Talk:Girlfight/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 11:31, 23 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Right, I'll copyedit as I go (please revert any inadvertent changes to meaning I make) and jot queries below: Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:31, 23 December 2014 (UTC)


 *  The film was well received by critics - hyphen?
 * I'm always unsure whether hyphens are appropriate in places like these, but I've added one now.


 *  Diana later goes to Hector's birthday party, but leaves when she sees Adrian acting close with his ex-girlfriend. -"acting close"? odd expression...you mean like "canoodling" or "getting (overly) friendly" or something...there must be a better expression.....
 * Changed to "getting friendly".


 * Is there anything about it paving the way for other films like it? Also, any sources mention that it was a springboard for Kusama and Rodriguez to go onto successful careers? Be nice to mention somewhere...
 * I added a "Legacy" section to the article. I addressed all of these points but unfortunately it's a bit brief since I wasn't able to find too much to discuss from the sources.
 * Perfect - exactly what I was thinking - something that gives its place in film lore/history. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:42, 26 December 2014 (UTC)

1. Well written?:
 * Prose quality: - two queries above...
 * Manual of Style compliance:

2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:
 * References to sources:
 * Citations to reliable sources, where required:
 * No original research:

3. Broad in coverage?:
 * Major aspects:
 * Focused:

4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:
 * Fair representation without bias:

5. Reasonably stable?
 * No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):

6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:
 * Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: a couple of queries but nice article and nearly there....Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:41, 23 December 2014 (UTC) nice Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:42, 26 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review, Cas, and sorry it took me a few days to address the comments you made (my replies are above). Tomorrow I'm going away for a week so if you have any more suggestions I'd appreciate if you can keep the review on hold until then. Thanks! 97198 (talk) 11:49, 26 December 2014 (UTC)