Talk:Goodbye Horses/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:17, 8 October 2022 (UTC)

I will get on with this right away! --K. Peake 08:17, 8 October 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * The B-side is not sourced anywhere in the body
 * Added source. Let me know if it's alright. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:30, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Why are the genres ordered differently in the infobox from the body?
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Stylize as US instead of U.S.
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * The production credit needs to be written out in the body to be mentioned in the lead
 * Removed it from lead, it's not mentioned frequently in sources. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:30, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Start a new sentence at the song's 1988 release, mentioning that an extended version was released three years later
 * Good? ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "song whose lyrics were based" → "song, with lyrics that were based"
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "and it features androgynous vocals" → "and features androgynous vocals"
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Remove the instrumentation since this is too much detail for the lead
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Remove the director introduction to Jonathan Demme per above
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "he featured "Goodbye Horses" in his film" → "he featured the song in his crime comedy film," with the pipe
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "from his psychological horror film" → "of his psychological horror film,"
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "widely lauded for its use of the song." → "widely lauded for the usage."
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * ""Goodbye Horses" has since been used" → "Since this, the song has been used"
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)

Composition and writing

 * "only earthly and finite."" → "only earthly and finite"." on the audio sample text per MOS:QUOTE
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Remove the singer introduction to Q Lazzarus since that being in the lead is sufficient
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "after Q Lazzarus and the Resurrection disbanded" → "after the band disbanded" but this part is not sourced
 * ✅, and I'll figure out which source I used to verify this. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * The "dreamlike" quote is not sourced
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * [2] should solely be invoked at the end since a ref should only be used once in a sentence
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Wikilink snare drums
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * [10] should be invoked after snare drums instead per it sourcing info up to here
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Where are the drum pads sourced?
 * "...her androgynous vocal soars over murky pads, picked guitar, and a pounding snare." Taken from this ref. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "five senses from Hindu philosophy."" → "five senses from Hindu philosophy"."
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "had a "strangely" → "has a "strangely"
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "in its lyrics," → "in the lyrics,"
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  04:16, 13 October 2022 (UTC)

The Silence of the Lambs appearance

 * Pipe cult hit to Cult following on the img text
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Remove overly obvious wikilink on New York City
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Wikilink music video
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * It is only sourced that the song was played, not any demo(s)
 * Added source for demo tape. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "fuck me so hard,"" → "fuck me so hard"," per MOS:QUOTE
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Is all of the film synopsis really sourced?
 * ben ǝʇᴉɯ 05:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Add the release year of "Her Strut"
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)

Reception

 * The Under the Radar and Time Out pieces are not cited


 * "the best uses of songs in movies." → "the best usages of songs in films."
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:42, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "remarking that they become" → "remarking they become"
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:42, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "backwards in self-admiration."" → "backwards in self-admiration"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:42, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "in other media."" → "in other media"."
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:42, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "was "invariably associated with" the song." → "is "invariably associated" with the song."
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:42, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "and called the scene" → "and labeled the scene"
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:42, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "Vanity Fair's Tracy Moore wrote that the scene" → "Moore wrote that the scene"
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:42, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "as Q "warbles" → "as Q Lazzarus "warbles"
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:42, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Remove or replace /Film per WP:SELFPUB
 * How so? ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:42, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "from what he is."" → "from what he is"."
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:42, 13 October 2022 (UTC)

Other appearances

 * "Demme included "Goodbye Horses" on" → "Demme included the song on"
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:42, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Only the parody is sourced, not the dancing
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:42, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "It also appeared" → ""Goodbye Horses" also appeared"
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  05:42, 13 October 2022 (UTC)

Legacy

 * Maybe this could be merged with the below section and retitle that to Releases and legacy?
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  17:17, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "by IndieWire and The Telegraph" → "by IndieWire and The Daily Telegraph" with the wikilink
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  17:17, 13 October 2022 (UTC)

Releases and cover versions

 * Img looks good!
 * Thanks! ben ǝʇᴉɯ  17:14, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Add more info about the Fan Death and Harlem covers per WP:SONGCOVER; if not, remove them and wikilink Fan Death to itself if kept


 * The inclusion on The Hunter is not sourced
 * Added source for The Hunter. Is it okay? ben ǝʇᴉɯ  17:14, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Per WP:SONGCOVER, remove the Delta Mirror cover unless there is actual information and if kept, lowercase per MOS:THEMUSIC
 * Added more info. Is it alright? ben ǝʇᴉɯ  17:14, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "the single released by Mon Amie Records in 2013" → "the single, issued by Mon Amie Records in 2013,"
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  17:14, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Wikilink compilation album
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  17:14, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "in 2020 whose proceeds all went" → "in 2020, with proceeds all going"
 * ✅. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  17:14, 13 October 2022 (UTC)

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 10:23, 8 October 2022 (UTC)
 * I think I responded to everything. Had a few questions here and there. Let me know! ben ǝʇᴉɯ  17:27, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
 * I have done some copy editing for you, however /Film is a blog, making it unreliable. --K. Peake 09:29, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Any updates on this? --K. Peake 06:54, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Sorry about that. Removed the /Film ref. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  01:44, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
 * The reference is still invoked in the other appearances sub-section; fix this. --K. Peake 07:45, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Done! Sorry about that. ben ǝʇᴉɯ  13:51, 25 October 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, took some time but this has been cleaned up! --K. Peake 06:13, 26 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Psyche covered this song in 1995, and re-recorded it in 2009. it was subsequently released in 2012 on the renowned UK label Optimo for which a video was created that now has 3 million streams on YouTube, significantly more than any other version that came later. I have documents on the releases and they are easily found on Discogs, CD and vinyl as well as our YouTube channel and through various reviews and mentions on websites through the last 30 years. Unfortunately this history of Psyche has been removed from Wikipedia by later administrators. This is very unfortunate and creates a lack of trust on accuracy in Wikipedia. Which is certainly the intention of no one. I, Darrin Campbell Huss, singer and composer of the band Psyche (band) would truly appreciate help from the Wikipedia community in reinstating our contribution to the continuation of popularity of this song, as well as acknowledgement that our version was the first cover version. https://www.discogs.com/release/318559-Psyche-You-Ran-Away-Good-Bye-Horses Sincerely, Darrin www.psyche-hq.de Ghostchild (talk) 08:59, 28 November 2023 (UTC)[ reply]