Talk:Girl in a Coma

Copyright violation
I have reverted this article to the last version before it became a gratuitous copyright violation of the band's official website. I have copied over the templates, etc., that have been added in the meantime, but someone with some more time should look at previous versions and merge any applicable references as appropriate. -- Kinu t /c  23:53, 4 June 2008 (UTC)

Clean up needed: unrelated, subjective opinions have been added.
On 2, June 2014, a user named Stefhanyguadarrama added numerous mentions to (and created an entire sub-section on) "Mestiza Consciousness", a term they got from the book the Borderlands by Gloria Anzaldua, which they also mention. This is completely out of nowhere and I cannot find any connection between the band and this concept or Gloria Anzaldua. Stefhanyguadarrama clearly just added their own subjective opinions to the article, and I suggest that their changes be deleted immediately.

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ǐ== Tone ==

I have nothing against this group but the tone of the writing is ridiculous. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.228.170.156 (talk) 21:28, 19 February 2019 (UTC)
 * You're absolutely right. The article is already tagged for this. Promotional, language, subjective commentary, personal narratives and drama. I just cleaned up the History section and then saw there's so much more below it. A continuing project. Largoplazo (talk) 14:02, 20 February 2019 (UTC)