Talk:Glenn Close/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 02:12, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:12, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good.
 * "most nominated" "most-nominated"

Early life and family

 * This section looks good.

Theatre

 * Remove the comma after "began performing in 1974".
 * Add serial commas after the second use of "violin", Martin Short, and "Julia".
 * Avoid the repetitive use of the "In [year], [event]" formula in several sections.
 * Add a comma after "During the production".
 * Remove the comma after "Best Musical Performance".
 * Comma after "February 9, 2017" per WP:DATECOMMA.
 * Comma after the first use of The Guardian.
 * Avoid single-sentence paragraphs.

Film

 * Several paragraphs are missing sources.
 * Fix the "citation needed" issues.
 * Remove the comma after "attached to the role".
 * Remove the comma after "for this performance".
 * "stellar reviews" needs more verification with additional sources.
 * Several paragraphs also lack sources here.
 * Commas after sentences starting with "In the film".

Television

 * Paragraphs. Need. Sources.
 * "highly rated" "highly-rated"
 * The phrase "highly-rated" also needs a source.
 * "that network" "that the network"
 * Comma after "in addition".
 * "open to do" doesn't sound encyclopedic.
 * "half hour" "half-hour"

Reception, acting style, and legacy

 * Comma after Bridget Fonda.
 * Other than that, this section looks good.

Personal life

 * Remove the comma after the second use of "Bozeman".
 * Add a comma after Angus King.

Activism

 * "which performed" "that performed"

Acting credits and awards

 * Expand this section with some mentions of awards and selected filmography.

Progress

 * Notes
 * You there? I'll give this nom another week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:53, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Hi there, yes my bad. I got caught up with the other article that I forgot to work on this one. Hopefully I'll be able to make enough progress during the timeframe. Thanks for the extension. Film Enthusiast (talk) 18:24, 11 May 2021 (UTC)