Talk:Girl Talk Inc.

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Please do not delete this article without a discussion and the usual week allowed to make it better. Please note that the article does refer to third-party resources, specifically the Albany Herald, the Clayton Tribune, and the CNN news website. I'm working with the writer on ground to clarify this by reformatting the citations. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Georgiasouthernlynn (talk • contribs)

Hey Victoria, I found an AJC article which interviews Haley Kilpatrick. Have you seen it? If not, please do a lexis nexis search or drop by on me today and I'll show you how to pull it up.--Georgiasouthernlynn (talk) 16:04, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

Hi again, Victoria. My lexis nexis search also turned up a Montel Williams article with Haley. Please see me about these resources. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Georgiasouthernlynn (talk • contribs) 16:10, 13 July 2010 (UTC)

Hi Victoria, I took out a few more of the awards, but I think you should put some of them back, but not in the form of a bullet list. Instead, I would include this information in the form of a paragraph that immediately preceeds the bullet list, and be a little more discursive, i.e. tell us a little bit about the awards, especially the president's award. For instance, is that an award given by a US president and, if so, under which president was this award given, and what are the criteria for winning the award? I think the ticket is not to reduce this information to a list, but to give it the fuller development it deserves.

If other editors disagree with my advice, please weigh in. --Georgiasouthernlynn (talk) 17:40, 19 July 2010 (UTC)

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