Talk:Gleneagles Global Hospitals

Close paraphrasing
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 * ... the Hospital has achieved several milestones by performing rare and pioneering surgeries like India's first successful Split & Auxiliary Liver Transplant, and first combined Heart & Kidney transplant. (source)

The article says:
 * The hospital has achieved several milestones by performing pioneering surgeries like India's first successful Split & Auxiliary Liver Transplant, and the first combined Heart & Kidney transplant.

Another example:
 * IHH Healthcare Berhad is consolidating its Indian platform by rebranding Global Hospitals, in which it is a majority investor, under the brand Gleneagles. ... IHH Healthcare had acquired a 73.4 per cent stake in Ravindranath GE Medical Associates Pvt Ltd, which had hospitals under the brand Global Hospitals, for Rs 1,284 crore in August 2015. (source)

The article says:
 * In August 2015, IHH Healthcare announced the acquisition of 73.4 per cent stake in Hyderabad-based GE Medical Associates Pvt Ltd, which had hospitals under the brand Global Hospitals, by investing Rs 1,280 crores. IHH Healthcare Berhad consolidated its Indian platform by rebranding Global Hospitals under the brand Gleneagles.

There are other passages that similarly follow quite closely. The text of this article should be revised to separate it further from its sources. The essay Close paraphrasing contains some suggestions for rewriting that may help avoid these issues. The article Wikipedia Signpost/2009-04-13/Dispatches also contains some suggestions for reusing material from sources that may be helpful, beginning under "Avoiding plagiarism". -- Black Falcon (talk) 20:27, 26 July 2020 (UTC)