Talk:Give Peace a Chance (Grey's Anatomy)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 18:51, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

General

 * No dead links. Great work!
 * No dab links. Great work!
 * Images have good rationales

Infobox

 * I thought the article is about "Give Peace a Chance", not "Invasion"
 * ✅,  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Reference for "Guest stars"?
 * The episode is the reference.  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

Lede

 * Unlink American television per WP:OVERLINK
 * ✅,  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "and the show's 109th episode overall" unneeded per other articles I have reviewed
 * I don't know about that. It is commonly used across other good article episodes such as the Glee episodes and "Over There", a featured article.
 * No need for "in the United States" as it says it above
 * Above it says it's an 'American' show, it doesn't say it aired in the US.

Plot

 * "After Shepherd spending" → "After Shepherd spend"
 * That's not proper English.

Production

 * No issues

Reception

 * Rename section to "Broadcast and reception"
 * Unnecessary imposing of personal criteria; ❌.  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "first broadcast" → "originally broadcast" per the above
 * ✅,  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Link MTV
 * ✅,  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "Steve Marsi of TV Fanatic was positive of the episode". Huh? Re-write to: "Steve Marsi of TV Fanatic gave a positive review"
 * ✅,  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "Amanda Krill of Cinema Blend called Tahir's character "likable from the moment you meet him", and she too was fearful that Karev and Adamson would form a relationship". Remove that review all together it has a not a good source, per WP:RS and WP:GNG
 * I disagree about Cinema Blend, because it is a WP:RS and although it may not be "the highest quality"; that is only a requirement of FAs.  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "Former Star-Ledger editor Alan Sepinwall was positive of the episode" → "Former Star-Ledger editor Alan Sepinwall praised the episode, etc."
 * ✅,  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * BuddyTV doesn't need to be italic
 * ✅, and I also fixed it in the refs.  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 20:52, 21 July 2012 (UTC)