Talk:Girl Scouts Troop 6000

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Hi Thuydo, thanks for writing this interesting article on a notable and valuable organization. I have one criticism of the article, which is that after the edits of User:Briqnnaxx in April, it is written and structured in a way that puts too much emphasis on the founders (Burgess and Van Bramer) in comparison with the subject (the troop itself). As a result, it feels a lot like a WP:Coatrack. I will make some attempts to improve the situation, and I hope you will, as well..

JBL (talk) 16:32, 14 June 2020 (UTC)