Talk:Glad (duke)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 05:20, 23 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi! I will be reviewing this. Adding my comments shortly. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 05:20, 23 March 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * around 900, Add "AD"
 * Done. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Citations generally do not occur in the lead. All facts of the lead are mentioned in the main text and the citations occur only there.
 * I would like to avoid any copyright issue: "fictitious person" is a verbatim citation from a publication. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 * occupied his duchy What does this mean?
 * Text modified. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 *  and Vlachs, or Romanians I am a bit confused by the "and" and the "or"
 * Text modified. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Romania is linked twice
 * Delinked. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 * at the beginning of the 11th century "in the early 11th century"?
 * Text modified. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)

Background

 * around 837 Add "AD"
 * Done. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 * The Annals of St. Bertin writes that "states that" may be better
 * Text modified. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Link "basin"
 * Linked (I hope). Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Duplink: Byzantine Empire
 * Delinked. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)

Banat on the eve of the Hungarian Conquest

 * Can spear points inhumation graves be linked or explained?
 * Wikilinks added. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Duplinks: Mureș River, Carpathian Basin, Bulgars, Moravia, Carolingian Empire, Bulgaria, Florin Curta
 * Delinked. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Written sources prove Is "prove" not a bit too strong? Perhaps "imply" or "show"? which also proves that he identified Glad's duchy with the territory that is now known as Banat in the next section is similar.
 * Texts modified. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Is Franks linked anywhere? It should be linked
 * Wikilink added. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Bavarian Geographer  Did I miss the writer?
 * Yes, he is linked in the same section. :) Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Sălăgean and Pop Have they been introduced by their full names?
 * Text modified. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)

The conquest of Banat

 *  Glad and his large army waited them You mean "awaited" them?
 * Text modified (actually, I do not know what is the better version). Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)

Glad in modern historiography

 * only mentioned in the Gesta Hungarorum "mentioned only in the..." looks better
 * Text modified. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 * "Vlad Georgescu" is a duplink.
 * Delinked. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 * anachronism may be linked.
 * Wikilink added. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Does the image have anything to do with this section? Would look better in "Banat on the eve of the Hungarian Conquest".
 * I think the image should remain here: it is an old map, representing late 19th-century scholarship. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your review. I fixed the above problems (I hope). Borsoka (talk) 15:52, 23 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Hi Please wait for a few minutes so that I can point out all the issues. I guess I won't be able to come for a day or two, so possibly we could complete this review today itself!  Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 16:00, 23 March 2016 (UTC)

I think that should be all. I must praise your awesome narrative, it was a really interesting read! Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 16:26, 23 March 2016 (UTC)
 * , thank you for your thorough review and for your kind words. Please find my comments above. Borsoka (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks friend. This article is one of the few excellent reads I have come across here. I am glad to promote this. Cheers! Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 04:01, 24 March 2016 (UTC)