Talk:Giulio Bonasone

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This is a great start to an article, however there seems to be no structure. I would first work in outlining what exactly you plan to do with this artist, with a few basic headlines on where you would focus. As of now it seems to be just one giant blob with lists, and I would personally designate those lists to their own sections. The actual content in the article seems to be lacking too but that's alright as I'm sure this person is pretty obscure, I would designate more time to checking out related artists and also using Oxford Art Online as a tool since it's available. You've got a great jumping-off point for this article, but there seems to be nothing in regards to his style or personal life. Arguably I'd focus on what he accomplished/completed as a craftsman of the time. It seems to me that there's a left to do so I'll just be tidying up some grammar/sentence flow along with the structure. Feel free to revert anything you happen to not like. Also, add sources as there seems to be none that I can see. Rickitpower (talk) 05:33, 2 November 2017 (UTC)

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