Talk:Godzilla (1954 film)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 11:49, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

 * Move the short description to the top of the article (MOS:ORDER)
 * Add alt text to every image in the article (MOS:ALT).
 * "¥100 million (roughly $275,000)" – $275,000 now or in 1954?
 * Actually, the template JPY should be used to calculate inflation.
 * Add a hyphen between "longest running" (American English).
 * The plot section is 693 words so it passes MOS:FILMPLOT.
 * MOS:DUPLINK: radiation sickness, Daigo Fukuryū Maru, King Kong (1933 film), Eiji Tsuburaya, Akira Ifukube, Godzilla, King of the Monsters! , and Godzilla (2014 film).
 * When referring to the film, please use "film" or its title instead of "movie".
 * The word "stated" is used a lot and becomes repetitive. Replace some of its uses with "said".
 * "Mori approved the project in April 1954" – the cited source does not mention this.
 * "written three years prior" – prior to what? Please specify.
 * #Music does not cite any references.
 * "A week later, it was released nationwide on November 3, 1954." – is "a week later" necessary?
 * Per WP:FILMBOXOFFICE, avoid terminology such as "in the West".
 * Be consistent with Godzilla, King of the Monsters and Godzilla, King of the Monsters!.
 * Resolve the "citation needed" issue in #Reception.
 * Wikilink Owen Gleiberman, Peter Bradshaw, Desson Thomson, and Mick LaSalle.
 * Is the accolades table necessary? The information can easily be converted into prose.
 * Make sure all sources are properly cited with dates, authors, website names, and access dates.
 * That's all I could find in my review. Great work on the article. Ping me when you reply.
 * hey there! I added all the requirements above. I also added a Marketing section and added more content on the Music section, now titled "Music and Sound effects". I hope they meet GA standards. Armegon (talk) 00:31, 9 October 2021 (UTC)