Talk:Good Time (Inna song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 21:16, 2 September 2016 (UTC)

Any chance you'll get to this soon? Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:23, 8 September 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

 * The image is quite low-res, maybe a little too much? A better image perhaps?
 * ❌ As always, would it be possible for you to do it for me? I'm not very familiar with this.


 * The intro sentence should mention Party Never Ends and both albums should be linked


 * "Featuring the vocal collaboration" --> "Featuring the vocals"


 * I think "consumption" reads awkwardly


 * You should switch info on the video and reception around just like how it appears in the article


 * I wouldn't consider its peaks a "minor success"


 * "sitecom" --> "sitcom"


 * "Inna and Pitbull previously collaborated on a song called "All The Things", which was featured on the latter's 2013 extended play Meltdown.[2][3]" --> This is pretty trivial but could likely be reworded to be more encyclopedic and more useful among all of the article's content


 * "released simultaneously" --> simultaneously with what?


 * " 69 cent" --> "69 cents" and make sure you make note of that being USD currency


 * The seven sources back-to-back in the "Composition" section are quite overwhelming
 * ❌ Maybe they seem overwhelming at the first sight, but they cite different thing in this sentence; one of them cite its genre, one the lyrical message, etc...


 * MetroLyrics isn't a good source to use within an article


 * "song's "entertaining" lyrics "Say he ho..." --> "song's "entertaining" lyrics: "Say he ho..."


 * "Commercially, "Good Time" experienced minor success on European record charts. --> Same as what I mentioned in the lead


 * What country does the "Airplay 100" belong to?
 * ✅ there was "native", which made sure it was for Romania. But now, as I think about it, I changed it to "Romania's", as Pitbull's American


 * "spawn" --> "span"


 * Note A should be included in this section as a sentence instead of as a note, since the lead sentence is confusing to read


 * "lyrics video" --> generally called "lyric video"


 * "performing a choreography" --> "performing choreography"


 * "Website Hitfire" --> "Hitfire" (Look below for more)


 * "They went on" --> "The website went on"


 * Make a note that Inna was the one who sang "Endless"
 * ✅ Added a "her" before the song's name


 * In the references, "iTunes Store" should not be italicized
 * On hold to allow for fixes. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 23:55, 9 September 2016 (UTC).
 * @Carbrera: Thanks you so much for your review. I have done all your comments and even responded to some of them. Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:23, 10 September 2016 (UTC)
 * @Carbrera: Thanks you so much for your review. I have done all your comments and even responded to some of them. Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:23, 10 September 2016 (UTC)