Talk:Google Me (Kim Zolciak song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 20:21, 30 May 2022 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Fine

Lead

 * critics -> music critics and link to music journalism

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Background and release

 * "It was then scheduled to be released to iTunes for digital download and streaming on October 5, 2010" - sounds like it was canceled, needs to be re-written

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Music and lyrics

 * I see no point in the image given here as its footer it is the same as the first sentence in this section.


 * Because of copyvio's possible violations, let's trim Zolciak quote or rephrase it. See Earwig's Copyvio Detector.

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Critical reception

 * music critics ->link to music journalism


 * "and the song as a masterpiece." -> "and to the song as a masterpiece."

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Track listing

 * Remove, per one listing of the song is non-essential.

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Release history

 * The second date has the same references twice. Reference 13 and on the end of Note B, I would remove the former, since Note B already has those sources.

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Overall

 * On hold for seven days. Please let me know once you are done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 10:08, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
 * ≫  Lil- Unique1  -{ Talk  }- 12:58, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
 * The copyvio is still quite high; 40,5%. Try to use your own words, instead. I also made some small changes, see if you are ok with those. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:20, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
 * I've tried to fix that >> Lil-unique1  (  talk  ) — 18:39, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Good job! MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:33, 4 July 2022 (UTC)