Talk:Grace Macurdy/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:10, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  08:10, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a ✅
 * 1.b ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a ✅
 * 2.b ✅
 * 2.c ✅
 * 2.d ✅ (24.2% is highest, due to incidental parallels)
 * 3
 * 3.a ✅
 * 3.b ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a ✅
 * 6.b ✅
 * No DAB links ✅
 * No Dead links ✅

Prose Suggestions

 * Suggest you expand lede.

Academic

 * Macurdy was born in Robbinston, Maine, the daughter of Simon Angus Macurdy and Rebecca Thomson Macurdy. suggest you change this to either Macurdy was born in Robbinston, Maine, to Simon Angus Macurdy and Rebecca Thomson Macurdy. or Macurdy was born in Robbinston, Maine, and was the daughter of Simon Angus Macurdy and Rebecca Thomson Macurdy. ✅
 * Originally, it is clear that she patterned her work on Murray's suggest It is clear that she originally patterned her work on Murray's ✅

Reception

 * rather than attempting to follow the imitate the paths laid out by male scholars and suppress her own gender, established her own approach to academic work. suggest rather than attempting to follow the paths laid out by male scholars and suppress her own gender, established her own approach to academic work.✅
 * That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  14:37, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Brilliant, thank you for the review! I have adjusted the text accordingly. KateCook (talk) 21:43, 17 March 2018 (UTC)