Talk:Gilbert Hayton/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk · contribs) 14:52, 4 November 2023 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this shortly. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 14:52, 4 November 2023 (UTC)

Prelim

 * No duplicated links (bar DFC in the lede which is fair enough)
 * Image correctly licensed
 * Article is stable
 * Earwig reports copyvio unlikely

Lede and infobox

 * Useful to include what he flew prior to Defiants if we're including every aircraft after that point
 * I have revised the lead a little regarding aircraft flown. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)

Early life

 * "at the Wellington Technical College"
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Link field artillery
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)


 * "serial number" should be "service number"
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)

Second World War

 * Link scrambles
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)


 * To avoid lots of "form": "The squadron was newly reformed for night fighting..."
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Can we give a date for flying officer promotion?
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)


 * "Middle East" would be better called "Mediterranean"
 * Done, plus a slight tweak to place the location of Malta. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Identify who Shores and Williams are, e.g. military historians
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Link sortie
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Link U-Boat
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Did Josling survive?
 * Yes, he did, I have made this more explicit. Zawed (talk) 03:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Link the whole of the Gazette name