Talk:Good Mourning (Grey's Anatomy)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 04:42, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

Issues:


 * Image: Caption "An episodic screenshot displaying several physicians laughing at the death of their colleague". We know its a screenshot how about "physicians laugh at the death of their colleague"
 * ✅  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 16:56, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Infobox: Try to add production code to the infobox
 * ❌ I don't know what it is; or where to find it.  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 16:56, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: Link American television
 * ✅  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 16:56, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: Unneeded comma after Grey's Anatomy. Please remove.
 * ✅  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 16:56, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Lede: "It was written by Krista Vernoff, directed by Ed Ornelas, and aired on the American Broadcasting Company in the United States on September 24, 2010" → It was written by Krista Vernoff, and directed by Ed Ornelas. The episode was originally broadcast on the American Broadcasting Company (ABC) in the United States on September 24, 2012"
 * ✅  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 16:56, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Production: There is no need to note how long the episode ran for. It is already in the infobox. Not important to topic, that is why only should be in the infobox.
 * ✅  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 16:56, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Production: "The episode was broadcast with Dolby Digital sound, being aired in both standard and high-definition, and running for 43 minutes without commercials". All of that is unneeded. Please remove
 * ✅  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 16:56, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Reception: "Good Mourning" was originally broadcasted on September 24, 2009, on the American Broadcasting Company. → "Good Mourning" was originally broadcast on September 24, 2009, on the American Broadcasting Company (ABC) in the United States.
 * ✅  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 16:56, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Reception: Did most critics give "positive", "mixed", or "negative" reviews
 * ✅  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 16:56, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
 * References: TV.com source is unacceptable. Doesn't pass WP:GNG. Please remove.
 * ✅, It was part of the production info that was removed.  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 16:56, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
 * References: Ref. 6 - Medianet → ABC Medianet
 * ❌ The work is Medianet and the publisher is American Broadcasting Company.  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 16:56, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
 * References: AOL → AOL, Inc.
 * ✅  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 16:56, 3 July 2012 (UTC)

Good work. On hold. TBrandley 16:28, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Everything is done or has a comment.  TRLIJC19   (  talk  ) 16:56, 3 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Article will pass. TBrandley 02:11, 4 July 2012 (UTC)