Talk:Government of the Han dynasty/GA1

GA Review
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Hi, I will be reviewing this article, and will be posting my comment soon.— Chris!  c t 19:02, 26 March 2009 (UTC)
 * A very good read. I think this is nearly GA. Just have some minor points.

Commandery administration County administration Kingdoms, marquisates, and fiefs of princesses Conscripted soldiers and militias
 * "Official in Charge of Accounts who made annual reports to the imperial court on the Administrator's performance." - made -> submit - just think submit is a better word
 * "Hamlets" – it is linked to the Shakespeare play - just delink it will do
 * "A Han kingdom" - don't pipelink A
 * "... to work in the armed forces, ..." - work in sounds awkward, consider reword

I will pass it once these are done. Thanks for your time.— Chris!  c t 20:56, 26 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Awesome! I'm proud that you found so few mistakes/things needing rewording; I have fixed each of these (including a new hidden link for hamlet (place)). Thanks for reviewing the article!-- Pericles of Athens  Talk 21:14, 26 March 2009 (UTC)