Talk:God of War video game collections/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 04:00, 15 December 2012 (UTC)

Review

 * Lead
 * "Debuting in 2005," Just commenting the same I told you about the link on my first GoW review, that it could lead to confusion. It's okay to leave it there, I guess, although it'll do better as a see also.
 * "Each collection has received praise for the remastering of the games and their price." I think it's better to say that "were praised for how the games were remastered, as well as their price."


 * God of War Collection
 * "was included with early copies of the game.", Which game? GoW2?
 * What is a sweepstakes?
 * Fixed all the above. Wikilinked sweepstakes (they're promotional/marketing strategies, usually like a contest to raise hype for a product). -- JDC808  ♫  05:23, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the wait. This will be done in no more than two days :) — ΛΧΣ  21  01:56, 28 December 2012 (UTC)
 * No problem. Been playing Final Fantasy XIII-2, which I just platinumed yesterday. -- JDC808  ♫  10:20, 28 December 2012 (UTC)


 * Well. The article is good. Additional nitpicky comments will be left on the talk. I'll be closing this as successful. — ΛΧΣ  21  21:26, 2 January 2013 (UTC)