Talk:Government Hooker/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 17:42, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Review
Nothing else. 'til the charts are fixed, i'll put it on hold. — Hahc 21  19:19, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Lead
 * Minor edit: "has perform" >> "has performed"
 * Background
 * Minor edit: "conspired" >> "worked" (it's a song, not a terrorist plan)
 * Minor edit: "Herbert approbated the particular tune the most out of all of the tracks that Shadow played for him." >> "Herbert named the particular tune as the most out of all of the tracks that Shadow played for him."
 * Composition
 * Minor edit: "industrial" >> "industrial music"
 * Charts
 * Write "South Korea GAON International Chart" as title instead of "스트리밍 순위집계 : 온라인 음원 스트리밍 수" and add on the reference the week on which the song appeared, since the main link  returns only the latest chart, thus rendering unverifiable the position.
 * The (subscrition required) tag must be added to the "US Hot Dance/Electronic Digital Songs" chart position reference.
 * I believe everything is all in order. :) —DAP388 (talk) 19:54, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Mmm well, on the Gaon chart i was referring to this:
 * "South Korea GAON International Chart" (in Korean). Korea Music Content Industry Association. To properly see the chart position, select 2011 and 2011.05.22~2011.05.28. Retrieved June 20, 2012.
 * This way, anyone can verify the charts. And change the link to
 * I'll do it myself.

Well, since eveything has been fixed. I'll pass the article. — Hahc 21  20:09, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Verdict
— Hahc 21  20:10, 20 June 2012 (UTC)