Talk:Gottfried Schloemer/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:52, 7 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:52, 7 July 2021 (UTC)

Progress

 * Add a serial comma after "mechanical engineer".


 * "lived on the south" "lived in the south"


 * Add alt text and upright to every image.


 * "birthplace of first" "birthplace of the first"


 * "farm land" should be written as one word.


 * "a few of years" "a few years"


 * "Mid life" should be written as one word.


 * Add a comma after "In this buggy".


 * "home-made" "homemade"


 * "naptha" "naphtha"


 * "as a fuel" "as fuel"


 * "in the later part" - reword


 * "Schloemer with first" "Schloemer with the first"


 * Add a hyphen between "mass produce".


 * "horeless" - typo?


 * "Arizonia Republic" - typo?


 * Add a hyphen between "gasoline driven" (both times).


 * "achievement. " "achievement."


 * Remove the comma after "made in 1896".


 * Add a comma after "Schlöemer's death".


 * "furore" - typo?


 * Sort categories in alphabetical order.


 * All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:51, 8 July 2021 (UTC)