Talk:Giorgia Lupi

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 29 August 2019 and 19 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Pikapenn.

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Feedback
Hello, some feedback: Overall good work.--Theredproject (talk) 16:17, 9 October 2019 (UTC)
 * It is great you added the birth year. Did you find the date as well? It should go in the first sentence. See here for example for someone living Cey Adams and for someone deceased William Morris﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿﻿.
 * I wonder if "former founder" is correct here. Is someone ever the Former founder? It implies she no longer can claim to be the founder. Maybe just put the whole sentence in past tense? e.g. "and co-founded the data-driven"?