Talk:Golf (1995 video game)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 14:52, 11 September 2019 (UTC)

Comments Short and sweet article, nothing major omitted, just the few concerns above so I'm putting it on hold. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 10:48, 12 September 2019 (UTC)
 * I'm not really loving the immediacy of the footnote for the alt-name of the game (particularly as it smashes into the italic text), would it be too harmful to put it at the end of the sentence?
 * I'm not really married to it either, though in my experience I tend to see it immediately after the name.
 * "within months of the Virtual Boy console's launch" this would be more meaningful to most of us if we knew when that actually was?
 * Nixed.
 * "It was developed and published..." the last "it" was the console.
 * Addressed.
 * " T&E Soft " is piped to a redirect back to itself.
 * Addressed.
 * "Gameplay screenshot." fragment, no need for the period.
 * Fixed caption.
 * "their last shots.[2][1]" numerical order.
 * Fixed.
 * "and published by T&E Soft in Japan and Nintendo in North America " say when.
 * Fixed.
 * " within months of the " can we be more specific?
 * Nixed.
 * "positive reception; the positive reception" repetitive.
 * Fixed.
 * "Allgame" -> "AllGame". And be consistent with whether you italicise it or not.
 * Fixed.
 * "year).[13][14][11][15] " numerical order.
 * Fixed.
 * What is ref 7?
 * Removed ref; it was originally just citing the game.
 * Don't overlink All(g/G)ame.
 * Fixed.
 * Should be all done now. Thank you for the prompt review! - Bryn (talk)  (contributions) 15:52, 12 September 2019 (UTC)
 * , no problem, I'll try to take another look tonight with a view to promoting it. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 16:50, 12 September 2019 (UTC)


 * Okay, I made a few tweaks as you'd perhaps missed or misunderstood a couple of my comments. I'm content that it's just about there now.  It's short and could always use expanding, but right now it's sufficient for me to promote. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 18:54, 12 September 2019 (UTC)