Talk:Girl Genius/Archive 1

Untitled
With the move of Girl Genius to the web, I've included this page in the "List of Webcomics" that's part of the Webcomic article.

Blood Relation?
Where is the evidence that Zeetha is a blood relative of Gil? this needs a link to a comic that spells it out better. Granted, the connection that Gil was sired by the Baron by one of the tribe is hinted at, but actual blood relative? That sentence needs removing.

Merge
The article on Agatha Heterodyne should be merged into this article (as should articles on other characters in this comic). The guidelines for this are covered at Notability (fiction). Generally characters in fictional works should be covered in the article on the fictional work, unless that article would then be too long.--Srleffler 04:49, 2 January 2007 (UTC)


 * Good idea, both articles are basically little more than stubs at the moment, anyway. Another alternative might be to combine Agatha Heterodyne with Baron Klaus von Wulfenbach and the Heterodyne Boys as the basis of a cast page. Aclapton 00:22, 29 January 2007 (UTC)
 * Just because I'm kinda OCD about some things... there's no 'von'. *grin* Corgi (talk) 04:35, 31 July 2008 (UTC)


 * I say merge all four into a decent-length article. -- Orange Mike 03:13, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Do we link to the Foglios' cast page? That's the first step. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 04:21, 17 April 2007 (UTC)

Othar's Twitter
Since the official Girl Genius site links to it prominently, I assume it's an official extension (as well as an noteworthy idea: a webcomic sans graphics) rewinn 04:35, 13 June 2007 (UTC)

Beetleburg Transylvania Polygnostic University
Appear to be listed in livejournal: http://www.livejournal.com/schools/?ctc=RO&sc=Transylvania&cc=Beetleburg http://www.livejournal.com/schools/?ctc=RO&sc=Transylvania&cc=Beetleburg&sid=93534

Text Style
Do we really need so many words rendered in italics? Or worse, BOLD CAPITALS. I for one find it rather annoying rather than charming. Rogerborg (talk) 22:53, 10 January 2008 (UTC)


 * The quotes are used to set off words and terms which have peculiar or specialized meanings in the Girl Genius world. How would you suggest it be done? -- Orange Mike  |  Talk  04:07, 11 January 2008 (UTC)

Russian Jagers?
Do Jagers have a German origin? The only German thing is their name... accent spelling looks like German, but like Russian, too. They says "W" as "V", "Th" as "V", "D" or even "Z" etc. The most suspicious are they names (there are Russian names Maxim and Dima). Ognian is rather Bolgarian than Russian. The "piece of piroshki" instead of "peace of cake" is based on the "pirog", Russian for "cake". Also, they have some Russian calls "bez-shabashnost", difficult to translate.


 * The Jägers are Transylvanian, and since each one we've met in the story is well over a century old, I think calling their accents both rural (although Mechanicsburg is pretty good-sized, it's up in the mountains) and archaic is quite fair. It's Romanian filtered through a couple of pidgins and many decades of travel.


 * Corgi (talk) 04:29, 31 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Bez- means "without", right? 惑乱 Wakuran (talk) 16:08, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

Citation Needed?
The last sentence of Zeetha's section has been tagged "citation needed" by an editor. The way the contributor worded this particular sentence takes into consideration the fact that there may be those that would challenge that statement. However, I believe that this is covered quite well as it stands. The sentence reads: "Some fans of the series have drawn a connection between Zeetha's slaughtering of the pirate fleet and the disappearance of DuPree's fleet" This is further covered in Bangladesh DuPree's section. I would be so bold as to say that the editor who tagged the sentence DID NOT READ THE ENTIRE ARTICLE.

Let's be serious here. there is NOTHING wrong with this section exactly the way it is. Let's just leave it as it is. The editor who tagged this sentence is obviously unfamiliar with the subject matter, and is merely flexing their "editor muscles". We already have ONE Quatloo editing Wikipedia, we don't need MORE power-mad editors tilting at windmills, do we?

Osirisrising (talk) 00:30, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Personally, I prefer to assume good faith, and see no reason to believe that one of the most commonly employed and needed tags is somehow being used to bolster some power-mad editor's lust for glory. ;] (For the record, I have no idea who "Quatloo" is, either.) It's entirely possible that whoever added the citation tag truly felt it was justified; also, Zeetha's section puts forth a specific observation on a supposed belief of the fanbase that Bangladesh's does not. It would be more productive to simply find a citation for the Zeetha/Bangladesh crossover being a popular theory by fans than to assume that a common request for a verifiable source is somehow malicious. Rachel Summers (talk) 00:52, 28 February 2008 (UTC)
 * Assiduous readers will have noticed that the pirates whom Zeetha wiped out were displaying the same stylized skull insignia seen on Bang's own airship (not to mention her forehead). Just sayin'. {The poster formerly known as 87.81.230.195} 90.197.66.53 (talk) 07:54, 9 February 2012 (UTC)

Avoid adding un-official external links (or "linkspam")
There is a tendency to add fan sites to external links; please keep in mind Wikipedia's policies on inappropriate external link addition and spamming noted in External links, particularly the sections on:


 * Links normally to be avoided (criteria 4, 7, 11, and 12 are particularly notable as they essentially refer to and define many fan sites/communities)


 * Advertising and conflicts of interest (especially if one maintains the linked fan site/community and/or is a member of the linked fan site/community)


 * External link spamming

It's a common enough error, and one I think we've all done early on simply because we were eager to contribute while unaware of linking protocol. ^_^ But it's problematic as it places personal site promotion over Wikipedia's goals and policies regarding appropriate presentation of data. Rachel Summers (talk) 19:32, 5 March 2008 (UTC)

Spoiler warning?
Shouldn't there be a spoiler warning somewhere on this page? It is, for instance, blatantly stated here that Agatha is the Heterodyne heir; a fact that, while central to the plot, is still only revealed in volume 3 and is an important mystery in the early story. I'm sure there are many more examples but, not having entirely caught up on this series yet, I didn't read the whole article to avoid unannounced spoilers. ;) 207.134.103.122 (talk) 14:31, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * This sounds like a good idea; to be honest, the whole article should probably be revamped to include only basic information as to the story's setting and genre rather than so much information which is more properly disseminated by referring to fansites, the Girl Genius Wikia or simply reading the source material. However, this would be a more massive undertaking for the near future and I would be in favour of a spoiler warning in the meantime (along with other templates noting the need for an overhaul in order to make the article more concise and consistent with Wikipedia standards). ^_^ Rachel Summers (talk) 20:34, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * First, spoiler warnings were thrown out of the English Wikipedia almost exactly a year ago in a spectacular demonstration of how brute force and audacity can trump reasonable cooperation in an environment such as this. That's about all of the relevant details. Second, is Agatha's heritage really a big secret anymore? It was one early in the story, but at this point it's openly stated in the website's Google search result! I can't really see a description of the comic, even a very basic one, being possible without the one fact that the entire thing revolves around*. I had intended to mention Agatha's Heterodynehood in the intro in the aforementioned overhaul. --Kiz o r  17:20, 4 May 2008 (UTC)  -- *: If we did manage to dance around the issue, someone who read this article would know that the comic's world awaits the coming of a heir to the Heterodyne family after its mysterious disappearance. If he then started on the comic, the first thing he'd see would be a young woman of a conspicuous age wearing a mysterious heirloom in the shape of the long-vanished legendary champions' crest, with a large invisible sign over her head bearing the words "I have a mysterious undiscovered power," not in the least helped by the fact that she poses at the top of the webpage next to the words "Girl Genius." In the article-writing biz, we might call this "defeating the point."
 * Personally, I'm more concerned with the article's looking more like something that belongs on a fansite or the Girl Genius Wikia than on Wikipedia. And that won't be fixed with mere spoiler warnings anyway, hence my call for a total revamp. As it is, it's a bloated mess that just gets continually added onto anytime a fan sees the opportunity to add something from a recent plot twist. Rachel Summers (talk) 07:14, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
 * It's in need of a tune-up, but it doesn't look that bad to me. A work with lots of intricate world-building and a complex cast of characters will take its space to cover. I plan to rewrite the world-building parts. The fact that there's an influx of little edits from recent developments is true, but that comes with being a wiki and is a simple editing matter. Regardless of what is done with the article, though, mentioning or not mentioning Agatha's ancestry is a central matter. I support it for the reasons given above but would be interested in what others think. --Kiz o  r  11:21, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Oh, I've no problems with openly stating Agatha's lineage; it's pretty well-established, and from early on as well. That was a concern of the anonymous IP who started this topic, so you might want to invite them to come explain their thinking if you haven't already. My only real problem with the article is that so much overly detailed exposition has been crammed in, to the point where reading the article almost seems a substitute for reading the webcomic itself--hope that makes mores sense. Rachel Summers (talk) 21:35, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Whilst I will admit there was some suspense on whether she was or was not a Heterodyne when the initial comics came out, the fact that all the volumes are named "Agatha Heterodyne and the ...." is a bit of a give away. I suspect tomorrow's comic will be the first that shows her officially recognised as the Heterodyne heir. Dhericean (talk) 11:28, 14 August 2008 (UTC)

I asked Two-oh-seven to join in on the 8th; guess he's not showing up. --Kiz o r  07:49, 26 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Oh um, hey. Sorry, didn't see your message until now, I guess I don't look at Wikipedia from this IP that much (maybe I should register sometime). Anyway, I see your point regarding Agatha's ancestry; it is rather difficult to say anything worthwhile about the story without mentioning that detail. The character descriptions probably don't need to have each character's entire life story though, this is supposed to an encyclopedic article, not a summary of everything that has happened so far. --207.134.103.122 (talk) 14:08, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Agreed completely--not _everything_ factual needs to be included, particularly when there are other resources better suited to that. Rachel Summers (talk) 22:43, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I fixed a large chunk of that. Very large, all twittery about Agatha's romantic prospects and ignoring three major relationships with long-term significance to do so.  I'm in a grumpy mood now. Corgi (talk) 04:34, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

A call to the Girl Genius Wikia
I know that there are some here on Wikipedia who are fans of Girl Genius and would like to see more information, but this isn't the proper place for it. As such, a dedicated Girl Genius Wikia has been created and is looking for more people to help make it grow.

That said, this will also allow us to take a hard look at this article itself and trim it down to avoid any 'cruft issues.

One question, though. Is it appropriate in Wikipedia to include direct links to the GGWikia within the body? i.e. having a separate 'see more' tag at the end of each character description? --Donovan Ravenhull (talk) 21:22, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I believe it would be considered linkspam; so, no. (Also: wikis are not reliable sources. --165.189.32.4 (talk) 15:38, 11 September 2012 (UTC)

Prior Heterodyne appearance - Munden's Bar
Whilst I like this page there did seem to be one piece of information missing, and being inexperienced in Wikipedia I was not sure how it would best be included (and thought it safer to raise it here).

Phil Foglio created a strip for the Munden's Bar backup in GrimJack involving Bill and Barry Heterodyne (I think it was issue 40 - but am not sure without my collection to reference). It should probably be mentioned under publishing history as it is I believe the first appearance of the name and brothers, and was used as part of the inspiration for Girl Genius. Though maybe it is instead or also connections to other works? I am open to guidance. Dhericean (talk) 11:51, 14 August 2008 (UTC)

Citation Required
Othar's short little description implies that his goal of killing sparks is well known. As Agatha was completely unaware of this (plus so were the Circus of Sparks that Agatha later traveled with) this should be removed. if noone contradicts me I'll do it next week. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Teal Thanatos (talk • contribs) 21:20, 4 December 2008 (UTC)  As no comments otherwise, I have changed the text as I believe appropriate.Teal Thanatos (talk) 23:10, 11 December 2008 (UTC)

Europe => Europa
In the comics is it not Europe but Europa. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 130.225.243.80 (talk) 02:55, 29 August 2010 (UTC)

Lucrezia vs The Other
Two quick points here.

Do we know for sure the Lucrezia IS the Other - as opposed to having been taken over by the Other? A lot of the characters, and readers, certainly assume she is. That said, I'm not aware of anything definitive, such as the Foglios categorically having stated this anywhere.

Regardless of the merits of the statement as it is, this is one ENORMOUS spoiler.WeepingAngel63 (talk) 00:04, 18 May 2011 (UTC)

Not the Baron
In the section about Agatha there is a line about her first clank that reads "Baron Wulfenbach labelled her clank "amusing but harmless"". This is wrong... It wasn't the Baron who said that it was the assistant, Boris. 71.38.117.4 (talk) 15:29, 30 October 2011 (UTC)

Airman Higgs' nature
Those speculating on the above seem to have overlooked one very large clue. Where did Gil (and Zeetha) first encounter him? At Mamma Gkika's, relaxing openly in the underground, Jäger-only beerhall where he was evidently both unremarked by management and clientele, and quite familiar with in-house customs such as the daily fight. {The poster formerly known as 87.81.230.195} 90.197.66.161 (talk) 06:43, 15 February 2012 (UTC)

A few things
Does this need updating - parts seem out of date - referring to 2008 when we are now in 2012.

I think that the article is far to dominated by the list of characters and detailed narrative. I wonder if that would be better moved to a separate article.
 * I agree that the character section is far too long. One to two paragraphs on each character's personality and overall arc should suffice. Detailed plot information doesn't belong here. ClaireJV (talk) 06:01, 14 April 2013 (UTC)

Third point - really we need something about critical reception. Is this very special ? How has it won so many Hugo awards ? -- Beardo (talk) 03:23, 4 September 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) WP:SOFIXIT
 * 2) This is true of a lot of articles about creative works; plot outlines don't require research and looking for third-party sources
 * 3) For one thing, Phil Foglio is an old-time fan who had been nominated for Hugos before. Fandom knew him and his work from the beginning, and was comfortable with it in a way they are not with work by people coming from outside the science fiction community. --165.189.32.4 (talk) 15:37, 11 September 2012 (UTC)