Talk:Girl with Ball/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 04:11, 21 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Lead is way too short. Needs to be expanded on.
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:54, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Detail --> Description
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:42, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Critical review --> Reception
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:42, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I see no other issues with the article. It is well referenced and written.

Too much copyvio in the footnoted quotes. Author should figure out what the quotes are saying and use his own words in explaining. MathewTownsend (talk) 21:38, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Great. All issues have been addressed. Passing the article! Statυs  (talk) 16:57, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
 * comment