Talk:Giygas/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Namcokid47 (talk · contribs) 01:58, 22 September 2019 (UTC)

A few things: I'll add more comments as I give it a more thorough read later. Namcokid47 (talk) 01:58, 22 September 2019 (UTC) Completely forgot about this nomination until I was skimming through the exhaustive list of GANs. Doesn't seem like there's anything else wrong with the page, so I'll give it a pass. Good work. Namcokid 47  (Contribs) 14:39, 8 November 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) "Giygas appears in the NES video game, Mother." in the Appearences section reads somewhat awkwardly, imo. I would change it to something along the lines of "Giygas first appears in the NES video game Mother.
 * I used to say "first appeared" but someone pointed out that such a thing may require a reference to specify that he has not appeared in something before.
 * 1) Many of the refs are inconsistent with how their dates are formatted. Some of them use the XXX-XX-XX format, while others use the Day, Month Year format. This should be fixed.
 * Fixed.
 * 1) Vice, GameSpot, GamesRadar+ and 1UP.com should also be italicized.
 * Fixed.
 * 1) Lots of the websites used in the refs should be linked. Examples include refs 4, 21 and 16.
 * Fixed.
 * 1) The last two bits in the Concept and Creation section would be better merged together.
 * I'm not sure what you mean; do you mean the last two sections?
 * Sorry. I meant the last two sentences in the C&C area (the ones that start with "Before the release" and "An urban legend"). Namcokid  47  (Contribs) 22:20, 22 September 2019 (UTC)