Talk:God with Us (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 11:32, 11 December 2011 (UTC)


 * I will take this review. I've never listened to MercyMe, although I have reviewed some articles for DYK. Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:32, 11 December 2011 (UTC)

Comments

 * Initial comment: Awfully short. Are you sure you aren't missing anything?


 * 1A
 * I'd suggest paraphrasing some of these quotes, as the article is so short.
 * Done
 * A comment on "could not get this idea out of his head," -- This is not encyclopedic wording; it should be paraphrased encyclopedically or put in quotes. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:21, 11 December 2011 (UTC)


 * You should change the initial capitals in quote sentences where necessary.
 * Noted


 * Chart performance
 * "God With Us" debuted at No. 17 on the Billboard Hot Christian Songs chart for the chart week of October 27, 2007." -- Don't think we should repeat chart twice.
 * I think I corrected it?
 * 3A
 * Has the song ever been covered? Performed live by MercyMe? On TV? If so, when? What were they wearing?
 * Not by a notable artist, no. I have noted uses in compilation albums instead, as well as added a section for their live performances.
 * Who produced the music video? Where was the "live setting"?
 * What songs beat it out?
 * Done
 * Hmm? What song replaced it as number 1? As a side note, if we don't have an article on said song then it's easily good for a new article. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:28, 11 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Whoops, I thought you were talking about the year-end charts. Corrected.  Toa   Nidhiki  05  00:42, 12 December 2011 (UTC)


 * 6A
 * You should probably use Template:Non-free use rationale album cover for the image. It will provide a stronger FUR.
 * Done


 * Hold for one week for an expansion of content. Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:09, 11 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Although more in-depth information would be preferred, I have been unable to find any coverage of this song on-line. As such, I am passing this nomination.
 * As there is a possibility that this may or may not go to GAR eventually, I will leave a note regarding my rationale. I do not wish to sound discriminatory, but it seems to me the lack of coverage is caused by the limited market share of Christian rock; a mainstream song like "Umbrella" would not pass at 4500 characters. I am convinced that the nominator has tried his or her best to make the article comprehensive with the limited sources available; my experience with Caffo suggests that it is acceptable, and indeed some featured articles (such as the controversial MissingNo. are not much longer than this. Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:01, 12 December 2011 (UTC)