Talk:Goytre

Goytre
Inflammation of the thyroid gland. Where did it go? NewbTopolis Rex (talk) 04:22, 11 December 2015 (UTC)

Problematic edits
This is in reply to 's comment on my user talk page.

As I described in my edit summary I reverted your edits because of "too many formatting errors and unsourced content". I am disappointed that you have recreated the same problems rather than discussing them here, please see BOLD, revert, discuss cycle.

My issues with your current version include:
 * "as you see on a sign as you enter the village"
 * this should be in a reference, not in the main text


 * "South Wales, Wales"
 * Either one or the other, not both. I prefer 'Wales'.


 * "(Goetre)"
 * By convention, this should follow the English name


 * "Situated on East Street and Goytre Road."
 * ungrammatical


 * "The Former"
 * Should be lower case: "The former".


 * "It closed down in late 2017. Also as of 2019 it has been put up for sale since its closure.
 * No source is provided and there is no good reason for this to be in bold text. You have separated the citation from the sentence.


 * "(English: Three Trees)"
 * No source. The origins of places names are often not what they seem at first sight.


 * "is a rural district"
 * We have said it is a village. Is it also a district?


 * "community"
 * Unsourced, and not listed in List of communities in Wales


 * "Bryn"
 * This links to a disambiguation page, you should have linked Bryn, Neath Port Talbot


 * Reference for the Goytre United F.C sentence
 * Do not cite Wikipedia in Wikipedia articles (see WP:NOTSOURCE). Moreover, a picture of the club's logo is of no use as a source.


 * Infobox
 * This should be positioned at the top right corner. Many editors would say that an article this small is better without an infobox.

Please answer or resolve these points, or I will revert again. Verbcatcher (talk) 20:02, 6 April 2020 (UTC)