WP:RS (count them...), in which circumstance lots of detail isn't desperately appropriate (though WP:NPOV isn't particularly explicit for this situation, I think this is widely accepted), even if they weren't troublesomely controversial. A summary suffices (if there were no WP:RS obviously we wouldn't mention them at all). Given all the work put in it's not a nice outcome, but it may be the best one. Rd232 talk 22:20, 26 March 2009 (UTC)


 * TO reply, I agree with idea, as I also expressed, that others will not allow this section to be excised. Re: WP:RS about his views which has been brought up here. Note that interviews in WP:RS publications which obviously are edited by authors should be WP:RS for what he says. Given he has equal footing in a debate with Aaronovitch on the topic of antisemitism at the [Sunday Times]] Oxford Literary Festival this weekend, it is an indication that a jazz musicians views can be politically notable. After all Ronald Reagan was once just an actor and labor union president but his political views quickly became notable when he pushed them out there and others acknowledged them. :-)CarolMooreDC (talk) 16:15, 27 March 2009 (UTC)
 * You've answered a slightly different question. If Atzmon becomes President of the US then his views will be a whole lot more notable; at present the notability of his views is not zero but not very high. A jazz musician giving the odd talk and some interviews and having a printed commentary and a newspaper blog about his views is hardly in the same ballpark as someone running for high public office. So a short summary is appropriate, more than a fisking (which is causing most of the heat here). Rd232 talk


 * Reagan's views became notable sometime before he was elected. But really let's not discuss comparisons and deal with sources and alternatives I offer when I come up with them. I'm just saying don't rule out before hand. CarolMooreDC (talk) 17:48, 27 March 2009 (UTC)

letters to the editor
FYI, I took a question I had, concerning the use of this as a source in the article, to WP:Reliable sources/Noticeboard. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 13:51, 26 March 2009 (UTC)

Additional current problems with article
Fixing some immediately, some soon unless good reason for not changing given; others not yet fixed above will be fixed after finish complete survey of most reliable sources to start using them more accurately in an NPOV way.


 * http://www.bbc.co.uk/music/release/grp2/ is NOT a source for statement “Atzmon has fused his roles as a critic of Judaism” and is WP:OR


 * Unnecessary repeats of same reference in paragraph in Novels section and a paragraph with Gilchrest as source


 * Note that Wikilink can be improved by adding Wikilink external links to sites that do NOT have articles - especially when, as in one case, an article was deleted.


 * Will bring KAMM to WP:RSNoticeboard since he should not be use as a source for facts as he is here when he clearly is rabidly prejudiced against Atzmon as expressed here.


 * I think we need an neutral opinion from WP:RSNoticeboard on reliability of the two German translations versus the not clearly sourced statements from the organizer of the event, before I try to use either to improve that section.


 * Also, for WP:RSNoticeboard or WP:BLP - can sources that merely label a person with some negative term be quoted, if the don't cite evidence? Especially if a mere throw away comment in article on another topic?


 * Ref problem: Ref 37: # ^ Cite error: Invalid ref tag; no text was provided for refs named paul1112

''Please reply below and not in between this list. Thanks '' CarolMooreDC (talk) 23:59, 26 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Excess verbiage In italics Criticism has also come from further afield; for example the Swedish Committee Against Anti-Semitism


 * "Ref problem: Ref 37: # ^ Cite error: Invalid ref tag; no text was provided for refs named paul1112"


 * That is one I fixed a few days ago, but people will persist in removing references, without checking that this does not leave orphaned refname tags. Fixed again. RolandR (talk) 00:18, 27 March 2009 (UTC)

Well, my closing remark (I'm unwatching this article) is that we've dropped Malcolm's proposal above without sufficient discussion. In particular, Carol didn't respond to my last comment above on notability of his views. Good luck all. Rd232 talk 15:56, 27 March 2009 (UTC)
 * OK, now she has and I've responded. Do consider the idea of radically trimming the amount of space given to his views and the criticism and discussion of them. Bye. Rd232 talk 16:45, 27 March 2009 (UTC)

Corrections to WP:OR/Coatrack problems in a paragraph
First everything in this first paragraph under views (like the second one) is from articles largely calling him antisemitic so they don't even belong under views, and I've moved them to allegations. (Plus deleted views section which had a short paragraph that was a duplication of a paragraph on antisemitism charges below.) Meanwhile this paragraph has a number of WP:OR problems and a coatrack problem which I fix. (Quote from paragraph in italics with my tags put in for your edification.)

1. ''Much of Atzmon's writings are directed more broadly to the role of Jews in the world and in supporting Israel. Thus he has said that disputes about the veracity of the Protocols of the Elders of Zion are moot, because "American Jews do try to control the world, by proxy. So far they are doing pretty well for themselves at least."[30][31][32]''
 * Not one of these sources say anything like “Much of atzmon’s writings are directed etc.” and it's WP:OR to say so. It's only legit to summarize what he said about Protocols.

2. ''As a result of these beliefs on Jewish power, he has said that "whether it is right or not to burn down a synagogue, I can see that it is a rational act,"[33][34]
 * Doward, Jamie; Nico Hines source does NOT make this connection.
 * I do not believe that that statement is in this Jerusalem Post, Paul, Jonny Paul (October 20, 2006) because #4 below, Source 37, From Atzmon's Letter to the Editor" explains that statement and should be here and NOT below.

3. and that "the reasoning behind resentment towards Israel and Jews is rational."[35][36] (disputed} This quote is taken from an Atzmon article about a right wing Jewish writer who had written that “Hatred turned him into a Jew.” If it was not WP:Coatrack it would have to be explained in fuller context, if someone wants to do that. Meanwhile it should therefore be removed.

4. Atzmon denied the comment about synagogues, saying he simply meant that "any form of anti-Jewish activity may be seen as political retaliation" for Israel's actions.[37] Does not refer to line above as explained in number 2.

Keeping these under views and in their current state are clear violations of source, neutrality etc. Please explain why I am wrong before reverting these without investigating for yourself. Thanks. CarolMooreDC (talk) 23:50, 28 March 2009 (UTC)

Time to archive
I propose archiving either to the end of 2008 or including the next section which is a settled issue. After that starts latest round of edits. CarolMooreDC (talk) 00:34, 29 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Need to archive more. Entries that are shown in diffs still are not showing on this page? How about down to Cherry-picking since issues above pretty much dealt with?? CarolMooreDC (talk) 18:04, 29 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Again, down to end of March-ish where issues settled. Hearing no disagreement... CarolMooreDC (talk) 13:49, 12 April 2009 (UTC)

Using 3 recent WP:RS interviews in NPOV way without WP:OR
These WP:RS interviews are among other WP:RS I have found that describe his political views that I will be adding soon. The proper way to deal with these three most recent and detailed interviews is to only make the points the authors make, and illustrate them with Atzmon quotes, not to use them to build a POV and Coatrack case. Here are the main points made by the three interviewers, without Atzmon quotes. Obviously some can be added, especially where repeated in 2 interviews.

Jim Gilchrist interview
Direct quotes from: [http://thescotsman.scotsman.com/features/39I-thought-music-could-heal.3804991.jp?CommentPage=1&CommentPageLength=1000 I thought music could heal the wounds of the past. I may have got that wrong], The Scotsman, 22 February 2008


 * musician so passionately, not to mention controversially, preoccupied with the plight of the Palestinian people.


 * if his eclectically inclusive music prompts rave reports, his stance on the Israeli-Palestinian conflict and his intensely anti-Zionist polemic have provoked outrage, not least among some other anti-Zionists, and he has been condemned as an anti-semite and even a Holocaust denier.


 * Ask him about such claims and he sounds cheerfully, indeed pugilistically, unrepentant. He refutes accusations ETC Details


 * His attitude stems from his period of national service with the Israeli army during the 1982 conflict in Lebanon:


 * He agrees, however that he has, in effect renounced his Jewish identity,


 * Is he disillusioned, then?

Martin Gibson interview
Direct quotes from: No choice but to speak out - Israeli musician ‘a proud self-hating Jew’, Gisborne Herald, 23 January 2009.


 * He left Israel in 1994 after service in the Israeli military convinced him Israel had become a racist, militarised state that was a danger to world peace.


 * While he believes people run a risk speaking out against Israel, Gilad Atzmon says he has no choice.


 * There have been numerous attempts to silence Mr Atzmon, including inevitable charges that he is anti-Semitic, although he is Jewish himself.
 * Mr Atzmon says the brutality we see in Israel, that is reminiscent of the Nazis, has arisen through a simple failure of logic.


 * There is less excuse for our sitting idly by while the mess in the Middle East grows progressively more brutal than for Germans in World War 2, he says.


 * Growing up, Mr Atzmon could never work out the anger of people towards Israel, but now he can - the actions of Israel are sowing seeds of hatred throughout the world, he says.


 * Where a charge of anti-Semitism will not stick to Jewish people who criticise Zionism, it is replaced by the label of "self-hating Jew", but this does not bother Gilad Atzmon.


 * The word Judeo-Christian is an artificial construct, he says.


 * The rockets launched into Israel do not justify the killing of 1000 Palestinians in Gaza over the past few weeks, he says.


 * Although newly-elected American President Barack Obama has had to proclaim his Zionist credentials, and his vice-president Joe Biden proclaimed "I am a Zionist", there is some cause for hope, he says.


 * The financial meltdown is all just part of the programme, he says.

John Lewis interview
Direct quotes from: "Manic beat preacher" interview with, The Guardian, March 6, 2009.


 * A few days before I meet Gilad Atzmon, he finds himself at the centre of an international storm. The prime minister of Turkey, Recep Tayyip Erdoǧan, ETC


 * It may come as a surprise to some that Atzmon is a saxophonist at all. His career as a musician has long been drowned out by the clatter of his extra-curricular activities: the furious attacks on Israel (he writes and edits for the website Palestine Think Tank); the philosophical texts on Jewish identity that get discussed by the likes of Noam Chomsky; the two comic novels that have been translated into 24 languages.


 * However, since his arrival in London in 1994, Atzmon has also established himself as one of London's finest saxophonists.


 * This month, Atzmon launches his latest project, the album In Loving Memory of America. It's what he calls "a very personal story, of how I fell in love with jazz and fell in love – and out of love – with America".


 * Atzmon was born in Tel Aviv in 1963, into what he describes as "a conservative, secular Zionist family". ETC.


 * It doesn't take long for Atzmon to ricochet from talking about music to talking about politics, and a lengthy, furious and often hilarious argument about Islamism ensues.
 * It is Atzmon's blunt anti-Zionism rather than his music that has given him an international profile, particularly in the Arab world, where his essays are widely read. (He favours a one-state solution in Palestine; he concedes that it will probably be controlled by Islamists, but says, "That's their business.") It has also made him many enemies, even among some former allies.

Is this clear?? Thanks. CarolMooreDC (talk) 14:30, 29 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I made changes in politics to reflect what these and other WP:RS say, which quotes here and there to make it clear the sources weren't just making stuff up. Similarly for use in the allegations section; as well as correction of various problems mentioned in the section throughout talk here, which have been largely ignored, so you all must agree. CarolMooreDC (talk) 23:48, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

"Despite these allegations"
Why is it "Despite these allegations"? He's likely being invited because of the allegations, and his claim that there is no such thing as antisemitism. THF (talk) 16:14, 29 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Not clear what you are talking about; but clearly your conjecture is WP:OR. CarolMooreDC (talk) 16:43, 29 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Should have looked at article first. That's a minor WP:OR you can delete and explain in the edit summary; see if anyone complains. (Of course everyone does when I do it so I have to write a book first.) Actually, that will get moved up to views section when that's put together. CarolMooreDC (talk)

Still ridiculously unbalanced
The major defense Atzmon gives against his antisemitism, noted by most of the secondary reliable sources to discuss the subject, is claiming that there is no such thing as antisemitism. Yet this has been whitewashed from the article.

Moreover, the lead, by omitting the issue entirely, violates WP:LEAD. Atzmon is most noted for his antisemitism, but it's been whitewashed from the lead. THF (talk) 16:19, 29 March 2009 (UTC)


 * You mean because there is a big section "Allegations of antisemitism and responses" and hardly anything on his views?
 * Re: Atzmon's defenses he has both denied and in one source said there is not such t hing. As I have said numerous times before, I have been going through the WP:RS putting things together since people rejected anything he said that wasn't somehow introduced by a WP:RS. This topic also is covered.
 * Re: the lead, I haven't worked on it lately myself. Yes, there are lots of biased WP:RS that originate these, and a bunch of interviewers who ask him about it. (And a couple "neutral" sources that just throw out a generalization that could get them sued since it provides no evidence; and that source may have gotten the accusations from the wikipedia article in the first place.)
 * Do you still insist that the article has to prove he's an antisemite, as opposed that several people in opinion pieces in WP:RS say so? If so, this iis a major BLP and arbitration problem if you constantly act on it, as you'll see if you read carefully the sections since you've been gone. CarolMooreDC (talk) 16:52, 29 March 2009 (UTC)


 * The article should reflect the mainstream view of multiple reliable sources that he is a vocal antisemite, yes, given that there are only WP:FRINGE views otherwise. It has cost him gigs, and brought protests against him.  (Compare: Michael Jackson or O.J. Simpson, each of whose leads acknowledges the major controversies that have overshadowed their entertainment careers--and this guy's entertainment career isn't a tenth of those other two.)  Given that his defense is that there is no such thing as antisemitism, he can hardly complain that he has been libeled with a nonexistent adjective. THF (talk) 17:24, 29 March 2009 (UTC)
 * As someone who has been prominent in describing Atzmon as an antisemite, I disagree with the above comment. It is not the job of Wikipedia to decide whether or not he is an antisemite, but rather to report what reliable sources say. There are reliable sources to show that some people (both Zionists and anti-Zionists) do indeed describe him as an antisemite, and that other people -- and he himself -- deny or reject this claim. So this is all that Wikipedia should state. It would, in my view, be as wrong for the article to state as a fact that he is an antisemite as it would be to exclude mention of the range of opinion that does make this allegation. And (unfortunately) I don't agree that "only fringe views" disagree; but that is a matter for me to take up elsewhere, not in a Wikipedia article. RolandR (talk) 22:50, 29 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your wikipedia-policy compliant comment :-) CarolMooreDC (talk) 16:27, 30 March 2009 (UTC)

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 * First, User:THF's complaints made me search older versions to find a couple WP:RS that I was missing.
 * Note there are WP:RS where Atzmon actually denies it and they will be in the article in the future.
 * Meanwhile let's not misuse sources like this source. Dr Clark-Lowes, who is chairman of the Brighton branch for Palestinian Solidarity, said: "It is clear in my own mind that Gilad has important things to say and is not a racist. But I know others took a different view. and  "I couldn't reassure him that there wouldn't be further similar actions and I felt it wasn't fair to put the centre in this position." Just proves that Tony Greenstein and his friends can intimidate people.
 * Also that article says: "Mr Atzmon was born in Israel as a secular Jew and has in the past expressed the view that there is no such thing as anti-semitism, instead claiming that he has an "ideological disagreement with Zionism". Since Atzmon in the relevant statement used the word "Misnomer" i think he was a point too sophisticated for this writer to comprehend. I'm not sure where that reference disappeared to since it was in the article.
 * Constant misuse of sources to push a pov on Israel Palestine issues is against wikipedia policy. CarolMooreDC (talk) 17:39, 29 March 2009 (UTC)


 * "Brighton branch for Palestinian Solidarity"?! Really. That is your idea of a source that is NPOV? Malcolm Schosha (talk) 19:15, 29 March 2009 (UTC)


 * That is the reference that User:THF was complaining had been removed and I was explaining that it was not an accurate source and could not support the point he was trying to make. Below is what a slight rewrite of what I had wrote later that somehow got moved around and half eaten because the Talk Page was stuffed full and needed archiving...
 * relevant quote at this diff ("empty signifer") is Atzmon's quote I was looking for "Because Anti-Semite is an empty signifier, no one actually can be an Anti-Semite and this includes me of course. In short, you are either a racist which I am not or have an ideological disagreement with Zionism, which I have."''REFS: Gilad Atzmon profile; Gilad Atzmon, gilad.co.uk, 1001 Lies
 * It is wrong to say this equates with "there is no such thing as antisemitism" because empty signifier means a word that loses meaning because it has so many meanings. To some people it means anyone who ever criticizes Israel or any Jew; to some it means only those who really do hate Jews and not a Jew like Atzmon who is trying to make a point, if in (as he does say in one recent interview) a loud crude Israeli way. And there are dozens of definitions in between. Tony Greenstein surely doesn't agree with Bibi Netanyahu. Now you can argue about whether or not it is in fact an "empty signifier" but you can't state that Atzmon means there is no such thing as antisemitism which is one of the main reasons User:THC is claiming this article is unbalanced. Pleas re-read his first sentence. Comprende? CarolMooreDC (talk) 19:58, 29 March 2009 (UTC)

2 editor blocks relevant to this article
Per comment's above in this larger section about NPOV editing, I think it should be noted for future reference that two editors who have expressed the idea that this article pretty much should prove that Atzmon IS an antisemite have been blocked for related issues. User:Drsmoo for 3rr/editwarring (including complaint about his making antisemitism accusations) (at this diff March 24) and User:Malcolm Schosha (at this diff April 2) under ARBPIA for stating elsewhere that most editors on a subject were antisemites, as he has done in this article. This obviously should be kept in mind if they continue to delete WP:RS information that does not support their contention that Atzmon IS an antisemite, as opposed to that he's been accused of it by various specific individuals and groups. CarolMooreDC (talk) 15:26, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

The Angry Arab
Is As'ad AbuKhalil, writing on his own blog The Angry Arab News Service, an acceptable source for comment on Atzmon and his views? RolandR (talk) 16:39, 30 March 2009 (UTC)


 * It depends on who he is and how notable and if you want to use opinion or fact, the latter being questionable in BLP from such blogs. It helps to specific which entry you want to use. If there's any question on his notability, feel free to take it to WP:RS. I might want to use something from him myself someday, somewhere ;-) CarolMooreDC (talk) 16:46, 30 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I want to discuss the validity of the source, rether than the merits of the comment, so at present I prefer not to specify the entry. It is an opinion, not a fact. As'ad AbhKhalil is a Lebanese-born peofessor of political science at California State University and a visiting professor at Berkeley. He is certainly notable; he has his own entry in Wikipedia, and there are more than 100,000 Google hits for his blog. RolandR (talk) 16:58, 30 March 2009 (UTC)


 * There are four uses, one about himself, two factual points on Arab BLPs and one footnote about an opinion in the article about movie Munich. Does this mean that in wikipedia he can be used as a source on Arabs/Muslims (or critics of Israel like Atzmon), but he is not WP:RS on other topics about which he writes frequently. Obviously one must look at things on case by case basis for actual conflicts of interest (as opposed to POVs which can be mentioned in any article), but I don't like the idea that he is being ghettoized into only being allowed to comment on certain topics. Thus it might be nice to bring it to WP:RSN. CarolMooreDC (talk) 15:31, 31 March 2009 (UTC)


 * I take that as a qualified accepytance of his validity, and will therefore insert his comment in the article. Let's see if anyone then wants to take this to WP:RS/N. RolandR (talk) 16:46, 31 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Actually this isn't the place I'd be likely to do it, and with that quote. More if Angry Arab's opinions or facts, as relevant and WP:RS, were rejected from an article criticizing Israel. Maybe I should just test it. Will put on my infinitely long do list. :-)


 * PS: However, it should be pointed out that he is just engaging in personal attacks without presenting any evidence. So if a couple of representatives of Arab/Muslim thought who did so were to evidence themselves, they might replace his quote.


 * Also this sentence is rather disengenous: Allegations of antisemitism due to Atzmon's views have come from a variety of quarters in the UK and elsewhere, ranging from commentators such as David Aaronovitch (in a June 2005 The Times opinion piece)[34] and David Hirsh (in a November 2006 blog on The Guardian's Comment is Free website,[29] which allowed Atzmon a response[35]) to Jews Against Zionism, which asked for the Socialist Workers Party to withdraw an invitation to Atzmon to speak at the Marxism 2005 conference.[33]  After all it was Jews Against Zionism who started the brou ha ha that Hirsh and Aaronovitch comment on, at least in part. But that and the other relevant paragraph will be fixed at some point, more like the original version here. Something I'm sure you are very much aware of :-) CarolMooreDC (talk) 18:39, 1 April 2009 (UTC)


 * When I cleaned up that section I realized it really is WP:UNDUE to quote him in the footnote since the article is in English. CarolMooreDC (talk) 23:45, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

Purpose to text in footnote?
While originally I didn't have a problem with it, it did occur to me considering that it is still a blog and a negative opinion - or rather ad hominem attack without any evidence - there might be some WP:RS in BLP problems with quoting him, even if I was going to let the general description in the main text slide for now. So I took the quote out of footnote. Now it is back, but under what possible rationale? Anyone who wants to see it can go to the Blog entry. CarolMooreDC (talk) 13:54, 3 April 2009 (UTC)
 * In general, not only here, I favour including more quoted material in footnotes, rather than the main body of the article. In that way, casual readers can see the essence of a statement, more interested people can check the footnote, and those keen to know more, or to confirm the validity of the quote, can follow it up themselves. I deliberately decided, when using this quote, not to include a large chunk in the article itself. There are other quotes in the article which I think should be treated the same way; but, given my own position, I am reluctant to be seen to remove comments favourable to Atzmon. The alternative, which in my view is less good, would be to include more of AbuKhalil's quote in the main text. RolandR (talk) 14:16, 3 April 2009 (UTC)


 * I agree with RolandR on this. Malcolm Schosha (talk) 14:21, 3 April 2009 (UTC)