Talk:Godflesh (EP)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 02:45, 27 December 2018 (UTC)

Infobox

 * You need to mention the band members as producers elsewhere besides the infobox, with a source.
 * This is sourced under the personnel section. If you want me to add a line to the prose about them producing it, I can do that, too. CelestialWeevil (talk) 20:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)
 * I would like too. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:36, 29 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Done CelestialWeevil (talk) 16:55, 29 December 2018 (UTC)

Lead

 * the eponymous EP made it onto the UK Indie Chart. → peak?
 * Done CelestialWeevil (talk) 20:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Could add something from the Background and Composition sections.
 * There are a couple of details from these sections (the source of the EP's title, the description of the music / its novelty). I'd happily add more; I just can't think of anything right now. If this is necessary, I'll come up with something. CelestialWeevil (talk) 20:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Do it, it will give the article more information just on the lead. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:36, 29 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Alright, it's done. <b style="color: #0061ff;">CelestialWeevil</b> (<b style="color: #6f6177;">talk</b>) 16:55, 29 December 2018 (UTC)

Background

 * Fine

Composition

 * Green's pummeling bass.[8][11][12][13] → no more than 3 sources in a row, spread them by separating with each sentence accordingly, I would do it but I don't have said books.
 * Done <b style="color: #0061ff;">CelestialWeevil</b> (<b style="color: #6f6177;">talk</b>) 20:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)
 * (either screamed or wailed) are sparse.[17][11] → switch the order of the references
 * Done <b style="color: #0061ff;">CelestialWeevil</b> (<b style="color: #6f6177;">talk</b>) 20:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)

Release

 * Isn't the release date October 9, 1989?
 * I wish we knew! There are, as far as I can see, no good references on when the EP was released; all we know is some time after July 1988 and before 1989. A couple of these sources give a month earlier than July, but that's probably wrong since the liner notes say it was finished being recorded in July. Oh well. <b style="color: #0061ff;">CelestialWeevil</b> (<b style="color: #6f6177;">talk</b>) 20:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Oh I see why you thought it was October 9, 1989. That reference is for their debut album, Streetcleaner. I was referencing the part where they said 'last year' in description of the EP. <b style="color: #0061ff;">CelestialWeevil</b> (<b style="color: #6f6177;">talk</b>) 20:50, 28 December 2018 (UTC)
 * My bad then. Thank you MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:39, 29 December 2018 (UTC)


 * Digby Pearson of Earache Records took notice.[24][25] Because Swordfish could not fulfill international demand, Earache acquired Godflesh and promised the group wider circulation → Digby Pearson of Earache Records took notice, and since Swordfish could not fulfill international demand, Earache acquired Godflesh and promised the group wider circulation.[24][25]
 * Thanks, done. <b style="color: #0061ff;">CelestialWeevil</b> (<b style="color: #6f6177;">talk</b>) 20:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)

Critical reception and legacy

 * In 1988, Simon Turner → The first, in 1988, Simon Turner
 * Done <b style="color: #0061ff;">CelestialWeevil</b> (<b style="color: #6f6177;">talk</b>) 20:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)

Track listing

 * Songwriters. If there only one or two put it above the track list saying "All tracks written by X and Y, except where noted.", add different songwriters if there are only 2/3 songs with different ones, otherwise remove the latter sentence.
 * Done <b style="color: #0061ff;">CelestialWeevil</b> (<b style="color: #6f6177;">talk</b>) 20:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Source for both editions?
 * Done <b style="color: #0061ff;">CelestialWeevil</b> (<b style="color: #6f6177;">talk</b>) 20:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Missing the standard edition. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:37, 29 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Whoops, sorry. Done now. <b style="color: #0061ff;">CelestialWeevil</b> (<b style="color: #6f6177;">talk</b>) 16:55, 29 December 2018 (UTC)

Personnel

 * Use
 * Done <b style="color: #0061ff;">CelestialWeevil</b> (<b style="color: #6f6177;">talk</b>) 20:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)

Charts

 * Fine

Overall

 * No major issues. Once you finish please let me know.


 * Thank you very much for the review! Please let me know if these corrections are adequate. <b style="color: #0061ff;">CelestialWeevil</b> (<b style="color: #6f6177;">talk</b>) 20:47, 28 December 2018 (UTC)


 * Alright, everything new has been addressed. Thanks again! <b style="color: #0061ff;">CelestialWeevil</b> (<b style="color: #6f6177;">talk</b>) 16:56, 29 December 2018 (UTC)
 * You welcome, gladly passing. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:14, 30 December 2018 (UTC)